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winter.03

@winter.03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

this is a brilliant story, just caught up with all the chapters today :) You are a hell of a writer.

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Awesome chapters !!!! Both 11 and 12 !!!!
Arnav's actions were not justified, but what Khushi did was also not justified so I wont say anything on that !!!!!
Khushi had delusioned herself into believing that arnav will love her !!!
Really liked the payal and arnav part !!!
Omg !!! Aman works for Arnav !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx soo much for the pm !!! Update soon !!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Chowders 13,14 and 15 were brilliant !!!!!!
Loving how the story is shaping up !!!!!!! And we got to know a little bit more about Aman !!!!!!
Loving the story !!!!!!
Sorry for late and short replies !!! Having exams !!!
Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Loved the update !!!!!!
Loved lavanya and Arnav's story !!!!!!! Loving lavanya !!!!!! She is poles apart from what Khushi is !!!!!!
And I was surprised ad happy when is sway name in the FF !!!!
It's Maliha !!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

superb chapters 17, 18 and 19!!!!!!!!

loved it when khushi woke up to an empty suite !!!!!!

feel bad for NK !!!!! he is falling for khushi but she doesnt love him !!!

omg !!!! does she have the file???

what is with arnav, lavanya and cambridge ???? and who wasnt she supposed to meet ????

loved the khushi and payal part !!!! the way you showed khush not caring about arnav being married and is hell bent on destroying his marriage !!!!! and payal trying to explain !!!!

wonder what payal wants to talk to aman about !!! really liked the flashback which payal had !!!!!!!

Omg lavanya's pregnant !!!!!!! arnav why arent you picking up the phone ?? and omg wat is he doing ??????

he is giving her an option to stay with him for two months !!!!!!! is he planning something ???

cant wait to read more !!!! thnx for the pm !!!! update soon !!!!!

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Shivana

@SNR7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Chap 1: I mean seriously - I'm kinda stuck between deciding whether this is seriously ur baby or ur characteristic trademark for 'in ur face' for the 'though too holy 4 dis' readers 😆...me? I'm da one who just loves a good story to snuggle up with - so hit me wit it 😉!

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Shivana

@SNR7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Chap2: Wow! I like where u r going with this - corruption in men, women, law, love, lust, marriage...this is me at the end of ur fishing pole - hook, line & sinker 😉!

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

wow! I just caught up from chapter 5 to 23 and I am speechless

it is amazing!

the storyline is really different and unique

I love it!

Edited by angellovergirl - 13 years ago

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Firstly sooo sorry for the late comment but I'm going for a vacation so was busy packing !!!!
Loved the updates 20,21,22,23 !!!!!!!
My favourite among all was 24 because loved the way Arnav was pampering lavanya and taking her shopping, the nursery part and taking a day off from work !!!!!!
Feel bad for NK that Khushi is using him to get to Arnav !!!!!
ESP the part where she told him that Aman sold her to the brothel !!!!! I mean that can't be true or can it ????
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!