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Posted: 13 years ago
Di..! 😃
I really want to give you a hug for such an awesome part! 🤗
This was really long, thank you so much for making time for this between your exams..! :)
Right from the beginning, I was hooked to it.
I really appreciate all the dialogues, they are very effective and convincing.
Khushi and Arnav are trying their best to win over each other. The way Arnav asked her about her shopping was like a typical husband. Khushi's tactics to wear revealing night gowns to make Arnav go weak was definitely something to read! The way he controlled his feelings was remarkable. After all, he is ASR and such things can't make him weak.
It was adorable when they shared a blanket and Khushi snuggled closer making him forget everything else. She really has an effect on him. It was really cute when she talked about her previous boyfriends and that she kissed him, Arnav was so annoyed! :)
Both sleep together, cuddling to each other and last but not the least the way Devi Maiyaa was laughing and clearly suggested that they are perfect for each other was sweet.

Over all, a complete package!
Very well penned!
Thanks for the pm
Update asap!
All the best for your exams..! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it dear...it was freaking awsuuum...heheh arnav is jealous..lol..loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update !

Thanks for the PM ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Was rly awsome:):):)
cnt wait 4 the nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am seriously loving this! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the FF.. Different concept and so interesting.. Khushi is no less than Arnav.. 😆 One month and both of them have given each other tasks to be performed.. So damn interesting..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I enjoyed this!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good Luck for exams...I'm glad I've finished mine!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just found this FF, love it. They are both so funny! Perfect for each other. Please PM me when you update next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys, whenever I take a study break, something evil pops up in my mind, and I cant help it, so I decided to give you all a small teaser so the wait till June will be easier, the teaser is not in order!

Teaser:

"Khushi Singh Raizada,WHERE THE HELL ARE MY CLOTHES?"

"Will you stop screaming?"

"Just tell me what have you done with my wardrobe?"

"I have done nothing, there's a new cupboard coming today, so I put all your clothes on the bed, are you blind? Just turn around and you'll see THEM"

"Why do we need a new cupboard?"

"This one's so small to hold both are clothes"

"Urgh, fine just do whatever you want"

And with that said he headed towards to bed to pick his clothes for the day,

"Why are you getting dressed?"

"Why, have you taking a liking for my body, do you want me strut naked?"

"You're so full of yourself arent you Raizada?"

"You havent answered my question?"

"No, I havent taken a liking for your body"

"Wife, you're such a terrible liar"

"I am NOT LYING"

"Your blush tells me a whole different story"

"Urgh" Khushi's face was flushed with anger, and the only thought that ran in Arnav's mind was, she looked adorable with her pouting lips and srunched up nose, he made a mental note to annoy his wife more often.


And then his lips were on hers, as his arms caught hold of her waist and pulled her closer, her fingers found his hair, pulling him closer, and then just as it had started, it ended, Arnav rested his forhead against her's as Khushi said,

"Well, Raizada you arent so bad, a little more practice and you'll match up to my standards" and with that she pulled herelf out of his embrace and walked out his office leaving a very stunned Arnav behind.

Enjoy:)

Thanks for the comment's and LIKE:)

For pm's buddy me:)

Edited by Caroline_arhi - 13 years ago

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