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thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: nitali

heyyy nice story... update next part soonnn...

thanks dear😃
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part 74


''badi ma. maa''he shouts worriedly..to heard him nivi n sushma immediately went upstairs while veer laid her on bed..he splash some water on her face to made her open her eyes slowly...nivi n sushma sat near her-''kya hua neha ko veer???''veer confusedly replied -''don't know apne aap faint ho gyi''nivi caressed her hairs n covered her with bedsheet-''subah se kuch khaya nhi h na shayad isliye faint ho gyi hogi''veer staring at her-''mana kiya tha na meine tumse yeh stupid sa fast rakhne ke liye but nhi tumhe har jagahapni marzi chalane ki bimari h''

she lowered her eyes while sushma looked at veer-''usne tumhare liye hi fast rakha tha abhi apne lecture apne pass rakho or isse khana khilayo''veer nodded-''ji''

imli gave him plate n left the room with nivi n sushma...he sat beside her n fed her -''jaldi khana khao or so jao''

''naraz ho''she made her face..he put another bite in her mouth-''or apna muh bhi band karo''she smiled n hugged him-''i love u''he pulled her back-''baat kya h''she looked at him--''kuch nhi''he laid her on bed-''to so jao good night''n switched off the lights...she closed her eyes but a cute smile crept on her face

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next day

veer-''diya meine kaha na uska naam mujhe dobara nhi sunna''she staring at him-''bhai i love him''he slapped her-''shut up''tears rolled down from her eyes...first time he slapped her since childhood she thought while veer felt guilty n cupped her face-''diya pls try to understand he just play with u nothing else wo tumse pyaar nhi karta ''she removed his hand-''i hate u bhai''n rush out from the room when neha heard their conversation...

veer sat on couch sadly when neha came towards him-''veer aisa bhi to ho sakta h ki wo koi or ho jisse tum jante ho''he frowned-''tumhe aisa lagta h''veer stood up n took his bag which lying on bed-'i know him very well usse to mein kabhi nhi bhul sakta or pls uske baare me or koi baat nhi karni mujhe''n left for his meeting


neha -''dono bahi behan ek jaise h ziddi''

she went in the kitchen n saw pooja...she went nearer-''dii ''pooja turned n looked at her-''neha maa ne btaya teri tabiyat thik nhi thi are u ok na mein tere pass hi aa rhi thi''

neha-'im ok di mujhe ek important kaam h mein thodi der me aa jayungi''pooja frowned-''kya kaam h tujhe teri tabiyat kharab h na''

neha-''mein jaldi aa jayungi pakka''pooja-''thik h ja but jaldi ''she nodded n leave

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Dr. siya-''tumhari saari reports normal h neha u r pregnant''neha smiled-''really??''

siya nods -''yeah but tumne abhi tak veer ko bhi nhi btaya kyun''

neha shyly-''wo pehle me khud confirm karna chahti thi isliye ''siya put her hands on her shoulder-''ab jao or jaakar sabko news do or han take rest''neha smiled at her-''thank u so much dr''

she made her exit from the hospital n walking towards the parking for her car...she smiled shyly-''veer ko abhi btana cahhiye ya baad me??''she thought about him when she saw diya on another of road...she moved towards her n shocked to saw luggage with her n a boy...she went nearer-''diya''diya n vishal looked at her ..they shocked to saw her...

diya-''bhabhi aap yaha''vishal looked at diya

neha -''kaha ja hi ho tum or yeh luggage''diya hold his hand-''bhabhi hum dono ja rhe h yaha se ''neha removed his hand-''apne bahi ko chodkar apni family ko chodkar iske saath ja rhi ho''

diya hugged her-''bhabhi mere pass koi or obtin bhi to nhi h na''neha wiped her tears-''apne bahi par trust nhi h tumhe??''diya lowered her head while vishal got furiou-''hey u just get lost yeh hmara personal matter h hum khud solve kar lenge''neha slapped him-''u get lost from here''he kept palm on his cheek n frowned at her

diya-''meri bhabhi h yeh vishal''vishal got irritated n tried to slapped her back when neha hold his hand in middle...diya shocked to saw his behavior she pulled him back n hit him with her hand-''how dare u to behave like this she is my bhabhi ''

vishal grabbed her hands tightly-''shut up n pulled her back..she fell on road neha quickly pulled her up-''are u ok diya''diya nodded-''han bhabhi im wrong im wrong bhabhi bhai is right ye kisi se pyaar nhi kar sakta''

vishal gritted his teeth-''yes u n ur brother is absolutely right i don't love u tumhare jaisi bhot ladkiyaa h meri life mein or yeh sab tumhare bhai se badla lene ke liye kiya mene usne sabke saamne mujhe insult kiya ''neha n diya shocked...diya clasped her hand tightly-''bhabhi chaliye yaha se''

veer lowered his car mirror n saw neha n diya with vishall...he got furious n fuming with rage...he called neha...

