OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7) - Page 8

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PoochiePie

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was quite a heart-touching story..very very very well written.!⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

😭..good one!! but a very sad one.loved it.

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 12 years ago

I somehow loved the sad ending it seemed more perfect,eventhough I am only sucker for happy endings the way you wrote the OS,the sad ending just reminds us how precious life is,how unpredictable,if We love someone show them that why delay those feelings with guilt and sadness...you never know when you have to regret...and live with it...

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ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful os loved it.
I did like the first ending when she leaves him forever i don't know why it was more convincing to me.
But the epilogue is what i want for both of them i really would not like them to depart.
It was very very nice thanks.

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Sugi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb os 😊 U dedicated to Mitrashakti 👏 I remember her she'll be happy in heaven 😊

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Sarita

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Posted: 12 years ago

So beautiful.😊
Your writing is brilliant.
Felt the emotions through and through.

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 11 years ago

A beautiful dedication. Anything from the heart is pure and wonderful.

Amazing job. Thank you for writing this <3

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
A beautiful dedication. Anything from the heart is pure and wonderful.

Amazing job. Thank you for writing this <3

Thank you dear. 😊

I still feel sad when I read it ..

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namita11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Your stories may not be happy happy ones..but it always have hope in it

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awww I lovedddf it.

Was so scared that khushi might die but thankfully not lol

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