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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

I love this new Khushi!

Love her challenge towards Khushi!

Will La get pregnant after a month?

Can't wait for more

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elle22

@elle22

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Just read the 1st chapter...RIVETING is the word...what the hell Anne where do u get all these ideas from??? "Kaunsi chakki ka atta khati ho???" I am hooked on...😉

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elle22

@elle22

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Parallel Passions is being reviewed for publication...Yay!!!! You so deserve it!!!! Hope it all goes the way u want it to!!!!

Chapter 2:OMG all the sadistic stuff...its so heart wrenching to just read it...god only know how the women actually bear it. Saw "La vie en Rose" this weekend, it showed a similar situation and i felt like someone was twisting my guts.

The chapter was fab!!! Four people and four different views abt one thing. Love ur writing. 👏

Edited by elle22 - 13 years ago

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Loving this FF! So dark, intriguing, and engrossing :) You're doing an amazing job with the characters. My favorite part so far has to be the conversation between Arnav and Khushi in chapter 3; brilliant lines by Khushi! Loved how she shot him down with her final lines >:) Can't wait for the next update!

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

I dont know how I missed this post!!! Another FF from you...superb :)))...cant wait to read it.

Regarding your disclaimer, I share my thoughts/comments on most of your chapters for MS/PP, regardless of whether you PM me or not. I love your writing. I think I am qualified to read this FF.

Hence I will stalk. 😛

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Loved chapter 6 !!!!!!!!
The Arnav and lavanya part was amazing !!!!!!! Will she get pregnant ???
I can't believe Khushi actually said that to lavanya !!! But Om second thoughts she can !!!!! What is she going to do now ??
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Chapter 7 and 8 were brilliant !!!!! Loved them !!!!!! Loved the starting of chapter 7 !!!! The way lavanya was worried and Arnav comforted her !!!! Loved what he said "And, if she tries to, I'll make sure she lives to regret it."!!!! He really loves lavanya !!! Could understand why she was feeling insecure and who wouldnt after such a conversation !!!!
But in the end felt bad for Khushi !!! But atleast got to know something about her !!! So she loved Aman ????
Chapter 8 was also awesome !!! Why did she lie to payal ??
Omg she hit lavanya's Car????????? I didn't think she would do something like this !!!!!!!
Still Shyam and Anjali's relationship is a mystery !!!! Doesn't she like Shyam ????
Omg watss Arnav gonna do now ???? Sooo eager to read the next part !!!! Thnx sooo much for the pm !! Update soon !!!

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

have to say that i am stalking this FF and loving all 10 updates! it's amazingly written and as much as harsh and bold it may sound it's SO intriguing! great work! amazing!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Loved chapter 9 and 10 !!!!
Happy that nothing much happened to lavanya !!!! Soo payal is the nurse who helped lavanya !!!!
Shyam is such a sick man !!!!! Now I understand why anjali hates prostitutes !!!! Khushi behaves in such a way that you feel like hating her but can't stop liking her also !!!!
Chapter 10 was awesome !!!!! Loved how calm and composed Arnav was and thankfully he didn't make any rash decision !!!!!
What a last line !!!!!! Can't wait to read the next update !!!! Thnx sooo much for the pm !!! Update soon !!!