neha shockingly picked his call-''veer''

veer-''kaha ho tum??''neha surprised to heard his question n looked here n there to saw him but he was quiet far away from them..so she unable to find him on this crowdy place...she replied n stammering voice-''gha..ghar par ...kyu kya hua''his eyes became red with anger-''ok fine'he cut the phone n throw it on another seat...he drive off from there

neha looked at phone confusedly-''diya hume chalna chaiye veer ka phone aya tha''

diya nods when vishal grabbed her hand-''aise kaise chali jaogi mera kaam kaha pura hua h abhi jo insult meri hui h wo veer ki bhi to honi chahiye na??''

neha tried to removed his hand-''chodo usse''

he pulled her back -''get lost''n went towards his car..diya hit him with all her mighty but it couldn't helped her..neha looked at rod n hit him from behind...he fell on road un conciously they both got scared-''bhabhi ab kya karenge''

neha-'isse hospital lekar chalte h''

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at evening

diya looked at her-''thank u bhabhi''neha embraced-''room me jao ''diya went to her room leavng her behind..neha wiped her sweat n entered in her room...

she shocked to saw veer standing near the window...she nervously went nearer-''tum kab aye??''

without looking at her-''jab tum yaha nhi thi''she put her hand on his shoulder-''aaj itni jaldi kaise aa gye tum??''

he turned n staring at her which made her more nervous-''kaha thi tum''

neha-''mein hospital gyi thi??''

veer-''really tumne to kaha ki tum ghar par ho'

neha smiled at him hestatingly -''koi kaam tha tumhe''veer again asked-''kaha thi tum''

neha looked at him-''mein sachme hospital gyi thi tumhe kuch surprsie dena tha isliye''veer slapped her tightly-''kitna juth bologi tum''

she looked at him surprisingly with moist eyes-''veer me sach me hospital hi gyi thi''

''i hate u neha''n turned his face-''diya ko vishal se milvane lekar gyi thi ...mere mana karne ke baad bhi yehi surprise tha na tumhara''

tears rolling down on her cheeks she embraced him from behind-''nhi mein sirf hospital gyi thi diya ko mene raaste me dekha tha veer pls trust me''veer pushed her back-''or jo mene dekha wo kya tha??''

she wiped her tears-''veer meri baat to suno''he stopped her-''mene mana kiya tha na fir bhi tum diya ko lekar gyi uske pass or mujhe juth bola ki tum ghar par ho kitne juth bologi''

she grasped his hand-''nhi veer mein juth nhi bol rhi hun listen to me meri puri baat to suno''he removed her hand n left the room angrily

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at late night

she was waiting for him n looking at doors anxiously ...she dialed his number 15th time but he didn't pick single call...she went on doors n looked outside...pooja saw her on doors-''neha what happened yaha kyun khadi ho''

neha turned -''di veer abhi tak nhi aye pata nhi kaha n mera phone bhi nhi uthaya''pooja calmed her-''neha relax aaj koi nyi baat h wo to roj late aata h office se aa jayega tu room me ja''

neha looked at her-'aaj shaam ko veer gusse me gya h di''

pooja-''kya??kyun??jhagda hua tum dono ke bich''she nods-''han''

pooja made her sit on couch-''just relax tujhse jyada der tak naaraz nhi ho sakta aa jayega''n went with her upstairs

she sat on the edge of bed n staring at closed doors-''kaha ho veer''
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Posted: 12 years ago
What is this? Mere Duggu ka asha Welcome?😡 aaj kisi ki khyar nehi... Aaj mere gusse k prakop se koi nehi bachsakta...sab ko chun chun k datungi, Mere NEER ki Pyaar ki nishani, Mere Duggu k asha rukha sukha sowagat main bardast nehi karne wali, kahan ho sab bahar Aaoo...

Veer= Kya subha se thappadoon ki baarish kar rahe ho? Shanti se samjha nehi sakte?puri baat thik se sun nehi sakte? Marne ka itna shauk ha tho jaake ush vishal ko phir se marke aao, bhala koi apne choti behen aur bimar patni per ish tarha haath uthata ha?

Nivi n Shusma= kis mitti k bane ho aap dono khudke itne saare bachche hai ferbi ek hone wali maa ko nehi pehchaan sakte?

Sapna= serf apne pati k piche danda lekar ghumti ho, kabhi apne nanad per dhyaan do, serf neha nehi tum bhi bhabi ho ushki, aur mana ki ab hospital nehi jati per ek doctor tho ab bhi ho na? Jakar ekbar apni devrani ka hal hi puch ati, atleast tum tho samajh hi jati!

Diya= uff! Yeh aaj kal ki larkiya, samajh dar hote huye bhi kabhi kabhi ashi nadaniya kar bethte ha ki kya bolu, chaldi ghar chodke, pagal larki, arey atleast jab galati samajh mein aayi tab tho jake apne bhai se maafi maang leti, sab saach bataa deti, uff! Galati kare koi aur bhugte mera duggu,

Puja= woh hello mam, kabhi kitchen se bhi bahar aaoo, bimar behen ko koi ekele bahar jane deta ha? Koi changes najar nehi arahi tumhe ush mein? Kaisi behen ho?

