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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

awww!!! goshhh...he had always loved gardening!!!! 😊 loving it!!!!

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

ROFL...You do end your chapters with a bang. 'He always loved gardening'?...LOL...What an excuse Arnie!! Naughty boy...I am sure he wants to start flower plucking...ROFL...On a serious note, loved the intensity and sensitivity of the ArHi scenes. Beautiful job.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

smita, a lovely update as usual... nice to see the two slowly but steadily coming to an understanding... prefer this cautious avatar of khushi where she is willing to give arnav a second chance but is also firm about waiting and watching his future actions

the beginning so reminded me of today's scene where khushi places her finger against arnav's lips to shush him and he indicates with his eyes that he has a gift for her ☺️

also loved arnav teasing khushi... pray tell, was this "From now on, we are going all the way together."meant as a double entendre? [me and my gutter mind 😉!]

and these lines were sheer poetry : her lips smiled. His lips smiled to keep hers company. there is an intrinsic connection that neither can deny! good that he has realised the sanctity of the sindhoor and the mangalsutra... the moment khushi sees him everything else fades into the background and her focus is solely on him... that is true love

you are the master of understatement: His fingers itched to get to that flower. He had always loved gardening. arnav and his one-track mind 😆 those last two lines just slew me! how do you come up with these?

it would be fun to see some other male ogling her or paying her a harmless compliment, leaving arnav fuming 😡... and, knowing khushi, she might just decide to flirt so as to make arnav jealous! [remember her interactions with nk?] better yet, why not have arnav overhear some ladies discussing their sons as ideal grooms for khushi🤣? isn't that what happens at weddings?

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mandira1

@mandira1

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Fantastic updates!!!

Love the way you describe everything so elaborately, can actually picture everything out.

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salma

@Sallu-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

brilliant descriptions!

and i love the way u explain everything! lovely detail!

continue soon!

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

its really awesome...i read whole story in one go...i love ur writting style...i had loved ur ss:Burning in love tooo...hope ur SS complete 4 or 5 threads...