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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

It's fabulous. Please continue with Arnav waking up.

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Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

I am spellbound and speechless, that how's brilliant this OS of yours is. 👏 Khushi's yearning so vividly and beautifully written. The aura of deep intense love your story created is just mind boggling.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay saying I loved it would be an understatement its something higher than love!

I loved all the little things you got them to do

him holding her hand even in front of family and when di was hugging him

her putting her head on his shoulder and then him carrying her upstairs to their room and their bed.

I feel sorry for Khushi and hope that once Arnav wakes up he consoles her and tells her he knows and trusts her

You could possibly turn this in to a little mini fic :P

how they overcome this hurdle and not let the misunderstanding become an end to their relationship.

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

brilliantly put! loved her reaction as he came in!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

A very nice continuation from Khushi's POV.

The confusion,the peace yet agitation in her heart. There was a lot of depth here. I especially liked the subtle hints about an emotionally mature Khushi.

It'll be like Barney's definition of awesome if you could do another continuation with Arnav's POV. No pressure but!

Edited by pgm7 - 13 years ago

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

varsha...

u are just getting better and better...

i love it!!!

seriouly make this into a ff or a ss atleast...

it was a treat to read khushis point of view..

Edited by anodaksgfan - 13 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

There is something so poignant about Khushi's POV!

And this one does full justice to it and some!

How well written. The little things Arnav does...not letting her go even when he hugs his Di - final acceptance of the importance of her in his life...giving her the place she deserves!

Outstanding!

And yes, I second it - A peep into Arnav's POV would be perfect..but no pressure, really!

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

You've created such a beautiful collage of past scenes and words--all culminating in this homecoming. Really cleverly done. I would love to see the morning scene...the awkwardness, the hesitation--but the new level of intimacy.

Maya

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Wowieee

Damn girl you can write I loved that!

Socute how they kept holding hands and she fell asleep on his shoulder

The little things like she watched him sleep made my heart skip a beat it was so cute! I loved it

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Oh My God! This was so beautiful!! 👏

The emotions, the rationalization of her mind against the blind hope of her heart- the tenderness that seemed to engulf her when she sees him sleeping holding her hand in his- the love with which she caresses his hair, the way she wants to live the moment with her Prince.

It was just... Wow!

The way you wrote it- it was all made so palpable!

Great- just Spiffingly fantastically Written! Keep up the good Work!!😃 And Thanks for the PM!