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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
That was a great chapter, loved seeing what it would be like if the shoe was on the other foot!!!! Excellent, loving this SS.

Thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wowww thts sch a different kind of a story!! luvd it 👏

i guess its Arnav's dream 😕

thnx so much for d PM 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Nice ff. lol, poor arnav. The guy had so much power before and now is being treated horribly, like, well, khushi. Cant wait to read the next parts!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Cant wait for castiel and khushi to give arnav a piece of their mind...this was sooo long overdue... Can u bring dean also somehow😉...n what is the dog's name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: chavvi16

okay has everyone had a personality swap or something
man that was fun to read
i love this ss

i think arnav is gonna regret his decision of leaving khushi
this is all castiel's doing right

thanx for pm waiting dor the next installment now


@red- Yeah 😳
@teal- Thank You! 🤗
@violet- He so will ;) and ofcourse Castiel who else? :D

Next update coming as soon as m done with the replies to you all 😳


Thanks Aanchal 🤗 Am glad you are reading ! 😳
Edited by TheWandmaker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ashred12

wonder wat happened...


Wonder if the next chap will clear things 😆 Okay m having doubts whether m able to deliver the whole plot properly 😕 Oh well hope next chap will do the needed 😳



Originally posted by: sashazmohit

wow THE regretion zeee

wanna read more


sadii!! 🤗 am so glad you are reading 😳 Updating in a while, Thank You! :D

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

Hey Zee
Wassup mate???
Remember me???
I won't blame u if you don't, i have disappeared like hell...
Anyways, just if in case u do remember me, hello again...

I was surprised to see u write an ArHi ff, like, everyone's crazy abt them these days (shhh! Including me)
And then i smacked my head, ofcourse, u are a SaJan lover, how could u miss IPK...

Dude, i love d serial, can't follow it at hostl, due to the exams, bt am glad, as i don't actually wanna see Khushi all cry n stuff, the production house really needs to get back Barun soon...

Then then then!
I am so loving this SS of urs, wow, i haven't seen supernatural yet, bt my frnds r crazy abt it..
So its on my to-do list for vacations...

I so loved the cross-over, Arnav needs a big time bang on his head, like seriously, can't he really not see Khushi's reality??
Castiel is classy, yes, i did google him..
I hope he knocks Arnav over his head n heart...
Waiting eagerly for ur next update...
The change of characters is interesting...
I guess Castiel has given everyone exactly the opposite characteristics, is it..
But i don't wanna guess, instead read more...
So make sure u update super soon...
And thank u so much for the pms...

Love
pooja.. :D


OMG Pooja! 😲 🤗 How can i forget you! First thing that comes to my mind is your FF My Untouched Desire! One of my Favs! :D You are right though! It's been ages!
Abt IPK L0L it's a craze! an obsession, and you got it right, m watching for San...just love her! 😳 True Khushi deserves all the happiness and not the pain, but San is just So good at these scenes that they become worth-watching! You have got exams coming- All the Best! I knw you'll do good! 😳
And regarding Supernatural, It's awesome! I love the brothers <3 Dean is my fav though 😆 Do WATCH it! :D :P

I felt Castiel could do the Job the best! His no-nonsense attitude can do Arnav a lot of good. Misha Collins is fab at his work :D
You caught the characters right, they are the exact opposite! :D am updating the next chapter in a jiffy. Thank you for your kind and generous review! 🤗 More than that it feels great to hear from you! 🤗 Take care, Love you 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Okay i will do this quick! No more quoting 😆 Yeah as you all are my readers, you MUST Know how lazy i am 🤣

@rubinahasan- Thank You Thank You ! 😳

@nb- I can imagine why you liked Anjali and Khushi 🤣 Thank You! am glad you are reading 🤗

@arhifrvr- Haha! Thanks ! :D

@mishti- I keep trying :) Thanks for appreciating my work :)

@Artemis - That's exactly the point ;) Thanks for reading :)

