FF: illumination in the darkness - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Thank you for ur PM farah.Nice update .Please continue soon.He started to care her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Amazing part:):)
Luvd it:):)
Arnav taking care of khushi!!!;)
U should continue...:):):)
Will b waiting for d next part:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
I'm sorry farah..what i meant by 'it sounds like twilight movie' was its a human-vamp love story..othr thn that,ua story hav no trait of twilight.my intentions was nt to hurt u or make u sad..do cntinue..its definitely good..and forgve me pls..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Irfana7

I'm sorry farah..what i meant by 'it sounds like twilight movie' was its a human-vamp love story..othr thn that,ua story hav no trait of twilight.my intentions was nt to hurt u or make u sad..do cntinue..its definitely good..and forgve me pls..

its okay irfana :)
i know i shouldnt have said that but i felt bad thats y i shared my feelings ..
sowwi if i hurt you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
omg wow this is so interesting 😃
read ur FF all in one go :)
so arnav is a vampire :O
wow this is such a different FF 😆
its sosoos interesting :)
continue soon nd add me to ur buddy list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
illumination in the darkness - part 5
Arnav: I could have leave but there must be someone to look after you, I can't leave you alone

Khushi: that's fine, I'm used to it

Arnav: stop this nonsense and get to your bed

Khushi: but you need to rest too

Arnav: I can settle myself on the sofa

Khushi: but'

Arnav: I want complete silence Khushi

Khushi: as you wish'

It was already one at night but she wasn't asleep yet. He saw her exchanging position time after time; from left to right and so on.

Arnav: I expect you should be asleep by now?

Khushi: I'm feeling thirsty so I can't sleep, can you get me a glass of water, please?

Arnav: your wish is my command, princess

Khushi: I'm not a princess

Arnav: you're no less than a princess

Khushi: you mean those picky and annoying types?

Arnav: ah ahn!! I mean the sweet ones

Khushi: thanks

She was blushing; her cheeks were as red as tomatoes

Arnav: I saw it

Khushi: saw what?

Arnav: I saw you blushing

Khushi: look if someone gives you a sweet compliment, obviously you would blush Na'

He approaches towards her holding a glass .He placed the glass on the table beside her bed and helps her get up. He offers her the glass of water.

Khushi: you are treating me like I'm suffering from a serious disease

Arnav: no matter it's a serious matter or not, but we should look after ourselves. Taking care of you is my duty, isn't that what friends are for?

Khushi: we are friends?

Arnav: aren't we?

She moves forward towards his ear and their cheeks were brush with each other's. Her lips have touched his ears with a whisper approaching: are we? He could feel them; they were watery and smelled like strawberry.

Arnav: hmm... Sweet...

Khushi: not as sweet as you'

Arnav: excuse me?

Khushi: goodnight

He gets hold of the glass and put it down on the table. He lends a helping hand with helping her lying down. He make track towards the sofa and position himself. Her lips were the last thing touched tonight.

When the sunrise in the morning, the first light of the ray shake the memory of her of last night. All the sweet moments they had spent together last night; the hug, the eye-lock moments and everything. She employ her sight towards the sofa, however she didn't saw him. Immediately afterwards, she heard a bang of the bathroom door; she quickly shut her eyes and dissemble to be sleeping. He came near her and saw her eyes shut.

Arnav: stop pretending, I know you are awake

Khushi: no I am not

Hearing her response, he burst into laughter.

Arnav: Khushi, you're unbelievable

___________________________________________________________________ guys i wrote about the copy of twilight thing. im so sorry i didnt wanted to hurt you guys . i just wanted to state out my point of view :( sorry once again
P.S this is a short update im telling in advance so dont be angry :P
Farah<3
Edited by arshi314 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
That was a short & nice update & I love the way he takes care of her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
nice update but very short... nyway loved it... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Hey amazing update :D
nd no dear u haven't copied it :D u've made it into ur own twist nd we love it :D especially me :D btw were glad tht u've at least told us this :) nd thnk u so much for da PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Sweet update.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it.
Aww Arnav is so sweet taking care of Khushi so well.
Looking forward to the next update.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃

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