SS : Yours Sincerely, Murder Part 18 (Conclusion)

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KSG_luv

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

OOH OOH OOH(Raising arm in the air and jumping up and down) CAN I GUESS CAN I GUESS?!? I think tht the lights of the house got off and so Khushi got scared!! OR MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE PAYAL IS ALREADY HOME and they try to surprise Khushi!!!! WAS I RIGHT!!!! 😃 Lol..this is driving me insane!!!!!!!! Lol

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mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

this is great. The notes are perfect.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

AWESOME UPDATE OMG DONT TELL ME THAT SHYAM GOT HER NOO HOPE ARNAV REACHES HOME IN TIME CANT WAIT TO READ MORE HOPE U UPDATE VERY VERY SOON THANKS FOR THE PM

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RNArnav93

@RNArnav93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Omg I love this !!!
The suspense is nerve wrecking !
Can't wait for next update ;)

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Oh my god

Murderer is orching him

Isn't Shyam

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yusam

@yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

OMG... WHAT SUSPENSE... CONT SOOON :P

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salma

@Sallu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Ooo...
Lovin it! The Intensity and anxiousness!
Very smoothly done!
Continue soon!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Hi love
this was a brilliantly written chapter. God I hope khushi is safe.
I love reading your stories, the suspense, the thrill, the excitement, it's all sooo, well exciting!
however, I couldn't help but notice how powerful shyam seems to be in all your stories! everyone hates shyam, I'm sure you do too but you still give his character a lot of power in all your stories, is it because you want his end to be extremely brutal and justified or do you just like how it makes the story more intense? I have nothing against his power honestly, the way you write about it is very believable but I'm just curious because it's something I've noticed in all the work I've f.read from you
lots of love
big fan
Sonia