@9staroneserials- Yeah like an alternate reality isn't it ? :D Thanks for reading :)

@Rozy- Thanks a bunch dear, am glad you liked it :) IKR that's why i tagged the chapter as Unbelievable. Arnav says that a lot, his response to crazy, and this is heights of craziness 😆 I always thought it would be fun to write Arnav like that, well i got the golden chance through this FF! :D Now with Shyam that's something i didn't think much about! The upcoming chapter will be a shocker i think! :D

@flowers4u- Thank You! I try to keep the plots different from my previous work as it leads to repetition, glad u like my experiments ! 😆 😳

@barunroxx- What's happenin to my memory, i forgot ur name :( Sorry dear..thanks for the compliment, m simply overwhelmed :)

@Mudrika- Thank You! :D Wait for the next! Am hoping to have you fall off your chair 🤣 hoping i myt just end up crashing the whole thing 🤣

@anita- Thank You! am glad u liked it :)

@uniquebluerose- Your review is indeed unique, firstly thank you for appreciating my work, am glad you liked it so much! 😳 Now the sad part is i don't remember you :( See my memory is crappy! :| So we must have bonded over MJHT because that's the only show i have talked about- A Lot! 😆 Your words of appreciation are extremely kind and generous, though i don't think am that good, m not being modest, but rather honest, you see m an ardent HP fan :D So i know what you are comparing my work with, that's like a drop of water compared to an ocean!!

@Honkytonk- Thank You! I am glad u liked it :) Initially i was thinking of writing it as an alternate reality with a snap in two Arnav's, but then I got Castiel in the picture and have him do his Angel mojo 😆

@veena- Thanks dear! Hmm a dream! A good thought at that, you need to pat yourself at the back! :D Living with Khushi might rub off on Arnav leading to such dreams 😆 But it's Castiel's doing! 😳

@bmtdluver- You got it right! :D And Thank You! 🤗

@pri- thanks! 😳

@vrshn- Thanks ! :D

@Shweta- Yeah Castiel..not Khushi though 😆 Okay m not giving out anything! :P Dean ! :O m not planning on that, he's tough to write, i will see though. Reader's request sar aankhon par ! 😆 I didn't mention the dog's name as it's not important though if you wanna know it's Bruno :)
Edited by TheWandmaker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Chapter 3- Changes I Don't Like

Having spent the entire evening with his plants, while witnessing his family's weird behavior towards him and everything in particular, Arnav realized that they all weren't acting, it was simply not possible for everyone to play someone else with such conviction.

Mami had been working around the house on Buaji's orders, she was dressed in a simple cotton saree, and least bothered about the work she had to do, as if it was a day-to-day thing for her. She would often smile towards him but then get busy with her work. While Buaji kept hurling insults and taunts at him for standing all day by the plants.

Garima and Shashi seemed to be air-headed with their status and wealth. Khushi and Payal were nowhere to be seen, nor was Akash, he hadn't seen his Di as of yet. He wasn't in any hurry to see her either. He didn't know if he would be able to bear the changed her.

Remembering Castiel's words Arnav wondered whether all that had been true.

'That's what I am here for. You don't know people for who they really are, you don't treat them right and am here to teach you a lesson'

Maybe that's exactly what was happening with him. It was like everyone was living in their own world. Nobody cared for him now, not a single person had come to talk to him, Hell they all treated him like a servant, ordering him around. So was this the lesson Castiel wanted to give him? To be treated how he treated people. Particularly with Khushi, it was like they had swapped places... His stomach rumbled holding his attention, it was around 9 and he hadn't eaten anything since morning. He was hungry.

Having searched the Kitchen and the dining table Arnav realized that dinner hadn't been cooked today. Frustrated and annoyed he rested his head at the dining table.

'Sup Buddy!' greeted a jovial voice, slapping his back in a friendly manner. Arnav looked up to see Shyam getting seated next to him. 'Where have you been I was worried' There was no mistaking the genuine concern Shyam seemed to emanate as he waited for an answer.

