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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amaznig concept and pm me when u update plz

thnkyou 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: aditi061

Awesome update... Rey couldn't burn kria's pic... My heart started crying seeing his condition...

thnx fr readng n appreciatng r wrk 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey awesum update dear..nd thanx for d pm..loved sharon's pov...

glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really awesome
loved it...
i loved each n every line of it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazysky

it was really awesome
loved it...
i loved each n every line of it

thnx a lot for readin and appreciatin...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

wen u updating next////////////

working on it...i vl try my bst to update it soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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surely..take ur time...and surprise us wid a bang on update...wud be waiting for it dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

surely..take ur time...and surprise us wid a bang on update...wud be waiting for it dear...😃

we hope u'l like our surprise..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
here is the nxt part..hope u all wud like it..😃

chapter 3:

It was a lovely morning with the rising sun in a Sharon's garden. Swayam walked towards Sharon and with each step that he put forward, Sharon's heartbeats continuously increased. She stood there still, unable to say anything.. unable to do anything.. unable to react. She didn't knew what was going on, why her heartbeats were so fast or why suddenly she was so much attracted to Swayam. But the one thing which she knew was that all was going well' Swayam was now only some foots away from him.. her heart at an unimaginable pace. The two lovely curves in Swayam's cheek were again doing miracles to Sharon.. butterflies started flying in her stomach. Sharon loved that smile and was completely mad over it.. yet she never accepted it. His shiny black hair continuously came on his face and he repeatedly shook his head to prevent them from entering his eyes. He came and stood just before Sharon and in no time moved his left hand out of jeans pocket and put it across her perfect slim waist. Then he gave a slight jerk to Sharon pulling her nearer to him.. their faces just a few inches away. He brought forward his right hand and put it below her chin, lifting it slowly. Then he took it near to her face, put a strand of hair behind her ears and then softly touched her left cheeks. She closed her eyes as a chill ran through her body making her have goose bumps. He then lifted his left hand from Sharon's waist and making an encircling motion around her gentle lips.. Sharon led out an inaudible sigh. He brought his head forward.. the distance between their lips remaining less than an inch. And just when the two lips were about to meet, Swayam started saying something to her.. "Sharon.. Sharon.. get up Sharon its already late..!!" Sharon- "what??...huh??..what's going on'" And then suddenly Swayam changed into rey. She rubbed her eyes and found herself in her room instead of the garden and then she realized that it was a dream.. well.. a lovely dream indeed..!! She gets up and stands in front of the window.

Sharon- ohh rey..tum kab aye??...sry I was still sleepin.

Rey- hmm..no need to say sry for I believe you were seeing something extremely pleasant...hmm??...

Sharon starts blushing and looks out of the window.

Sharon- nai rey aisa kuch ni hai..it was just a normal dream..just a regular one..

Rey- haan..shayad islie tum sote waqt utna smile kar rhi thi aor ab itna blush kr rhi ho..??..

Sharon- arre main kahan blush kar rhi hoon rey.. m not blushin..

She turns towards rey and tries to put on a serious face.. but fails to do so.

Rey- look at yourself Sharon.. you are completely pink.. wow... Swayam ko dream me dekha kya??...

Sharon puts both her hands on her face covering it.

Rey- ohh my god.. so you certainly have haan..!! awe.. you look so cute when you blush Sharon..!!

He puts her hand away from her face and pulls her cheeks.

Rey- awe.. you are so cute..!!

Sharon;..rey ..stop it..it hurts..*still blushing*

Rey :Sharon..bt mujhe mazaa aa raha h *laughs*

sharon hits him with her pillow..he in return does d same..n they hv a cute pillow figh till they realized they to reach college in abt an hour n sharon had jst got up

Sharon :rey!!!!!...only one hour left ..hato ,i have to get ready fr college..
Rey ;u dun need to do all d make up n ol..u alwaz luk pretty..
Sharon: awww..hw cute..itna pyaar kha se aaya??*smile*
Rey:tum makeup me i jaaao na jao..swayam vl stl admire you...
Sharon:*blushing*
Rey; ab kya kare aandha h bechara.."love is blind"..he says n laughs
Sharon:rey rey..tum na..get out of my room!!!
Rey: aacha baba thk..ab aor mazak nhi..get ready fast,i am waitng for you in d living room
Sharon:okay..n she goes to d bathroon n rey goes to d living room

Aftr sumtym sharon cumes n they leave for college
everybody in canteen except swayam..
sharon rey arrive..they join d gang

sharon noticed dat swayam was not der..her eyes constantly lukng at d enterance f d canteen
Sharon(voiceover):abhi tak toh aa jata h ..aaj kya ho gaya...

