IPKKND FF | Broken Strings (ON HOLD) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Maria395

Hi

I just found this FF and I've just read it all and it is amazing. I love the whole concept of this story and I love how strong Khushi is.

In many story's I feel Khushi is written in a weak way that makes me feel like screaming noo Khushi don't forgive him so easily but your Khushi seems very strong and not someone who just take it all but hits back as well.

Ive got to say I am kind of disliking Arnav for hurting Khushi and I hope he gets a taste of his own medicine.

I like NK, Lavanya and Akash in this story. They all seem very playful and interesting and NK and Lavanya are dating? I've always wanted Lavanya to come back just so she and NK could be a couple.

I've got to say I don't particularly like Anjali either because I don't feel her reasons are strong enough to excuse what she did. Arnav needed Khushi and Khushi needed Arnav yet she didn't do anything about it and kept quiet. I think the reason I don't like her is because I'm particularly biased towards Khushi and how much she's been hurt because of arnav and how how he acted and anjali and he decision to keep silent.

If I loved someone so much then no matter if they made me promise not to tell the other person that they cared and loved that they were alive I'd still go and tell them because despite there promise my first priority would be that persons happiness and best interest.

She said that she Tried to phone but didn't know how to explain herself and what she did but if she truly cared then how and what she did would be on the back burner and her chotte and baby sisters feelings would take priority not her feelings or actions.

As you can probably see I don't like anjali right not but that's because I love Khushi too much so it's my way of fighting her corner.

I hope you update soon and i don't know if you send out PMs but if you do then can you kindly add me to your pm list?

Originally posted by: kremlin

ok, is Akash the good or the bad guy? Well I like the fact that you have given him a competely new characterisation and made him an integral part of the story. Just love the jealous ASR!

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hi Shay;

I loved this very short update. I just loved how you made Kushi ignore him completely. Well, he is dead isn't he? That's what he wanted her to think! So there! I just loved it! He really should get a taste of his own medicine! I hope you keep her strong for a while yet. At least in is his presence. And he is already jealous! Yipee! Can you tell I am so mad at him? How dare he waste her most beautiful time of youth, when she should be enjoying life, tasting life, experiencing life... It;s like he looted her! Uuufff!

I'm not sure why you made Kushi forgive Anjali so quickly, though.

(C6) It's not as if she did not have a choice. And now she is blaming her brother. Well, so what if he told her not to say anything. She stopped the relationship before he came back!

Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.