IPKKND: Second Hand News - Completed: Pg 83

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Hail the Queen of Blabber as she sweeps the jury and wins the case while ASR wonders how will he ever repent his sins! Great tabloid-style fiction.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

I loved your take on arnav's 'missing'...as always your writing style coupled with an amazing concept made this SS an overwhelming experience. The short and crisp updates coming at super fast speeding...am loving it..Thanks for the pms..(Initially i thought someone was spamming from your new account )

Dearly wanted to kick ASR's a** hard when i came across his 'plan'..it is hard to believe ASR as a quitter or deserter...but on their marriage day he ran away to his room and kushi had to bear the wrath of both the families. so this is highly plausible. The newspaper reporting was fantastic..

Am glad his misunderstandings have cleared. My eyes teared up seeing kushi's faith that ASR is alive while everyone around her is screaming that he is dead..

Am eager to know kushi's reaction to arnav's plan and their coming together..

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Very arrogant of A to claim that she'll take him back! Forget the past...even now he's putting her thru hell by staying away...

-Sona

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tennismaniac19

@tennismaniac19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Ok, so you updated 4 times while I was sleeping... Hence I am compressing comments for chapters 2-6 in one reply.

I love this concept of yours Shuheda 😊 Short, gripping chapters and a revelation in each one of them. Fantastic! The newspaper clippings just make it more exciting. I love how Khushi believes that Arnav is still alive and how she's fighting that evil man!👏

Make them meet soon. But I'm guessing we won't get to read much of that because as your title suggests, we'll have to rely solely on the newspaper clippings Arnav reads.

Oh and I have to congratulate you on the title. It's brilliant!!!!! Update soon! And thanks for the PMs 🤗

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pri12

@pri12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

awsomeee😊😊😊

Edited by pri12 - 13 years ago

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

awesome,...read the whole i mean 6 parts at a go...! very well written😊

so when will arnav come out of hiding???😊

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Fabulous plot!!!

The story is unwinding perfectly through newspaper articles. And the monologue from Arnav after each article - I can literally feel both sides of the story through 2 short paragraphs! Too good! Loving it!!!

Waiting for the next two parts!