Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#971

Hey Sona, Have been wanting to read an update for ROA since long.

Loved the initial description of how Khushi looked, and how it affected Arnav;s thoughts. They were both in perfect harmony with each other, their love shone in their actions, and their sensuality oozed from their bodies. Lovely narration of that part!

Then the passionate moments, these two are like two souls on bodies, two bodies on blaze. Again sensuality at its best.

My heart goes out to all the cancer victims who go through such pain every single day of their remaining life...It is painful and saddening that people even with such high spirits and will power often succumb to this cruel disease. Khushi's pain here made me realize how such pain affects everything they do in real life...having lost some close ones in my life, I quite understand that. BUt all you can do is hope and pray for the strength that they could have to endure all the treatments.

Wonderful update, Sona!

Thanks for the PM

Pankti

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#972

Hi!

I've been away from I-F a long time... couldn't comment at all...

BUT. The fact that you wrote (and yet another brilliant one, I might add) is inspiration enough to come back!! I feel like I've been waiting forever to read an update of ROA 😛

The entire chapter was amazingly well written. I think it's frankly astounding, how you can make me feel the frantic, unbearable beats of love (and desire) one minute, deep sorrow and frantic worry in the next.

But, to me, this line was just remarkable...

"Because every time she opened her eyes, announcing her arrival into his day, her stormy presence seemed to return him to life, injecting in him waves of buoyant energy."

It shows how essential she is to him, her survival, her consciousness, seems to be his life force.

👏

Thank you so much.

For updating, more than for sending me the PM.

~Arya~

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#973

that was a harsh wake up call! but loved it nonetheless.

thank you, for bringing the disease into the spotlight.

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Janet Grace George

@janetdennis

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#974

u're amazing...as always a lovely update and the way u pen down emotions is just brilliant...

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#975

Loved it Shona 🤗

The first dialogue ☺️ was yes but hehe, that was one beautiful update <3

For once I forgot the reality and I liked living in the dreams :) But 😒

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#976

The love Arnav feels, and then the pain of seeing Khushi through the tumor.An Emotional & Touching update.

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#977

Beautifully written update
Thanks for the pm

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#978

A beautifully written chapter. It is incredibly hard to describe the pain of those dealing with a possibly fatal disease. The pain that the caretaker feels is just as if not sometimes even more excruciating than that of the person suffering from the disease - especially in a situation where love is newly found and experienced and that love is suddenly joined by the fear of loss. There is honesty in your depiction of it.

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#979

Absolutely amazing update!

You really are a master of words 👏

Loved how you described Arnav's emotions.

It was beautiful <3

Great work dear 👏

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#980

Sigh!!!! That was again and beautiful update with a hint of sadness and love and fear !!!!!!!! Simply beautiful !!!!
The way you described the club scene was awesome !!!! 😳
Loved it and the lift scene !!!!!!
Arnav's emotions and fears are so beautifully described that I feel like crying while reading about him scared for Khushi and not knowing what to do !!!!
The way you described khushi's pain and Arnav's dillema was brilliant !!!!!
Omg !!! Finally the appointment is here !!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!