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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Super duper like!!! Oh, I loved looking at the picture from Arnav's point of view! I really love how you're story fits in seamlessly with what they were showing in IPK a couple of days back. Totally realistic...they should have picked up on this track and none of the TRP drama would have happened...

And wow. The intrigue in here is overwhelming. And you accused me of being a tease. Look where you left off yourself! I'm dying to know what you've planned ahead! And yes- Buaji and Payal getting involved! Honestly, I've been dying to see the Buaji and Payal that supported Khushi through thick and thin back when the lucknow girls first landed in delhi back in the show, coz they sort of fizzled out afterwards. Also, loving the positive direction the story is heading towards, especially Arnav's belated realisation that there is another side to the story :)

I think I've mentioned this before, but no harm in repeating I guess- you have got Arnav and Khushi's characters down to the last letter. Lol, I can picture Arnav hiding behind a pillar eavesdropping :P Plus, I totally agree with you- helplessness is not an emotion ASR likes dealing with, and you really brought it out.

Well there is a lot more I could write, but I need to get back to economics 😭 Please update soon :) :) And hope you're feeling better xx

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

okay so we are finally using that famous we usually boast about eh arnav
i hope he finds out everything good thing he is keeping an eye on her now at least that creep will think twice before he tries to corner our khushi
go khushi go

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Amazing update...Specially the first part, those memories wr portrayed beautifully...
Loved it...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

wow, loved the language and expression used... arnav's each and every emotion just seems to come alive and jump out from the page!

😆 the image of arnav hiding behind a pillar eavesdrop in his wife was adorable... never expected to see the day when this would happen!

aww, khushi, always sensing arnav's presence 😍! also, thank god this khushi is slightly more sensible and is willing to have an ally, while arnav is actually using his brain for a change... the creep is still slimy!

loved the concluding sentences that reveal how truly smitten arnav is with his wife: The first part would not be hard, he knew, because, after all, she did hold his full attention subconsciously whenever she was present in his surroundings. The tougher part, he thought to himself wryly, would be to stop himself from losing his senses in her. 😳

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Omfggg, Arnav Will Out The Truth Naa ?! 😳

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

glad to know hes finally thinking and not letting himself believe what shyam wants him to believe!!

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Varsha...

Acha hua u scrapped me d link..

Enjoyed thoroughlly..

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Wow this is awesome. I hope you turn this into an FF an SS does not do this justice. Please PM me when the next part is up

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

I'm late, Ain't I? Sorry!

One thing, I like ur language and how u formatted each sentence. It's very different yet quite confident and strong. Keep it up dear!

Arnav hidden behind wall and heard of everything? Like a cheetah? Here now Shyam is the prey and I hope he attacks wisely.

Kushi's diplomatic skipping for answering Payal's questions shows how much she values them and their happiness.

Finally Arnav is realizing how seriously he misunderstood her.

Thanks for the PM.