FF: A Lifetime With You [Ch 6, Pg: 22] - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Lol

Post kardo next part :P
All will read both parts continuously :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -Afridimalikk-

<font color="#ff0066">:*</font>

<font color="#ff0066">i have the next part, but the reserved posts! -_- </font>



Omg, would you update then? I'm waitingg.. Please!

Btw, if Fairy reads this, what happened to your FF?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited both my comment on pg 2&3. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: BlackStar.



Omg, would you update then? I'm waitingg.. Please!

Btw, if Fairy reads this, what happened to your FF?

She trashed it :( silly girl -_-
Pagal ladki 😭
Edited by -Afridimalikk- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Edited both my comment on pg 2&3. 😳

😲 😊
Lemme go read, btw i made avis, posted, making more :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

I'm late! 😳

RESSS!

Edited.

OMG! That was so beautiful yet so hearbreaking. Just beautiful!

The start was so inncoent and adorable. The way he communicated with his grand daughter. It was so cute and adorable, just so sweet.

The Hareem part was just amazing. Him bonding with his daughter. Looking at it all from a father perspective was nice. Remembering every little thing about her. The love he had for her wa sso clearly evident, and the strong bond they share is admireable.

Its just really really beautiful, it makes you cry. Extremely well written, touches your heart.
Thank you SO much for posting this BFF! 🤗

.SilentPrincess

Aww really?
Lol yeah, all thanks to aic, the way she just made the bond was too good
Anytime hunnn 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Res 2
Edited.

ITS PERFECT! Its such a treat to read, the way he thinks back.
The past is perfect, Asher's description.

I loved their first encounter, the way he was openly staring at her and flirting with her. Awesome. I loved that particular scene, Khirad's shyness, hesitation and Asher's smirks and smiles... It was amazingg..
And Khirad... I'm exactly like that!! I hate such stuff too, I don't like to be the center of attetion.. It makes me very concious.
So a very real character and close to reality. 😳

The whole drinking part was just... UFF! 😳 Aise aur scenes hain kya.. 😍
And the egg part was hillarious, poor Khirad.. I actually felt bad for her.. bewajah daant parh gaiy, and he spoilt her dress. Just imagine. 😳
I felt so bad for her.. poor girl. I would do the exact same thing if I were in her place.

Looking forward to Asher's apology now.. I'm sure its going to be very sweet!😳

Amazingg upate.. Funny, romantic, and intense.. JUST FABULOUS! 😃

Update sooon! 😳

& Sorry for the delay... but you deserved it since you called me a bhens. 🤔

.SilentPrincess



BFF, i Lurve youuu
Haina? Yes, khirad IS very realistic :)
Ilyyy.
I will :$
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Chapter 2:
Ive editted Khirad's nickname to Khiru for now, i had to, im sorry, because someone else is supposed to call her Kheer 😳 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
I thought you posted CH.3 so I got so happy seeing the PM, but I guess not.:
😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Where's the next chapter?? 🤔

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