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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.Do continue and pm me.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...pls continue soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2:

here's the nxt part guyss..hope u'l like it...

chapter 2:

At Night..

Sharon' house:

Although I dnt speak about you mch

Although everyone can see it
I would never admit it'
Admit how I feel
When I first met you
I found myself smiling, then I found myself thinking of you
You made me smile, you made me feel special
I've never admitted this to anyone, not even you
But I think I've fallen in love with you


Sharon had hr shower n ws standing infront of d mirrior..

She was lost in her thoughts..

Sharon(voiceover):did I jst admit it 2 rey dat I love no no no..uhh I mean I like swayam *blushing*..gosh rey kya soch raha hoga..me Sharon d diva likes sum1..all those moments flashbcks 2 her which she had spent vth him..she thinks of his cute smile (famous swayam smile ),his strong and perfect body whn he held her back from beatin shivam, his care for, hr scrapbook scene n many more.. A small smile appeard on hr face. All those moments when she ws in trouble..when everybody ws angst hr..swayam stood by hr side always. D whole footloose elimination thng where she had sumwhere lost herself..swayam brought hr bck,he brought her confidence bck..he brought Sharon Raiprakash bck. she thnks abt all d tym she had hurt him n yet swayam was always der for her..d abandoned corridor scene..a tear escaped hr eyes.

Sharon-i wish maine tumhe hurt nhi kiya hota swayam,I m sorry swayam'm sorry..

suddenly d pictures of shivam's party flashed infront of her. She snapd out f her thot. guilt flow through her..

Sharon-Thnk god tumhe uss raat ke bare nhi pata swayam, nhi toh tm aur hurt ho jaate...jo hua so hua n I wnt hurt you anymore,swayam..i won't I swear..i won't..i dnt noe if I luv you or not bt I definitely cnt c u hurt <<flashback: fight n badage scene >>'hmmm..nw I shud btr go n sleep now and she smiled

She lay on her bed

Sharon:Mr.Swayam Shekhwat ..m d Luckiest one to hav you in my lyf..yet I cannot admit it infront of you..

she sighed n went to sleep..


Swayam's house:

Swayam is confused. He can't understand why Sharon helped him today. He sees his reflection in the mirror and observes it talking.

Reflection-dude why are u confused??.. can't u c that Sharon has started liking u!!

Swayam:really??.. is that even possible??..no..not all...after all she's Sharon'Sharon Raiprakash!!!

Reflection:idiot!!...din't u c the concern in her face?? That shoes how much she likes u!!

Swayam :well..i hope ki aisa ho bt'

He remembers their horrifying past.. d abandoned corridor incident.. d fi8 aftr tani's selection as d 6th dancer. It shook him up.. but den he remembers d gud moments spent wid her.. RDX sir's party.. on a single cycle wid hr whn her car had broken down.. all d dances done wid her..

Swayam: well..certainly thr are more happy moments than d sad ones.. hmm.. maybe u r ri8..i really think that she has started liking me now. The sexy charm is workin!!!😉

He smiles and goes off to sleep.

All day I can't help but thinking of you.
You don't have to say a word I just want to be with you,
When I look at you, you make me smile
My friends think I'm crazy all I think is WOW,
When I look at you chills run through my spine,
I always thought you were beautiful and fine,

My life has changed ever since I saw you,
which makes me want to be with you,
looking at you is more than a dream come true,
words can't explain of how I feel about you'

Rey:

Rey was driving back home. He switched on the radio and the music began'

"Choti choti batein, yuhi aate jaate

Yadein sehlaake jati h

Raaton ko sirhaane, baasi muskane

Mujhko sulake jati h

Milna nahi h mumkin, itna batao lekin

Hum phir mile kyo h

Tujhko bhula na paaun, tujhko bhula na paaaun

Yu silsila kyu h

Sab kuch wahi h, par kch kami h

Teri ahantein nahi h, nahi h'."

Tears rolled down his cheek. Soon he found himself grasped by the memories of kriya. Kriya was the one who always made rey emotional. Earlier her presence made him extremely happy and now, missin her presence rey always bcame sad. Rey switched off the radio and stopped the car. He got down and found himself near kriya's apartment. Now it had became unbearable for him. His tears stopped and he led out a scream.

Rey: why kriya, why???..tumne aisa kyo kia??.. kya tumne kabhi mere liye wo feel nhi kia jo maine tere liye kia.

He screamed again'

He again remembers the time he had spent wid her. Their 1st meetin in Dehradun.. her slap infront of the whole college.. their 1st duet dance in the clg trip and the numerous performances they it aftr that..

He went back to his car and took out a photograph' kriya's photograph. He took out a lighter from his car, lit it and brought it near the photograph. Just when d photograph was abt to catch fire, he let the lighter off. He couldn't' he couldn't burn kriya's pic. He could jump off a cliff'but couldn't burn her pic.

He controlled himself.

Rey- no'I won't let u ruin dis day kriya. Sharon has finally accepted her luv for swayam. M too happy for her.

He gets into his car and went home.

I love you.
Those three words didn't mean a thing,
I thought we were meant to be,
But I guess it was just nothing,
There's a wall around my heart, stopping me from crying,
But there's something inside of me,
That feels like it's dying.
You were everything, I needed, care for,
I chose you, but now my heart is sore,
You will never realize, that you were my world too,
but believe me when I say this,
I really did love you.
Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome update...loved it
wow swaron thinking about each other
n rey couldn't burn kriya's pic dats called true love...
eagerly waiting for the next part n yayy first to comment without getting the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bth d prtz wer awesum...
Swaron thinking abt each other...
Reyz missin kria so much...
Waitin fr d nxt updt...
Do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome update...loved it
wow swaron thinking about each other
n rey couldn't burn kriya's pic dats called true love...
eagerly waiting for the next part n yayy first to comment without getting the pm


i m soo sorry actually ws in hurry..had to go 2 tution..so cud nt pm any1..next tym i vl surely pm..btw thnx 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st of all-thnx for the pm...and yeah a gud update especially the strips in between...awesome...loved each of sharon(realising her concern for swayam),swayam(pondering over sharon's attitude towards him) and of course our rockstar rey's irrevocable love for his baatcutter...splendid...is kria in the ff?????...fabulous update buddy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A lovely second update. 👏
Sharon's concern for Swayam and Swayam lost in Sharon's thought..Loved the way you gave beautiful lines to Sharon's thoughts in the beginning. Rey s so happy for his friend, i hope he finds his love too..
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

1st of all-thnx for the pm...and yeah a gud update especially the strips in between...awesome...loved each of sharon(realising her concern for swayam),swayam(pondering over sharon's attitude towards him) and of course our rockstar rey's irrevocable love for his baatcutter...splendid...is kria in the ff?????...fabulous update buddy...

thnkx a lot 😊..n yeahh kriya is in dis ff..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely updt...


Rey loves kriya like hell dats y he cudnt burn her pic though he wanted to.

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