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Posted: 13 years ago
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Outstanding writing and story telling skills 👏👏👏


through all the updates, you have kept the tempo of the story and the characterization of the various people in your story remarkably consistent. That takes a tremendous amount of skill.

Bravo!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am a bit scared for Arnav now, so agree with his outburst. "Is it possible? Is it possible that so much happiness could belong to one man? I have Khushi. And now...now, I am to have this...I am to have this as well?! F**!"

Not sure why he would want to hold back this information at the moment, then again Arnav the businessman always has a reason to withhold. Is he going to take care of Khushi? That would be a stupid question to ask, he is going to smother her with love and care. Good for the couple who rarely do thing correctly and have done themselves a huge favor, the baby hopefully will strengthen their relationship further.

I am also glad Anjali and Yash may have a chance to mend their relationship status though it's all complicated now. A glimmer of hope is enough at times and Yash had better make good use of this situation.

Are you promising an interesting party, girl? Bring it on….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another thread. Congrats maya..

Awesum it was. . ...btw wot is ARNAV planning???

AnSh r becoming more and more interesting...luking forward to deir meeting ..

Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread Maya! :D

Awesome update! :D Arnav's words literally made me melt. And Yash understood his plight! Haha! As much as Arnav wants to hide this from Khushi I'm sure she'll have more than an inkling of what is happening even without a doctor's confirmation. And how she surmised that if he was happy, it meant bad news for her! Hahahaha.. Loved their conversation in the car! :D

Anjali and Yash! Mmm. I am definitely looking forward to this dinner party! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting for Arnav to tell her the news!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have lost the count of threads of this FF. so I'm just gonna say, congrats for the new thread 😉 I was so looking frwd to the way arnav will break the news to khushi but I guess waiting for another part will make it all the more sweeter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly CONGRATS on another well deserved thread!!

may many more follow!!!


secondly... when is he going to tell her???? and how??? god this excited me!


lastly... I am loving the story of Anjali and Yash... i am hoping she will be able to get her message across and their assumption that the attraction is only physical will change... slowly but surely!

She: There is no US.

He: There is. I'll see you tonight.


Love the story as always! THANK YOU for writing!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread!!👏
I wonder how Arnav is going to break the news of pregnancy to Khushi..I'm excited!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations for new thread!

Arnav's words oh Kushi's pregnancy was overwhelming.. Could any mad love his wife this much that the Baby becomes an overwhelming happiness for him! I'm so touched!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly, congratulations! New thread!
Secondly, I'm going to quote the lines I liked best from every update of yours from now on... So, for today-
"... but Yash felt something akin to warmth for this poor man struggling to take in his embarrassment of riches ..."👏
I have no idea where you perceive such lines from, but I read it about 10 times before moving on... It is BEAUTIFUL! True, this Raizada has everything but... *sigh*, he has never lived for or around such joys!
PS I hope he announces the "good news" at the dinner party! Shocking Mrs. Raizada herself!

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