AbhIya FF : And I will be waiting-B4-[updtd. pg20] - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
u leave us in bigger awe each time u write...
and even bigger desire to read more...
Plsss Dear... we r lllooonggginggg for a long updates or frequent short ones...
Please make time for at least 1 small paragraph per week... plsss..
superb update.. cant wait to know wats in store...
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Posted: 13 years ago
What is Abhay turning into?? OMG he hurt Pia and he hurt himself/ And Abheer well I would love to punch him one moment he is charming the other moment devil one mom he is caring and the other selfish beast.
Wonderfully written 👏 Fabulous
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhay is seriously struck n damned by his own powers!!!!!!
I'd want pia to try to move on with someone random on her frndz urge,yeah i know she won't b able to TRY for long...But yup this is not a normal story to think that!!
Liked abheer whn he helped n advised pia the right thing probably...But still i'll be hating him in the next updates for sure...thanks to his won deeds!!
Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey poco
wow, this was so amazing⭐️
loved it
i cant believe what im reading about abhay...gosh i really think piya should take abheer's advice
btw, this is the 1st time i have actually liked abheer😲...i mean he's pure evil n scary, i enjoy his sarcasm but i love what he did for piya in this update
eagerly waiting for the next part
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago

Men's rest room. Mount College ( Dehradun ).

Abhay looked at himself in the mirror as he turned the tap on to wash off Piya's blood from his hands. The boys in the washroom had quietly sneaked out when Abhay had walked in like a gust of wind. They were just as wary of him as they used to be when he was new to the college - cold, coarse , harsh. He had changed for Piya ' he smiled, he wore colours , he helped people , he was disarming and charming. But now, it was better to take a u-turn as soon as you saw him coming.

Abhay looked at his face in the mirror with a blank expression ' not even a muscle moving in his face but his eyes looked as dark as a grey overcast sky threatening to rain. He had just wounded Piya . He didn't want to hurt her anymore . She loved him and he had broken her heart. That punishment was enough for her ' infact , for any human being , coming to think of it. There is no greater bleeding septic than a broken heart. Abhay washed his hands as Piya's blood left his hands and drained into the sink. He plucked off a tissue and wiped his hands. As he tossed the tissue into the waste bin, he looked at the hand sanitizer lying near the washbasin. He picked it up and rubbed it on his hands ' almost as he was trying to disentangle his hands from Piya's hair. Then, he looked at his hands and his jaw tightened.

Abhay ( smirking )- CLEAN.

Just then, the door swung open and Bikram walked in . He stopped in his tracks as Abhay saw his reflection in the washroom's mirror.

Abhay ( like a predator )- Hello, slayer. Welcome to Mount College , by the way.

Bikram ( rolling up his sleeves and coming to the washbasin to wash his hands )- A vampire should not be happy to see a slayer.

Abhay ( grins )- Why not? Bloodbath can be fun r, right? Happy hunting me' ( winks )' if you can.

Abhay begins to leave but Bikram takes two steps backwards and blocks Abhay's way keeping a gentle hand on his chest.

Bikram ( matter of factly )- You are just a mission for us because Daksh wants it. It's a clinical job for us ' but it may not be the case for you. You may lose everyone that you have . We will delete everyone one by one who can stand between you and us.

Abhay lifts Bikram's hand from his chest and puts it down, looking at him rather coldly.

Abhay ( strongly )- If people stand up for me and in my defence , its their emotional foolishness . Kill a 1000 people and try reaching me. Trust me, you will forget the counting after that.

Bikram raises an eye brow at him and Abhay nods at him . He walks out , leaving Bikram alone in the washroom.

Bikram ( washing his hands )- I should be talking to Daksh about this. This is not the Abhay we were trained to kill'.

Highway to Mussoorie.

