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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetap

o wat a sad and heart touching ff😭...both veer and saiba are in too much pain.😭...atleast u said it has happy ending which is giving some hope but cant see them in this pain...i too want to know the full story and how they both come together in end...please continue soon.

thx for liking my ff and i well try to post the first chapter tomorro hope you well like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting for tom update...thanks
Edited by geetap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story...n excellent start...👏
so veer n saiba already met with each other...
waiting for the flashback...to now the actual story behind their love hate-lovestory...
n do add me in your pm list n pm me next time too...
n one more thing pm to all rt-mc fans...then they will get to know about your story...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saiba007

its okay maybe its not that intersting but dont worry i had promiced myself that i well continue the story even if get only one reader but i got 2 so i am happy.😊


not two...three...count me too...😉😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me too is it is four now
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Vijay looked at his daughter waiting for her to start and the same time he wished he didn't asked the question afraid of what might he discover.

Everything took place 3 years ago pa when I was going to Canada for my studies saiba said.

Chapter 1

3 years ago.


Mumbai airport India. 2 families were standing at a airport door. A young girl and a boy both were saying bye to their families. There was big distance between the families and a lot of people were standing between them. Lucky for them.


Veeru just take care okay eat on time and study well don't forget to call as soon as you reach vishaka said worriedly hugging him.


Okay mas I well do everything you say don't worry said veer with grin touching his mom feet and hugging her again.

Take care bro I have asked sanjay to pick you he well be there on time okay said karan veer elder bro hugging him.

Okay just take care of the family and yourself said veer hugging his brother.


Veer turned to his father touched his feet.


Take care veer remember one thing you might be going to Canada for your studies but you are also taking the name and reputation of our family don't do anything that well dishonor our family name said sumer sing.


I promise dad I wont do anything that well make you feel ashamed of me said veer promisingly.

I trust you veer come here take care and make us proud said Sumer sing hugging him.

He let go of his dad and touched his feet again and said one last bye to his brother and turned to see his mom crying.

Ma please doesn't cry otherwise I won't be able to go said veer sadly.

Just come back soon said vishaka crying.

She hugged him tightly and then let go of him. Veer turn around to go inside but turned again and started waving to his family until he disappeared into the crowed.

...


Dee please come back soon I well miss you badly said Sara sadly.

A little girl was hugging her elder sister and crying.


Awe my angel I promise I well come back soon said saiba hugging her little sister don't cry okay.

She turn to her father touched his father's feet and hugged him.


Take care eat well and study well okay said Vijay holding his daughter cheeks in his hands and kissing her forehead.


Okay pa I well take care you to take care and take your medicine on time and take care of hush too okay said samba demandingly
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Okay my princess you better go and saiba your grand dad told me to tell you to remember everything he has said to you said Vijay anxiously.


Tell him I remember everything and not to worry saiba pledge.


Okay now go before you miss your flight Vijay said impatiently.


Okay pa take care okay and you too my angel take care yourself and pa okay said saiba gently.


Hugging both her sis and dad last time she waved at them at them until she vanished from the sight.


They didn't knew when they come back they well be 2 different people.
...

Veer and saiba both were going to Canada for their studies but destiny brought them together to walk on the same path but different destination. Both checked in at the same time took their boarding passes and headed to the waiting area.

Veer saw a few empty chairs in corner area and started go there. Saiba saw the same chairs which veer had seen they and headed towards there. Both walked for the same chairs they walked together side by side but not noticing each other they reached the chairs both putting their small shoulder bag down and sat.

2 chairs between them were left unoccupied. They sat for a while but started to get bored saiba picked up her bag took out her ipod and started to hear favorite songs while veer took out a drawing pad and pencil and look around him to see if he finds some thing worth sketching.

Veer kept looking around until he found a small baby in his mother arms playing. Veer smiled at them and started to make their sketch. Half hour later veer sketch was complete he looked at the sketch and grinned and got up started to make his way to the women with child.

Saiba looked around for some thing and suddenly she saw it a huge smile came on her lips.

Coffeee she cried in joy.

She got up and started to walk there just as veer was coming back saiba was going toward the same area where the women was sitting. veer eyes was fixed on his phone while saiba's eyes were fixed on the coffee machine. They were walking blindly to their destination they came near and near yet not looking on their path suddenly they collide with each other shoulders both of them spin around.
Saiba's ankle twisted and was about fall when veer got hold of her hand on time.
Saiba had closed her eyes thinking she was about to fall but when she felt a hand holding her wrist with great force she opened her eyes and saw a young handsome boy face. They looked at each other for some moments before saiba could ask or say some thing he tugged her towards himself and the second thing she knew she was in her arms.


All veer could do was stare at her having lost the ability to remember anything he just looked at her beautiful stunning eyes the rosy lips her face which was turning redder by the minute he had seen many and far beautiful faces but she so beautiful in her own way the eyes so confused and so full of questions her lips which wanted to say some thing but were silent like his own.

