IPKKND FF:Justice Comes At A Price[Epilogue Upd!] - Page 12

Originally posted by: Hunnybunny3

WOW!! Loved the last 2 chapters. You've definitely got a talent for suspense 👏 I can't wait to know the reason between Arnav and Khushi's animosity. The mystery regarding the murder is very well written. You've given everyone a reason to kill him but Khushi definitely knows more than she's letting on. I wonder who she's protecting?

Please put up chapter 4 soon and thanks for the pm.xx

Originally posted by: Krani

Alright, so I know I res'd previously. but I figured that I might as well comment on all three updates at once :D

Anyway, so coming to Chapter 1

Kinda funny how Laxmi is a human and not a goat hahahaha I was wondering while reading, is Laxmi the goat muttering to herself? What? And then I figured.

It was quite interesting start! You have definitely captured my attention!

Chapter 2

So I love how you are introducing each character through interviewing them. I absolutely love how each character has a back story, and every character has a motive as they could benefit from Shyam's death.

Chapter 3

Khushi and Arnav intrigue me. So this is a love-hate relationship here, but in this Arnav is convinced she is a gold digger.

And from teh previous part we have established that Khushi knows more than she is leading on.

Plus Malini's character's introduction is intriguing too. I love how you drop hints like how she is very good at concealing her emotions, and hence hiding what she is thinking.

Anyway, so far, I have 3 people short-listed for the murder:

1)NK - Arnav's friend. Might have had a hand to play in making Arnav hate Khushi, as your best friends can deeply influence the way you think of someone. Plus you had pointed out that he is quite shrewd, yes? Also Malini seemed a bit too anxious to see her fiance? Why?

2) Arnav - Could be that his reason for hating Khushi stems from the fact that he thought Shyam lusted after her? Hence Arnav hated Khushi, decided to kill Shyam to remove him as a thorn from Anjali's life before he could change his will and give things to Khushi. Plus you mentioned that Khushi supposedly "led him on".

3)Anjali - Well isn't it normally that the character who pretends to be the most hurt, the most vulnerable is the one who is behind the murder. Maybe money wasn't a priority for Anjali behind Shyam's murder. Maybe it was revenge as she knew that Shyam liked Khushi?

I am assuming that Shyam lusted after Khushi in my predictions. So I could be totally wrong! I am excited to read more and see how this unfolds! :D

~K