Abheer is driving smoothly on the road, his mind preoccupied and his eyes on the road.Piya's head is resting against the window and she is looking out with a pensive expression. Misha has put music in her ears and is almost dozing off in the backseat. It looks like a normal drive until Abheer pulls the brakes so hard , that Piya would have crashed across the windshield , if it hadn't been for the seat belt. Misha almost falls on the gears , holding Abheer's arm to support herself.

Misha ( screams )- Are you insane? What was that??????????????

Piya ( rubbing her forehead ) ' Abheer! Who drives like that, dude?

Abheer ( grins at them )- I am not your driver and I was getting bored behaving like one. Snap out of your dreamworlds and entertain me' ( looks at Misha's fair hand on his arm )' and then, you blame my hormones for being hyperactive!

The way he says it and his green concentric circles so close to her face , Misha becomes zonked for a few seconds , but then, she instantly leaves his arm and sits in the backseat , regaining her composure .

Misha ( defensively )- Abheer , in case , you have forgotten, we two are not friends with you. It's a FAVOUR that we are doing for you because of my father.

Piya ( drinking water )- Just drive, Abheer. We all can't even pretend to be friends.

Abheer( rolls his eyes )- Why are you human-beings so melodramatic? I just said entertain me , and am not telling you to be friends with me. Like seriously. Friends ? Us? I am way too hot to even sit next to you.

Misha ( taunts him )- Then, why didn't you bring a bevy of belly dancers to entertain you?

Abheer ( laughs )- I don't mind your fair belly either. It looks pretty smooth to me. Say what?

Misha's jaw falls open in embarrassment and his guts as he looks at her through the rear view mirror ' she looks away , not wanting to look at his hot greens and complicating the situation furthermore.

Abheer ( shakes his head )- Anyway, so, Piya, how about having a healthy conversation , hmmm? You belong to Mussoorie ,right? I mean, the convent you were brought up in is there.

Piya ( nods )- Yeah. 18 years in Mussoorie until Mount College happened.

Abheer ( taking a right )- How old were you when you were sent to that orphanage?

Piya ( looks at him )- 10. Why?

Abheer ( grins )- Just curious. What happened?... ( fakes concern)' I mean, what happened to your parents?

Misha ( butting in)- People have hurtful memories, Abheer. Can't you just shut up, man?

Abheer ( shrugs his shoulders )- No, I cannot. You didn't seal my lips with yours Not my fault.

Misha ( sits back )- Disgusting.

Abheer ( smirks )- No. Enticing. Admit it'.. ( looks at Piya)'. Awww, baby. You really need to relax, okay? Tragedy is a part of life, you know'..Hungry?

TO BE CONTINUED''''''''''''''.

Edited by TheBlackJaguar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
one more update? made my dil khush ;D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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"CLEAN" Abhay hmmm wonder for how long. He is getting consumed I guess faster than anyone thought Poor Abhiya 😭

Now Abheer he is well gonna ruin evrything I wish to shout at Misha and Pia to run but how long and how far?? This is getting darker and darker loving it
Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣Ughs!!love this update but i should feel like hitting abheer 🤣 🤣i m finding abheer more comic than dark 🤣he was the limelight👍🏼
and thanks for giving sadi ka pehle fast update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
whoa awesome update. abheer is surprise me again. why cant i hate him and not love him to.. opps abhay is turning something dangerous. but still feel love for pia. i think her love only will cure him in future. at least i expected that. but what is abheer plan is so in sense sometime. good in handled situation but at the same time so evil
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW WOW WOW Di..!!! Thank you for the double dhamaaka..!!!
both the updates were as BRILLIANT as ever..!!!
too good..!!! loved them both..!
Abhay getting more and more grey hun..??? whatever comes.. he won't be able to keep himself away from Piya for long..!
that was a role reversal.. Abhay hurting Piya and Abheer healing her..!

Di.. one request.. don't disappear for two-two months re.. update more frequently..! please...

I take this double dhamaaka as a friendship day gift.. thank you so much..!! 🤗

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