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Posted: 12 years ago



U did it again Shay!!!! where do u get those dialogues from?!!
From now on I am starting a DIALOGUES OF THE CHAPTER containg the awesomest dialogues!!!!!

And to start with this...

He was a man. An Oh-so sexy man.

Okay so I loved the relationship portrayed here.

Arnav-Anjali
Arnav-Akash
Akash-Khushi
Anjali-Khushi

and to an extent there was a hint of a beautiful Arnav-Khushi in the upcoming parts!!!!


Waiting for the next update Shay!!! Love ya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love Akash.
Awesome update.
ASR deserves the treatment Khushi is giving him..
Thanks for the PM.
Please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah, loving Akash here.

That was most simply genius. The effect these teo stubborn idiots have on each each yet they fail to realize it...and Anjali's love for Khushi...every thing was very well portrayed..

Loved it! And update soon please?😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello, queen of my heart ... 😃 Yes, yes, I know I have to study, and I am off to do that, but every morning, you know YOU come first! Arnav comes first ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW Awesome 👏
Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I did Not like the Update...😳

I loved it...❤️

It was amazing to see you write such looong updates...👏

Hope all your fingers are intact...👍🏼

Thank You for such amazing stuff...:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
akash trembling in his shoes at anjali's ultimatum and later, his glee at seeing his plan to get arnav jealous working was hilarious! khushi not being a shrinking violet and deciding to ignore arnav much to his chagrin was just plain awesome! when she's thinking of sinews and warmth, I am sure she's imagining arnav! and a frustrated arnav having to grin and bear it all is the icing on the cake!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Shay;
I loved this very short update. I just loved how you made Kushi ignore him completely. Well, he is dead isn't he? That's what he wanted her to think! So there! I just loved it! He really should get a taste of his own medicine! I hope you keep her strong for a while yet. At least in is his presence. And he is already jealous! Yipee! Can you tell I am so mad at him? How dare he waste her most beautiful time of youth, when she should be enjoying life, tasting life, experiencing life... It;s like he looted her! Uuufff!
I'm not sure why you made Kushi forgive Anjali so quickly, though.
(C6) It's not as if she did not have a choice. And now she is blaming her brother. Well, so what if he told her not to say anything. She stopped the relationship before he came back!
Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
why is it taht reverse psychology always work on men???? arnavs moods are sooo remarkable funny to say, a man in love is hard to miss right??? fantastic chapter!!!!!! now waiting 4 him to get answers!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Glimpses of chappy 7 !
I want the whole updatewa !

But the glimpses have made me even more excited to read the next update !
Wiaitng for it !

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Haiii !!

So Khushi, woman you absolutely rock ! *takes a bow* That was surely the best way to potray Khushi !
The way you explained her letting Arnav take her hands in the beginning, and teh emotions soaring through Arnav !

And probably she realised that her resolve's weakening so she moves ! And crash ! Heart broken he is, though he wont accept it even a bit ! And best friend ? Did he just call Khushi his best friend ? Im absolutely angry at him ! I mean you go missing, let her assume you're dead, and now he's bloody jealous over Akash talking with Khushi ! *IDIOT* (SORRY, BUT ASR is pissing here)

And Akash ! I love him !
Smarty pants !

Amazing update Shay !
And it's so stupid of me to not see the update down neeche ! :P Thanks for telling
Edited by -Shobhu21- - 12 years ago

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