Vishal= yeh joota tumhare liye € aur yeh ande bhi @ , Janwar kahi ka! Ayaa badaa badla lene, mar mar k chehra na badal dia tho main bhi Duggu ki Masi nehi hna!

Neha= ish halat mein tumhe daat bhi nehi sakti! You tack care,

Riya= Do continue soon, Love You,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice part...
Neha should have told him the truth when veer called her up... and veer instead of going home he should have been there, keeping an eye on them... then at least he would have had an idea that what were up tooo... and should have shown him her pregnancy reports... well waiting for the next part... it sooo interesting i telll u.. please so update sooonn... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..thmx for d ud dear..
it's nice..
full of misunderstandings..
first Diya misunderstud Veer..
thn Veer misunderstud Neha..
bt I didn't lyk 1 thng..
Veer shud nt slap Diya & Neha lyk this..
it doesn't suit him at all..
aur wo Neha par kaise hath utha sakta he..

so gud news is thr..😊
Neha is pregnant..
wow..gud..
Neha was so happy to listen this..
she was so excited to tell Veer abt this gud news..
aur kahan se ye Vishal bich me tapak gya..😡
thnk God that diya got to know abt Vishal at ri8 tym..
& hats off to Neha that she slept him..👏
he deserves more & more slaps..
bt Neha shud nt tell lie to Veer ever..
use Veer ko sab kuchh bata dena chahiye tha usi tym..
jab uska phone aaya tha..
bt Now Veer is so angry that he is nt ready to listen to Neha..
aur ab Veer chala kahan gya..?😲
even I m tensed..
Veer cum soon plz..
wherever u r
it's nt gud for Neha to take so much stress..

aur plz giv d nxt UD soon..
I can't wait much..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ho gadbad ho gai...yahan neha veer ko surprise dena chahti thi par wahan use khud hi surprise mil gaya
hufff jab neha vishal se lad rahi thi toh mujhe laga kahi miscarriage na ho jaye...but thank god aisa nahi hua...
n veer neha se zayda der gussa nahi reh sakta we all know bas neha ko ye baat batane ki der h n then jadoo
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

What is this? Mere Duggu ka asha Welcome?😡 aaj kisi ki khyar nehi... Aaj mere gusse k prakop se koi nehi bachsakta...sab ko chun chun k datungi, Mere NEER ki Pyaar ki nishani, Mere Duggu k asha rukha sukha sowagat main bardast nehi karne wali, kahan ho sab bahar Aaoo...

Veer= Kya subha se thappadoon ki baarish kar rahe ho? Shanti se samjha nehi sakte?puri baat thik se sun nehi sakte? Marne ka itna shauk ha tho jaake ush vishal ko phir se marke aao, bhala koi apne choti behen aur bimar patni per ish tarha haath uthata ha?

Nivi n Shusma= kis mitti k bane ho aap dono khudke itne saare bachche hai ferbi ek hone wali maa ko nehi pehchaan sakte?

Sapna= serf apne pati k piche danda lekar ghumti ho, kabhi apne nanad per dhyaan do, serf neha nehi tum bhi bhabi ho ushki, aur mana ki ab hospital nehi jati per ek doctor tho ab bhi ho na? Jakar ekbar apni devrani ka hal hi puch ati, atleast tum tho samajh hi jati!

Diya= uff! Yeh aaj kal ki larkiya, samajh dar hote huye bhi kabhi kabhi ashi nadaniya kar bethte ha ki kya bolu, chaldi ghar chodke, pagal larki, arey atleast jab galati samajh mein aayi tab tho jake apne bhai se maafi maang leti, sab saach bataa deti, uff! Galati kare koi aur bhugte mera duggu,

Puja= woh hello mam, kabhi kitchen se bhi bahar aaoo, bimar behen ko koi ekele bahar jane deta ha? Koi changes najar nehi arahi tumhe ush mein? Kaisi behen ho?

Vishal= yeh joota tumhare liye ' aur yeh ande bhi @ , Janwar kahi ka! Ayaa badaa badla lene, mar mar k chehra na badal dia tho main bhi Duggu ki Masi nehi hna!

Neha= ish halat mein tumhe daat bhi nehi sakti! You tack care,

Riya= Do continue soon, Love You,

haye re itna gussa arpita relax darling
sabki watt laga di one by one
don't worry sab thik ho jayega
will update soon
love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nitali

Hey nice part...

Neha should have told him the truth when veer called her up... and veer instead of going home he should have been there, keeping an eye on them... then at least he would have had an idea that what were up tooo... and should have shown him her pregnancy reports... well waiting for the next part... it sooo interesting i telll u.. please so update sooonn... :D

thanks dear
don't worry will clarify all ur questions in next update😃
will update soon

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