SS: CONFLICTING DESIRES -THD 2 Part 27 - Pg 158

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#921

Nice chapter di!

I liked the last part..!

Full on passionate and loving between ArHi..!

and then comes the shocker, Arnav forgives his dad and wants him back in RM. That's amazing!

However, this happened all of a sudden. I hoped you would have added 2-3 more parts and made it clear why Arnav wanted to leave Mallik Mansion and how he actually developed a real bonding with his dad. That would have added a more realistic effect.

I loved the way you ended this..! :)

The last bit when Arnav says you have 1 hr to pack up everything and till then he'll make love with Khushi..aww..he just can't get enough of her!

Beautiful SS..it was really a treat reading it..!

new FF? What's the name? and can we have a sneek peak of the story?

thanks for the pm

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sam88

@sam88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#922

u always come wth great ieads waiting for ur new ff

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@...Rapunzel...

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#923

you ended this ff? thatz sooo saaad😭😭😭

sooo unfair n plzzz di i want u to continue😃

n post ur new ff fast😛

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KKG_ASR

@KKG_ASR

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#924

hooow i love the ending ... New SS bring it on a sure it will also be an instant hit in forum... :)

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beccky

@beccky

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

cant believe this FF ended.. i never expected it to end so soon...

u didnt tell bout their future like u did before in some FF...

oh its so sad i wanted to knw more bout their life aftr marriage in RM and that too with their dad.. i used to love this FF m gng to miss it... atleast an epilogue is needed.. plz requesting u to write more! :P :)