Rey notices this n an a evil grin on his face

Rey:Sharon..kya hua kisi ko dhund rhe ho??..*evil smile*
Sharon:mai..mai nhi .mai kise dhundoge..sab toh yanha h.. n luks down
Vishakha:bas ye swayam nhi h yanha pr..kaha raha gaya dude..
Sharon blushes on hearing his name..rey notices
Rey:ooo...swayam..ha vo nhi h yanha pe..sharon tumhe pata h vo kanha h..
everybody lukng at hr..
Sharon:mujhe..mujhe kaise pata hoga...
Rey:i mean ..tum CS ho vo ACS h so i thot tumhe pata hoga..
everybodybck to normal
Sharon: nhi mujhe nhi pata
She makes an angry face n rey smiles..nobody notice this

Finally our majnu enters..
sharon sees this n smiles to herself

Swayam:sorry guyzz..actually mera car kharab ho gaya tha so got late
Ne:okay it is..hm sb tmhara hi intezaar kr rhe the..swayam smiles
Sharon :chalo phuch toh gaya..hmm he luks so cute wen he smiles :she spoke softly noby heard it except rey who ws sittng beside her
Rey:kch kaha tumne sharon??
Sharon(voice over):maine toh dhere se bola tha bt isne kaha se sun liya . luks at
Rey..Rey gives an evil smile
Sharon: nah ..nthng..
Swayam lukd at her,she was ws lost in his eyes ...HAWA HAWA LOOK LOOK
REy:ahem ahem..he coughs loudly n brng bck d overs bck to earth
Sharon was blushing..n Swayam was confused
Sharon :guyzz..bht mazak masti ho gaya lets go to d rehearsal hall ..charity event ke baare discuss karna h
she leaves n other follow..swayam n rey left..swayam stl confused
Swayam: Rey,Sharon ko kya hua??..aise kyu smile kr rhe h???
Rey*smile*: hmm tujhe pata chal jaega..ab chale mr. loverboy..nhi toh pakka late phuchne le liye maregi!! n they laugh


In the rehearsal hall:

Everyone is present except tani. They are discussing about the charity event when shivam enters.

Shivam- hey guys'

Nilesh- 2 yahaan kya kr ra h??..

Shivam- actually I also wanted 2 take part in the charity event. Of course.. only if u guys allow..

Vicky- aor 2mko aisa kyu lagta h ki we wil allow u'???

Rey- shivam..just leave or else 2mko humlog leave krne k layak ni chodene..

Shivam- guys I know u don't like me..but plz trust me..i really wanna be a part of dis clg.

Vicky- pichli baar jab kissine tujhpar trust kia tha toh result na sirf hum sab ne dekha..,par hum bhugte bhi.

Rey- just leave shivam..

Shivam- okay..

Shivam turns around when he sees tani for the first time. She enters startled and confused. She was breathing heavily and he cud hear it even from a distance. He cud even hear her heartbeats which was like a soothing music for him. Her hair was all over face and as she breath. Her hair moved in a to and fro motion across her face. She removed the hair from her face and tucked it behind her ears. They were in a continuous struggle to cum forth and touch her gentle face but she didn't let them. Her eyes were now visible and they shown brightly from their position.. below her perfectly made brows and above her gentle pink lips. Shivam looked deep into hr eyes and found mesmerized by her beauty. He had flirted with many girls but this girl was not 1 of those with whom he wanted to flirt ..he wanted to spend his entire life with her' And den she spoke.."hii every1"..her voice seemed to be a bird's chirp to his ears He just kept looking at her as if trapped by her beauty. He couldn't move nor cud he say anything.. as if hypnotized by her.. He thought he was dreaming but den he thought .."no..i can't even dream of sum1 like her. She seems to be an angel.. called down from heaven just for me.. although I know that I m not good enough for her. But this can't be d reality too.. can it??..Of course not.. No girl can be as beautiful as her..!!" He was brought back into reality by swayam's voice but he kept looking at her.

Swayam- tani..tumhe itni der kahan lag gyi??

Shivam(voiceover)-hmm..so her name is tani..

Tani- sry sry bhai..wo mujhe kuch notes lene the kissi se..

Shivam hears the word 'bhai' and turns 2 look at swayam.

Shivam(voiceover)- what..ye swayam ki behen h!!..shit!!

Rey- shivam..are u gonna leave or not!!

Shivam- yeah..going..

Shivam leaves, still unable to understand what just happened.

Shivam(voiceover)- did I really found swayam's sis cute??...no no shivam..get her out of our mind..!!

Tani- wo kaun tha bhai??..(Referring to shivam)

Swayam- no 1 imp...

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Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...aww sharon's dream seemed to be so real...sharey are way too adorable...besties forever...and den yet again comes the big surprise-our new hot much awaited couple ka pehla one-sided look-look-ShiTa,...even that was surreal...for the 1st tym i felt both shivam and taani to be cute together(till now i called them a couple due to their cheating abilities and similar qualities to ditch)...but today they also felt real in ur ff...really splendid...thnx for the pm...loved it to the core.,wen u planning to include kria...is she dere or not...😃

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