Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [note pg 15]]

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Arrey wah new ff anji its great da c0ncept ix realy c0ol n different plx update da 1st chap ASAP

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Anjali

@Anjalika13

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: annysyed
Wow itz really amazng and diff concept ,plzzz update fast:):)

thnx will try to update asap 😊

Originally posted by: farahuv
Nyc concept plz add me in ur pm list

thnx

ya will add u bt do accept my buddy request 😊

Originally posted by: sirjee
waooo soo much close to da real show...just da hatred in ur post...sounds really nyc...do continue...n plzz add me in ur PM list...

lol ya ...thnx ...ya i will yup will add u 😊

Originally posted by: sabzkhan
oxmmm...

thnx

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Arrey wah new ff anji its great da c0ncept ix realy c0ol n different plx update da 1st chap ASAP

hehe thnks sarah

ya will update asap 😊

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@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

its awesome like this new concept about both devgad and jaigad family being enemies wonder wt happened character sketch looks really interesting especially jay and vijay bhai character (like how jay lovers her sis and family) update the first part soon really cant wait and thanks for the pm

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome...diffrent and very nice concept...plz add me in ur PM list...

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Lovely concept!! Lookin forward to readin this ff!!! Plzzz add me to ur pm list!! Thanks in advance!!:)

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Lovely concept, I wonder what their past is all about that has created so much hatred in their lives and it still lives on to the next generation i.e M&UV.
Anyhow the character sketch is nice, everyone is pretty much the same. The story looks very interesting. Please add me to the PM list. :))

Oh one tiny mistake in the CS.. Mrinalini devi isn't Manyata's "grandaughter" but her "grandmother".

.SilentPrincess

-PS. the banner is beautiful! :)

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Anjali

@Anjalika13

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: preya_radev
its awesome like this new concept about both devgad and jaigad family being enemies wonder wt happened character sketch looks really interesting especially jay and vijay bhai character (like how jay lovers her sis and family) update the first part soon really cant wait and thanks for the pm

thnx...glad u like the concept

ya i really hated her in dek so thought of changing her character ...lol

will try my best to update asap

Originally posted by: dekhaekkhawab
awesome...diffrent and very nice concept...plz add me in ur PM list...

thnx a lot

ya i will 😊

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Lovely concept!! Lookin forward to readin this ff!!! Plzzz add me to ur pm list!! Thanks in advance!!:)

thnx . will try my best to update soon 😊

ya will add u 😊

ur welcome 😆

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess
Lovely concept, I wonder what their past is all about that has created so much hatred in their lives and it still lives on to the next generation i.e M&UV.
Anyhow the character sketch is nice, everyone is pretty much the same. The story looks very interesting. Please add me to the PM list. :))

Oh one tiny mistake in the CS.. Mrinalini devi isn't Manyata's "grandaughter" but her "grandmother".

.SilentPrincess

-PS. the banner is beautiful! :)

thnx . yaa...

yupp thought of not changing the characters much . Hope u like it . ya i will ... do accept my buddy request

ohhh lol thnx for telling

@pink - all credit goes to niha n her wonderful creations :)