Saiba didn't break his gaze. All she wanted was just to look at him and wish the time could stop. He was stranger but why didn't he felt like one he was holding her around her waist while both of her hands were on his tough chest. She knew her blush wasn't hidden but she didn't make any attempt to hide either in first place. His eyes she had seen these eyes some where but where she failed to remember why did it felt so warm in his arms the warmth she was looking for so long.

Suddenly a voice spoke about a flight to Canada with the name Canada their day dream broke and they came to reality they broke apart. saiba was shocked at her behavior how can she let him hold her like that she looked up at him seeing the same shocked face like he might have seen on her.

Can't you watch where you are going saiba said angrily?

I can ask you the same said veer annoyingly.


Instead of apologizing to me your blaming me said saiba.


Apologies??? Yaw right you should apologies to me veer retorted.


Don't you have anything called manners how to speak to girls she said angrily.


I do have it but I don't think it's any use talking to you like that because I talk in manners if some one who has manners he said retorted.


Before saiba could answer a voice reminded them about their flight. Staring at each other for few seconds they turn and started walking towards their bags.
They picked their bags and headed towards their flight without looking at each other.
...


In airplane.


Saiba walked into the plane and saw an air hostess blocking her way.


Yes mam can i see you pass said the air hostess


yes sure here said saiba giving her the pass.


This way mam 3rd seat on 2nd row on your left said the air hostess

Thank you said saiba.


She went to her seat and saw that it was the seat next to the window. She moved to her seat and sat frantically.

Saiba was scared of heights and she preferred road then the sky when ever in India she used to travel she used go in car but since Canada was seven seas far she had no choice.

She closed eyes and remembered her mom and started praying. In few minutes veer came in and the the air hostess turned to him but just stared at him with open mouth.

Veer looked at the air hostess and grinned not only the air hostess but a few girls sitting on his right saw him and started giggling.


Excuse me said veer amused.

Yes I am sorry can I see your pass please said the air hostess sheepishly.

Sure here said veer giving her the pass.

2nd seat on 2nd row on the left said the air hostess blushingly.


Veer moved to the seat where the air hostess mentioned and saw girl holding her hands together in prayer he couldn't see her face because her hands were in front of her face and since her hair was open her hair had came front covering her face both sides.

Veer grinned and sat next to her he looked at her but she was so lost in her prayer that she didn't notice when he came and sat.

Few moments passed in silence when finally saiba opened her eyes and she turned to her left saw some one was sitting next to her but since the guy was looking at some one he had his back to her maybe she could ask him to change his seat with her making her mind.


Excuse me she said hopefully.


When he turned they both got shocked.


You both said at the same time.

They begin to stare at each other.

What are you doing here said veer confused?


I can ask you the same question she retorted


What do you do in airplane except travel from one country to other he said curtly?


I am aware of that but I think this also mean they take mentally disturb and manner less people from one country to other she said angrily.


Oh that's why you are here I am not surprised since you look like you can use some help he said appealingly.


Its you who needs help not me she said dismissively.

She turned around to face the window and he turned around to face his other side.

Moments pass by in silence when the time came for the flight to take off saiba became restless she felt her hands to be cold she rubbed them to keep them warm but it was no use. she could hear her heart starting to beat faster.

Veer who was listing to music with closed eyes didn't notice anything. He opened his eyes when saiba hand touched his hand slightly he turned his face angrily but the anger vanished in seeing her state.

Seeing her like that He understood what exactly was happening. He understood she was scared of heights since he had come one more person who had the phobia as well. he looked at her innocent face for a while and he smiled and decided even if she cant stand him he can be nice with her until she could reached where ever she was going. Why did I behave like that I am such an idiot he told himself.


Hi I am veer he said gently.


She turned to see him talking to her with eye brows raised.


What makes you think I want know your name she said surprisingly.


look I am sorry okay for everything we acted like a child for no reason so we both acted strange come on lets forget and forgive he said sweetly.


Slowly the plane begins to move but saiba didn't notice her attention was on veer.

She thought about if for a while he was right we both acted strange instead of thanking him for his help she behaved badly why she got confused but decided it was no use sulking about it so why not forget it.

Okay lets forget and forgive she said humbly.


Okay then let's pretend we are meeting for the first time I am veer he said offering his hand.


Hi veer I am saiba she said shaking hands.


The plane was ready to take off veer knew he had to do some thing before her attention goes back the plane.


Beautiful girl beautiful name he said mischievously the first thing that came to his mind.


Saiba cheeks suddenly got red.


Veer just stare at her having lost the ability to think about anything else. He controlled his emotions he had big task to do.


So snow white where are heading to veer asked coolly.


Snow white I think you short term memory loss veer I just told you my name is saiba she said blushing really hard and trying not smile.

You think so that's strange I didn't had it few seconds ago but then again I think it's your side effect snow white he said teasingly.

Saiba looked at him and she chuckled. The moment he saw her laugh out of no where she just got the feeling as if he knows her but that was impossible he had never seen her before.


You are quite flirt veer said saiba blushing.


That's me veer and besides who wont be with a girl like you sitting next me who wouldn't take the chances said veer sighed.

She didn't say anything but laughed.

Okay know stop killing me like that and tell me where you are going said veer innocently


Where do you think this plane is going she said?


