ArHiFF:Ten things I hate about you#1**Completed**(Chp1-12)

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Thank you for the long update. It was very interesting and nicely written. I'm waiting for Khushi to get a clear head about her feelings; of course it will take time. Maybe spending time with Arnav will help her in doing that.

Loved the sensible Sneha.

There are off to Shimla. I'm very curious to know about their pasts.

Keep up the good work.

BTW - I L.O.V.E Shimla. It's the place to be! 😉

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Beautiful update. I cannot blame Shrey..it's only natural to feel jealous. But whatever. My loyalty will always be with Arnav...not just because he is Arnav, but because he genuinely seems to care about Khushi...waiting to see what happens in Shimla!

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ag0502

@ag0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

What happened in Simla long time ago

which make khushim nervous?

Hopefully got romantic moment

Thank you

Waiting

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

wow things sure arent going well for her are they
with this whole debacle between shrey and arnie with poor khushi in the middle of it
not helping her when she has more disturbing things to worry about
like going to shimla which sure has something to do with her past but what i wonder
what happened that she is so scared with even the name of the city
guess we shall find out soon huh
and the whole mess with arnie and shrey has to be solved too and soon right
well lets see what shimla brings to us

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Hey!

I understand that Shrey would be a little jealous. Fair enough. But for him to push Khushi away as he did and then to f**king say,

"I hope you thank him enough in Shimla." >>>

That was downright horrid and flipping wrong. Of all the things he said to her, this was the worst. Dick! If he isn't careful he'll lose her. Perhaps he already has ... who knows ... He doesn't deserve her. There is such a thing called trust. If there isn't trust in a relationship, sooner or later it'll fall to pieces if it hasn't already.

I'm glad Khushi has a kind and caring friend. Sneha is helping Khushi to open up her eyes a little more. Helping her see things from an outsiders point of view. Sneha is helping Khushi in realising that perhaps she has stronger feelings for Arnav.

I like that Arnav has noticed that Khushi doesn't seem to be herself. Very observant. Or perhaps he cares for her deeply to know when she is herself and when she is not. I'd like to think its the latter. Maybe even both.😆

Very well-written. As always 😃

Looking forward to the next part.

Beautiful. I hope Khushi is well cared for by Arnav.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

just read all the chapters
awesome story

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Loved the update.

Waiting to know Kushi's past.

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

tht was sooo good👍🏼

From d beginnin... Sneha- Khushi convo...i tel u if i was a character i 'd fit Sneha perfectly😆 Khushi s distress abt Shimla..her hurt for Shrey s words...i think when u know instinctively u r gonna loose something..u go mad...n shrey is just tht...

bn al tht agony she is worried of Arnav being upset n d small lsmile which creeped in when she spoke abt Arnav was wow scene...n d way Arnav was worried abt her bein so hapazard... These 2 are soo adorable...

Arnav u better realize how u ve fallen for this gal n how much!!

n Khushi just let ur heart do d talkin gal...

n car scene was dreamy ... i always wanted tht bn Arnav n Khushi...

Thank you🤗

Edited by ak_maggi - 12 years ago

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Dat was really amazing...
loved khushi's discription of arnav.. n i really admire d dialouge of sneha about arnav taking care of khushi.. but what is in her past that is hurting her so much.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#590

I'm so proud of you for updating quicker :) you're right that was a long update ill try and write long comment!!! First off that was wrong of Shrey to just blast off on her esp since she was already upset about the Shimla trip. Khushi did a good job in answering back to him. I was super happy her friend was there to support her and show her different sides of the situation. Khushi was able to let go in front of her:) I kind of knew it that Khushi would eventually go with Arnav no matter how bitter her past is. I think she should have told him what happend in Shimla god forbid her past comes back to haunt her! Looking forward to the next update:) thanks for the super long update!!