'I was at a hotel, needed a break' Arnav replied rubbing his worn-out eyes, feeling exhausted.

'As if Anjali wasn't enough, Khushi adds to your misery' Shyam grimaced.

'You say her name as if you hate her' Arnav questioned.

'Hate her? I loathe her Arnav, you know that. What she did with you, anyone would, am just glad she listens to me, I have protected you guys from her wrath a million times by now…anyways did you have food?' he asked surprising Arnav further.

'No, there isn't any' Arnav answered studying Shyaam trying to make sense out of the situation.

'Meaning? You always cook food for yourself Arnav' Shyam replied sending waves of shock Arnav's way.

'Eh! Really?'

'Yeah buddy' Shyam replied confused. 'What's wrong with you? Something really bad happened or what? You have never disappeared like that before'

'No, Nothing'

'Oh well I will make something for you, wait here then we will talk'

Arnav's eyes widened as Shyam gave him a friendly smile and headed towards the kitchen.

'What crap?' Arnav wondered aloud, he simply couldn't tolerate this. No No NO this wasn't happening, Shyam his Best Buddy in this world. Hell NO! he thought literally banging his head at the table. He didn't realize when he fell asleep after that. Cheerful giggling voices woke him up from his slumber, he looked up to see Khushi and Payal enter the hall with shopping bags held by servants behind them. Khushi stayed while the rest headed off to their rooms. 'Hey NK' said Khushi in a coy voice on the phone.

Arnav felt as if the floor beneath him had been swept away. He had no other option but to stand and eavesdrop as she continued to speak.

'I know darling, but now Arnav is back so he will take care of everything, and we can have some time for ourselves'

She was silent for a long time with a silly smile plastered on her face. 'Looking forward to it, just don't come home yet, others wouldn't take it too well, I need some more time' there was a pause 'Okay sweetheart Good Night'

'Great!' Arnav spoke in deep sarcasm as he stepped towards her 'It's one thing that you treat me like crap but you are two-timing me!? I never thought you would stoop so low Khushi!'

'You have really lost it' Khushi shook her head staring at him in surprise.

'Just get out of my sight before I do something really harsh!' Arnav yelled.

'Nobody talks to me like that!' Khushi snapped.

'Well get used to it then!' he yelled back.

'You are crazy!' Khushi spat with indignation and headed upstairs.

'Arnav' spoke Shyam concerned as he held a tray laden with food in his hand.

Arnav grimaced and went to the dining table, he felt weak, he needed food now.

'What's wrong buddy' Shyaam asked once again concerned.

'Nothing am just hungry' Arnav sighed.

'I have never seen you this angry before, you are rarely angry' Shyam said. 'Infact you have been yelling all day'

Arnav couldn't comprehend how awkward could this conversation get. He was always angry! Not like the Arnav they think him to be, did that mean the Arnav they presumed him to be was his exact opposite! The thought itself was terrifying.

'What were you saying about Khushi adding to my misery earlier?' Arnav asked. Shyaam was the last person he would talk to in his world, but that was the deal this wasn't his world. He was somewhere else that much he had realized and well Shyaam seemed to be a good friend of the Arnav of this world.

'You hate Khushi, she hates you, for obvious reasons'

'I think my head would explode' Said Arnav as he gulped down a glass of water.

Khushi was never like that in his world. He didn't like this Khushi at all.

'You need to take rest buddy' Shyam sighed. 'Get better' he patted his back and left.

Arnav shuddered as he watched him go, this was a madhouse. A complete madhouse!


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A/N :Short compared to previous chapter i knw.. But next one will be huge..i promise, with bundles of ArHi treats. I am sure you all think it's time that Arnav gets back at Khushi ;)


Title to next chapter - Missing You


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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Haha :P
This is fun!! This is really a Madhouse!
But let Arnav suffer a bit!!
The concept is awsome!! Thanks for d PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Interesting. Can't wait to read next part. Thanks for the pm...

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