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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awww wasn't that just cute arnav making jalebis for Khushi as her present with his kids help
The mall scene was endearing as well and the ending just perfect
Thanx for the pm

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

That's was just so full of 'jalebis' 😉 - I meant sweetness of course. Really enjoyed as well as your OS - Stargazing. Now need to read the SS. keep the good work

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..MorningStar..

@..MorningStar..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

omggg...u surprised me tooo...its ssooo beautiful...really..the last line got me surprised like hell...thank u for making me smile...

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awww.. thts so sweet & cute 😊

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Aww loved it especially the way she told him shes pregnant!
That was a awesome way of capturing his reaction!

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

such a cute os...
i enjoyed it...
:) :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

So very cute.. With a super cute surprise at the end.. 😍

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

ADORABLE !
And loved the last part...haha...she is pregnant again!...that was the cutest part and I could almost imagine the shock on Arnav's face!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

This was soo sweet !! The way she told him of her pregnancy is just too cute !! 😳 Loved the os. Please do PM me updates if you write more on ArHi 😳

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

thank you for the pm... loved the os for its realism and the sense of joy and humor that permeates it: trust khushi to capture the look of shocked surprise at her unexpected announcement 😊... time for another little one who'd love jalebies! you truly have a knack for story-writing 👏!

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