OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7)

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CrazzySassy4U

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow its beautiful , superb

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Just came across this and I simply loved it, brought tears to my eyes and it was simply breathtaking,

if there is ever a redemption track one of the ways I would have wanted it to be like this, felt right in every way, once again, loved it!

Edited by SaJanLuv14 - 12 years ago

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14
Just came across this and I simply loved it, brought tears to my eyes and it was simply breathtaking,
if there is ever a redemption track one of the ways I would have wanted it to be like this, felt right in every way, once again, loved it!

Thanks dear .. I never wanted Arnav to go down on his knees but I wanted him to realize ..

I was just too sad when I wrote it ..

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Jay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Beautifully written...👏

Awesome epilogue...

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome.

lovely story, heart touching 🤗 ❤️

but sorry to aks i can't undestand the last part, who was the star? And was Khushi safe or the star was Khushi? I'm little bit confused😕

btw I madly loved the first part, Khushi's faith in her husband, lovely.

Great job 👍🏼.

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SrijhaSobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

That was soo beautiful! I'm really becoming a fan of your stories! Quick question tho, I didn't understand who the star in the epilogue was... could you clarify that? Thnx

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Preet & Srijha!

Sorry for the conusion, 😳 in the first part Khushi was the star and that is how I intended to end the story. I could not spell out that she is gone.

The epilogue was solely written for those who did not want her to die .. so I twisted the plot a bit. There the star was Mitrashakti - to whom I dedicated this OS.

Thanks for liking it and all the sweet words! 😊

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago