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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6


"Sir, these are the pictures." Akash said while handing Jack an envelope.

"Good." Jack smirked looking at the pictures.

"I knew he would follow her. Now, I have complete proof." Jack told himself while glancing over those pictures and he could very well recognise that the man next to her was the one who had followed her to the villa.

"What is his name? Any clue?" Jack questioned.

"His friends were calling him 'Rey'." Akash replied.

"Rey?" Jack gasped in utter shock.

"Is there something wrong sir?"

"No. Get me all the information about this man." Jack responded seriously. He just couldn't let his frustration out on his juniors. He decided to handle this matter his own way.

"Yes, sir." Akash replied and moved out of the cabin.

"Rey" Jack repeated his name in utter incomprehension.

………….

Kriya couldn't stop thinking about all the events that happened in the evening. She recollected how she had hurt that man and then Rey approached her and how he was worried about her.

She always knew that Rey felt something about her. He had even confessed his feelings in their first meeting. However, she had failed to realize how strongly he felt for her. It was no infatuation. No sudden attraction but something more.

Love

She smiled as the word made her feel complete. It was unbelievable that she had fallen for Rey. Not that he wasn't good looking or well-mannered but she wasn't good enough for him. Yes, she did kiss him and he kissed her back. But, that was just in the moment. She couldn't be practical about having any future with him.

She decided not to feel weak by these thoughts. She was on a mission and her life is completely different from Rey; a common man.

How can she fall for him when she clearly knew that no matter what they feel for each other, they can never be together?

For just a moment, she wanted to get purged of all the responsibilities which came up with being a secret agent; always alert and working. She can't have a personal life and of course not with a common man. She couldn't let her secrets out and risk her identity.

But, now it was even more difficult than she had imagined. She had gone too far. She was in love with him. But, she would never let him know about her feelings. That was the right thing to do.

But, what if he already knows how she felt? What if she just loses control when he is around?

No. She had to be strong. She can't let him make her weak. She can't let him cross all those barriers that she built around her for the sake of her new life in FBI.

Yes, she loved him but not more than her passion for working for FBI. And, she wouldn't let her feelings create any obstructions to her demanding job.

With this thought in mind, she closed her eyes gently trying her best to put all the thoughts of Rey aside. However, she ended up thinking about that passionate kiss, her first kiss.

How would it feel to kiss him again?

"Stop it! Focus!" she told herself.

Just a kiss. One more kiss won't cause any harm. And then just another kiss, a couple of kisses, to be precise.

She laughed at her trail of thoughts and where they were heading to. She hadn't ever felt like that for anyone.

"Stop acting so desperate!" she cursed herself under the breath.

Will he be thinking about me the same way?

"No!" she tried to settle her thoughts.

Should I call him?

"No!" her more responsible inner voice protested.

I think I should.

"No! It's too late." she tried to reason out with herself.

I'll just say thanks. I didn't say that in the evening; that was rude.

"When did you actually start caring about how rude you are at times?"

Just now. I am calling him and that's final.

"Argh!" she groaned as her inner desperate voice attempted to win.

She quickly dialled his number and put her one finger near the reject button still unsure if she should call him.

"Hi Kriya." he answered at the first ring.

"Umm….Hi." she replied feeling uneasy.

"Why are you still up? Take rest."

"Yeah, you too." she responded and was about to put the phone down when he interrupted.

"Don't hang up." he pleaded.

"Why?" she asked innocently.

"Don't you want to talk to me?" he teased.

"I do." she answered without thinking and regretted the very next moment for sounding so anxious.

"Do you want me to drop in your house through the window the way you did last night?"

"Huh?"

Before she could understand where all this was leading, he appeared right in front of her in her room.

Rey shot his crooked smile and his smile grew wider when she was lost in him. She still had her cell phone placed near her ear.

"You can put the phone down. I am right here!" he chuckled.

…………..

"Sir, I am sorry, we couldn't get any information about this man." Akash announced to a stunned Jack.

"No information? How is that possible?"

"It's as if his identity is kept secret. We couldn't trace anything."

"How can the FBI not be able to trace out?" Jack questioned disbelievingly.

"We have no idea."

"Listen, get me information about Rey who is Kriya's neighbour." Jack replied after brief moments of silence.

"Kriya's neighbour?"

"No questions Akash! Do as I ask you to."

"Okay, sir."

…………..

Kriya hesitantly put the phone down and looked at Rey approaching her.

"So, how is your ankle?"

"Yeah, it's fine." she answered and tried to get up from the bed but Rey stopped her.

"Take rest." he instructed.

"Rey, thanks." Kriya smiled genuinely.

"You are always welcome!" he replied playfully.

"Umm..so..you should go now." she said tentatively.

"Do you want me to go?"

She didn't know how to reply to this. True, she didn't want him to leave but her rational side protested asking her to maintain distance from him.

"Why did you call me Kriya?" Rey questioned not waiting for her response for the previous one.

"I wanted to talk to you about whatever happened in the evening."

"Go ahead."

"I mean the last bit." she said hesitantly and couldn't help herself think about the kiss for the umpteenth time.

"You mean, the kiss?" he grinned while she looked away.

"I don't want you to feel that there is a possibility that we can be something more than friends."

"Kriya, you love me and it's high time you realize that!"

"I don't!" she responded instantly.

He smiled and gave her a peck on her forehead.

"Good Night." he responded and was about to move out of the window when Kriya stopped him.

"Rey, we can never be more than friends!" she repeated trying to reassure her.

"It's time you understand what you feel about Me." he replied and before she could say anything he moved out through her window.

"I love you Rey but we don't have any future together!" she told herself and retired to bed.

…………

Rey was back in his room. He pulled out his cell phone and made a call.

"Akash, get me a copy of all the pictures you took of Kriya." Rey said.

"But sir, how did you…" he tried to question but Rey interrupted him.

"Do as I say and don't let Jack know anything about this. Am I clear?" Rey announced with an authority.

"Yes, sir." Akash replied and put the phone down.

………

"Sir, we couldn't get any information about Rey, Kriya's neighbour." Akash told Jack who was fuming with anger.

"You are good for nothing!" Jack answered and hit the table with his fist.

"Sir, I…" Akash tried to say something but Jack interrupted him.

"Get lost!" Jack smouldered.

Akash moved out the cabin immediately.

"Rey, I'll handle you tomorrow." Jack told himself.

………

Next Morning


Kriya got up from the bed and was still thinking about Rey when her doorbell rang.

She opened the door and was shocked to see the one person she had never expected.

"Jack! What the hell are you doing here?"



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ok, so how was it? Do hit the like tab and don't forget to leave your comments.

Vaishu and Yogini here's the much awaited update.

Hope you all got a clue about Rey. The next part is really important for the story and you'll know precisely who Rey actually is.


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Posted: 13 years ago
RES

UNRES 😳

OMG !!!😲
OMG !!
Rey also a FBI agent ?😲
he also knows Jack n Akash !!!
GOSH dis is hell mysterious !!😆
Really kuch samjh nhi aa rha aage kya hoga !!!
PLz Update soon !😳
Really wanna knoe evrythn !😳
LUv ya !❤️
-AASHI
Edited by aashi_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
unres
REY . . . . . Naam sunte hi jack ko jhatka lag gya . . . .
zaroor koi FBI level ki dushmani hogi inki . . . . . 🤢
Jisme jack rey ko sirf by name hi janta hai 😆
kriya's state is like---
*kuch to hua hai . . . . Kuch ho gya hai* 😛 poor gal . . . . . Hottie ka charm itna chal gaya hai ki her inner voice is having war wid her mind 😉
love vs FBI
ahan . . . Love . . . . She's in love wid him . . . . 🤗
I seriously LOL'ed on this:
Just a kiss. One more kiss won't cause any harm. And then just another kiss, a couple of kisses, to be precise. ☺️
ye to puri bigad gyi . . . . . 🤣
rey must be a very gud kisser na . . . . Tabhi to neeyat badal gyi 😍
now,,, all thanx to dat cheapster who made it possible so soon 🤣
hmmm . . . . Baat karni hai phone pe usse . . . . . Bahana bhi ready hai . . . Go on 😛
vo to phone vaise bhi haath me le ke khada tha . . . . . . . 😆 ab to shaq yakeen me badal gaya . . . . . Yahin hoga roz window pe . . . . 😉
zyada maza aata hai kya? 🤣
rey has got a new topic to tease her now . . . . 😛
yes . . . She loves u 😃
ye aakash to bahot chalu nikala . . . . 😲
idhar jack ki FBI me rehte huye hi baja raha hai . . . . . Vahan rey ke under kaam kar rha hai 🤔
zarur is taklu jack ko nikalvane ki planning hogi 🤣
rey ko kriya ki pics kyun chahiye . . . . . . 🤔
collage bana ke b'day gift karna hai 😆
& agar rey FBI me hi hai . . . . To main to bahot khush hun kriyaansh ke liye . . . . 🥳
meri taraf se inke shaadi ke cards chhap jayenge . . . . 😆
Edited by yogini64 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aah
dat was an awsum update and how does rey knows akash and jack sochna padega agla update😕😕😕😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey surbhi...is bar no chota comment...😉
do i have to say...?😛..ok i say it,it was AWESOME UPDATE..👏
story become more mysterious...love it...

jack to rey ke piche hath dho ke pad gaya hai...
so kriya is thinking about rey...sab kiss ka asar hai..😆
and she thinks to kiss him again...😍
finally she call him...
love the kriyansh convo..
ab kriya ki mystery reveal ho gai hai to rey becomes mysterious...😆
looks like he is also a FBI agent...just thinking..
update soon and reveal the mystery ASAP...


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey!!! dis tym i m really fast at comment 😃...good naa 😉

n hawww 😲 dis part is much awaited 4 mee too...huh!! bt u didn't mention me...bt nooo problm coz i m waiting 4 nxt part egarly...n yup i want nxt part of dis only 😊
nooo of ur 1st ff coz u knw na i m xcited 4 "BUBBLE BATH" 😉...hahahahahahahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣

okh!!! okh!!! coming too dis part nw
surbhiii!!!!!!!!!!!! its awsome sweetheart 😃
aww kria thnking abt rey...hayee!!!
n dat kiss tooo...actually i was laughting wen kria is thnking abt dere first kiss n den one more kiss n again kiss😳...hahahaha dat was da best part 🤣

n rey *tada* ek dam se tapka 😆
aww rey knws dat she loves him...haha okk sorry i knw dat ki he knws phele se hi

n jack...ahhh!!!! he is jerk
n wait u said na ki he only trust him
n i thnk dat him is gng to b apna rey
is i am rite na???

okhh!!! rey is FBI agent i m nt at all shocked coz i knw dat he is gng to b any agent n all

n u knw wht kal soch hi ri thi ki rey pkaa pkaa kria ka boss hoga...tbhi use itna kch pta h...look surbhi tere ff ne meri kya halat kr di h 😆

jack is come at kria's house...n dat jst to knw who is rey...n u knw wht mjhe bohat strng feeling aa ri h ki jack ne kbhi b phele rey ko dekha ni hoga...i mean aisa lg ra h ki rey jack n kria ka bos hoga n un dono ne hi phele ni dekha hoga rey ko...idk i m rite or wrong...its jst a wild guess

bt sweety i love da update
n u tooo...muhaaa :* :* :*
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Posted: 13 years ago
I couldn't get it.. Rey is also an FBI officer!! Then why doesn't Jack know anything about it?! After all Jack is also in FBI.. It's really mystrious!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hell first tym itna bada cmnt i never give any cmnt dat long on any ff/ss/os...hahahahaha *well done shaffy* 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome update...
Loved it kehna bahut chota hoga...i hope isse bada koi word hota...
Kria thinking about rey n she has already fell head over heals for rey...amazing...
Loved kria's fite with hre inner voice...so cute...
N she was thinking about kissing him again n again...😆
n rey is also an FBI officer of high rank...hope m rite coz i don't wanna b wrong...i want him 2 b FBI officer...
N if he is ...how come jack dosen't know about him...waise achaa hi hai...i don't like dat jack...good for nothing he is not aakash...jab dekho kria par shout karta rehta hai...
Loved kriyaansh's part...
Super awesome...
Rey came 2 her room from d window...aadat nai jaegi uski...😉
loved d way rey was asking kria 2 realise her feelings for him...super awesome...
N jack kria ke apartment pohounch gya...ab pakka kriyaansh ke beech MUs create ho jaegi...
Witing for next part...
Update soon...m desperately waiting 2 read d next part...
Luv u loads
xoxoxo

P.S.- i have read it twice already...pta nai ktni baar aur padhungi...m so addicted 2 both ur kriyaansh writ ups...😆
Edited by puja_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww very mysterious:-):-) loved it:-):-)

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