As far as I know 2 places there is a stop at London and then in Canada he said.


Really we are stopping at London I didn't know that she said confused.


Really snow white is it my effect on you that you don't remember or you don't want tell he said raising the eyebrows


Veer there is no your effect on me and I really didn't know we were stopping at London my dad had brought the ticket and I didn't asked for any details she said seriously.


Veer suddenly alarmed looked at her his heart beat raised a little bit she didn't they were stopping at London but that means only one thing.

So you are going to Canada he asked excitedly.


Yes I am going to Canada she said softly


Suddenly an air hostess came saiba looked at her in confusion. The flight was about to take off and the passengers aren't suppose to get up from the chair but then how come she is out of her chair.

saiba turned around and saw the window it was closed with great effort she opened a little bit and the then shut it down quickly. She was in air the flight had taken off and she didn't even realize it how. unless veer had some thing to do with it and she turned looked at veer with confusion but she only saw him laughing.


Veer why are you laughing she asked confused


because snow white you were so scared before the flight had taken off and I decided to take your mind of that fear I made you busy in talk with me so that you can forgot that the flight was about to take off and now you look so confused as if some one has erased your memory of the last 1 hour he said laughing.

Saiba to start to laugh.


How did you know I am scared of heights she asked once she stopped laughing?


Veer stopped laughing and looked at her he suddenly became serious.


I just saw how restless and scared you were so I thought it might be the reason he said.

Well you were right I am scared of heights said saiba confessing.


Since when he asked


Since childhood she said.


So where are you going in Canada he asked hoping to hear what he wanted.


Toronto I have gotten admission in college there she said.


Veer felt as if his heart is dancing but he controlled himself from punching the air in happiness.


Really that's good what you studding he asked happily.


Science want be a doctor she said proudly.

Ooo doctor they well be really luck said veer teasingly.

They who said saiba confused.

The patients off course they well have a really beautiful doctor even if they won't be sick they well pretend to be just to see you said veer grinning.

Saiba turned red again and laughed.


Very funny veer she said smiling.


Was I hmmm but I was serious he said seriously.


I can see how serious you are said saiba giggling.


Which college are you going to veer asked little did he know his luck was with him and she was going to the same college he was.


Williams College of science and arts she said.

Veer could actually feel his heart doing bangra he didn't know why he was happy but he knew their meeting was special.

And you where are you going she asked.

I am not going where you are he said seriously.

Then where are you going she asked confused.

Ohh I am going to Canada Toronto and to Williams College of science and art he said innocently trying hard not burst out in laughter.

Saiba looked at him with eye brows raised.

That's where I am going I just told you said saiba with strait face.

really I forgot see snow white how your company is effecting me I am so lost in beauty that its making me forget everything you said how cruel of you he said innocently.

Saiba just gazed at him fro while fighting the laughter but finally she gave up and burst into laughter seeing that veer started to laugh too.

The people around them looked at them but smiled and turned back. Saiba was cheer full girl but this was the first time she laughed so hard after so many years.

Saiba turned to him seeing him laughing and couldn't take her eyes of him.

You have a very charming smile veer she said once she had control over laughter.


Thanks he said turning little red.


You are welcome prince charming she said teasingly.


How did you know I was a prince he asked serious?

What you are a prince she asked shockingly.

Veer again started to laugh seeing him laugh she understood he was teasing her.

Veer you are to much she said while laugh.

Just then the food trolley came with break fast and both were given the tray of food.

They eat in silence veer was hungry he started to eat as soon trolley left.
Saiba was hungry but she was missing her family a lot so she didn't felt like eating anything but remembering her dad orders she started to eat.
after the eating was finished saiba went to brush her teeth when she return she saw veer had closed his eyes and was asleep who looked so innocent and sweet saiba smiled at him and took her seat she was tired too but she never used to sleep while traveling no matter how long the journey was. She took out a book and her reading glasses started reading. Few minutes passed by when saiba felt some thing on her shoulder she turned and saw it was veer head since he was sleeping his head slided to her shoulder. She shook her head and smiled at him resumed her reading...

Edited by saiba007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am making progress now i have 4 readers thx guys for liking my ff... hope u guys like the ud.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i must say you are really a superb writer...👏
loved your discription,by god totally amazing...liked their way of fighting...😍
n the way u described their time passing session...gr8...😛
n veer is trying to divert her mind so she can't got scared while the airplane is taking off...lovely...😍
so both were going to same state,same city and in same collage...amazing...
eagerly waiting to know their story...but why i think that they had met with each other before...did they?...😕
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for ud and pm...hmm abt the update, wat to say it was so cute, complete opposite of the intro u gaved that was too sad. veer is so cute he helped saiba in forgetting her fears that was truely very cute, so they both going to sam e place so more of college masti to come i hope😊, over all awesome ud plz continue soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi!
Interesting prologue
Lovd the 1st part
Esp their interaction and how Veer's heart was dancing during their convo...
The way the airhostess stared at Veer...dat ws really funny...
Waiting to know their past thta has made such a great impact on their lives..
plz add me to ur Pm list
Upd8 soon

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