FF: Against All Odds - Thread 2 Link added page155

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Beautiful emotion conveyed between the siblings.

You write with perfect pacing.

I find myself flowing flowing flowing with the words.

Khushi's energy is good---lively but not overwhelmingly so.

Well done.

Maya

Quote

anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

wonderful update!!!!!!!

waiting for them to meet but ya i agree ekdum se u cant make them meet!!

and ditto...though i dont write much but wenever i do arnav comes so naturally to me and for khushi ive to think and think..lol..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Hi!

I am sorry for not commenting on the last part, I was out when u updated it, and then by the time I read it, u updated part three! 😊

Arnav admires Khushi's spirit, that's new, he's usually too egoistic to see the courage in Khushi!

I am loving the dynamic between nani and Arnav. Usually he is the head of the house, it's interesting to see him bend to someone else's wishes. Actually he did, now we have yet to see them interact.

Can't wait to see Khushi causing havoc on the poor guy, hope he's ASR😉

Loved it! Continue soon!😊

Quote

Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Awesome update !!!!!!!
Arnav hates Nani !!!!!!! 😲 and what happened in the past with Anjali and why did nani send Arnav away from his sister ????? So eager to know all this !!!!!!!! Loved the brother and sister part !!!!!!
The sisters part is too cute !!!!! Love their bonding !!!!!! Is Khushi going to do something stupid when the guests come to see her ??
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!

Quote

Preeti.

@-LiveMyLife-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Fabulous update! I loved reading it :D

Quote

namedx

@namedx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Fabulous update! I agree with the first poster, she belongs to Arnav - so she better reject that proposal!! Of course the rejection should be in true Khushi fashion 😉

Kudos x