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Posted: 12 years ago

simply brilliant n lovely update...

really amazing..

loved it..

thnx for the pm...

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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

simply brilliant n lovely update...

really amazing..

loved it..

thnx for the pm...

thanks for comment dear😛

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Please update soon :)...

yeah will update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 73

sonia n karan were welcomed by everyone in malhotra family as she was very gud friend of veer everyone knew her very well...to saw karan with sonia dhruv.pooja,n sapba dhruv got shocked but according to them he was very nice guy for sonia...but neha was more worried for sonia...

she served tea to them n staring at karan whose smiling at her wickedly...

they all were busy in chatting when neha looked at sonia she was very happy..which was clearly visible on her face...

sonia excused herself n went to kitchen to help ...neha smiled casually at her tried to become normal in front of her-''neha tumhe pata h meri shaadi next month fix ho gyi h so tum sabko aana h aaogi na??''

she shocked-''what???next month sonia mein tumhe kuch kehna chahti pls mujhe galat mat samjhna but karan tumhare liye thik nhi h''

the plate which she hold before slipped from her hand...neha catched it to avoid the noise n drag her wih her room-''sonia mein tumhe apni frnd maanti hun isliye keh rhi hun usse shaadi mat karo ...mein usse acche se janti hun...wo di ko dekhne aaaya tha kuch time pehle but veer ne kisi tarah sambhal liya...fir wo karan mere piche pad gya or''sonia interrupted -''pls neha stop it...mein tumhe apni frnd mana tha ...''n left the room rudely

neha -''sonia listen to me''but she already left the room''

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veer-''ok bye ''she was all lost...veer pat her shoulder-''what kal ki baat se naaraz ho??'

neha looked at him-''hmm na nhi to ok bye''...he raised his brow-''to mein jayu aise hi''

she smiled n gave him a kiss on cheek...he kissed her back n said bye to her before leaving for office''

she waved her hand n walked towards the corridor when karan grasped her hand tightly...she jerked to saw him so close to her-'''chodo mujhe''

he smirked-''aise kaise chod dn..mein kuch din ke liye bahar kya chala gya tumne veer se shaadi hi kar li mera wait bhi nhi kiya''

she tried hard to freed herself but her tighten his grip n move closer to her-''aisa kya usme jo mujhme nhi h han''

neha moved back n about to scream but he closed her mouth with other palm-''common neha dusro ko kyun pareshaan kar rhi ho sab busy h ane kaamo mein''she was sweating he came more closer when someone hit his head with vase...he turned n saw sonia -''so nia...''n faint on floor

neha hugged her-''thank u sonia''sonia hugged her back-''nhi thanks to mujhe bolna chahiye''

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badi maa-''lekin yeh sab hua kaise?/'asked to sonia,...sonia stammered-''apat nhi aunty karan ka per stairs se kaise slip ho gya but wo ab thik h''

sonia added-''aunty ab hume chalna chahiye shaadi ki tyaari karni h''

nivi-''arey lekin karan ko thik to hone do wo aise kaha jayega''

sonia-''nhi aunty its fine wo thik h abhi''...sonia hugged neha-''don't worry us bander se shaadi nhi karungi tum sach mein bhot acchi ho bye''

veer still didn't understand what was cooking between his sweet wife n his friend...he said bye to her-''ok bye but aati rehna''

she nodded n left

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at evening

veer worked on laptop when neha came to her room with his evening tea...she sat next to him-''accha hua na sab thk ho gya''he still staring at screen ...she put his tea on table n switched off his laptop...he looked at her-''what??? kya hua bhot important kaam h neha''

she gently sat on his lap-''important kaam kab nhi hota tumhe wo to hmesha hota kabhi aas pass bhi dekh liya karo''n curled her arms around his neck...he frowned -''neha dekho i have a ''but before she hold his collar n pulled him closer to her face-''kya u have urgent what???'

he stared at her black large eyes...n stammered-''i ha..have''she came more closer to his lip-''what??''

he even forgot to blink n gazing at her features...he curled his hands around her cylindrical waist nd laid on couch over her...she smiled-''so u have what??''he kissed her neck-''i have urgent work to do''

neha giggled becoz his kisses made tickling on her body..he kissed her soft skin of her neck n shoulder...she moving her hands in his hairs when she felt something strange...her room revolve around her ...she felt a slight headache n something vomit like...she said n dim vice-''veer''he rest his head between her neck n shoulder-''hmmm abhi kya mere kaam se to tumne hi distract kiya tha na''

she tightly clutched his shirt -''veer''

he pulled his face up n looked at her..she was sweating-''neha kya hua are u ok''he made her sit quickly n gave her water..as she drink water he felt wambling n ran towards the bathroom..veer worriedly followed her-''neha ''

outside the bathroom he stood tensed n worried keeping his eyes on doors..she came out ..her face became pale n gloomy..he hugged her-''neha thik ho na tum kya hua h tumhe ...tum rest karo mein doctor ko bulata hun''she hugged him back--''nhi rehne do uski jarurat nhi im ok now''

he was still tensed-''are u sure''she smiled -''hmmm''

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next morning

badi maa-''veer neha ki shaadi ho chuki h ab usse kaam karne ki us hospital mein jaane ki jarurat nhi h samjhe tum...sapna ne hmari baat maan li h hume laga tumhari patni bhi maan jayegi''

veer-''but badi maa neha doctor h patients ko har roj doctor ki jarurat hoti h''

badi maa-''toh waha doctors ki kaami h???neha wapas hospital join nhi karegi bas or hume dobara is bare me baat nhi karni''

veer came out from the room sadly...


pooja-''shaam ko jaldi aana ok''dhruv kissed her n her daughter-''ok boss kuch special h''

pooja-''aaj mera fast h na karvachauth ka isliye jab tak tum nhi aoge tab tak khaana nhi khayungi''dhruv giggled-''fir to aana hi padega''

on the other side

sapna wear her red saree which she like most becoz it gifted by rudra...she looked at herself in mirror-''rudra mein kaisi lag rhi hun''rudra searching for something-''han han acchi lag rhi ho''

she frowned at him-''rudra''in a loud voice...he looked at her n managed to smiled-''wow u looking great beautiful..meri file kaha h pls jaldi dedo''her smiled faded she throw his file on bed-''shaam ko jaldi aa jaana nhi to mein khaana kha lungi tumhare bager''rudra-''ok

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neha-''its ok koi baat nhi veer''veer turned his face n wore his tie-''what ok shaadi ho gyi iska matlab ab kaam nhi kar sakti ho tum...is ghar ke rule meri samjh ke bahar h ''

she hugged him from behind-''veer relax ..office jao thande dimaag se''he turned n looked at her-''u take care''n about to kiss her when she backed off

he frowned-''what??''she shyly-''aaj yeh sab nhi chalega-''mera fast h karvachuth ka''

veer-'what???are u mad kal tumhari tabiyat kharab thi or aaj fast..koi jarurat nhi h yeh stupid sa fast karne ki''

she made her face-''veer yeh fast sab rakhte or mera pehla karvachauth h plsss''

veer-''nhi ka mat;ab nhi chupcap khana kha kar rest karo''she raised her brows-''nhi mein yeh fast jarur rakhungi mera pehla fast h samjhe tum''

he put his bag n moved towards the doors-''sab ko apni marzi chalani hoti h yaha''n left angrily


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at evening

she blow air on her beautiful mehndi design when veer returned from office..he looked at her n turned his face...she came towards him-''veer''...he turned-''kya h''she smiled -''wo mujhe thodi itching ho rhi h ''he frowned-''to mein kya karu''

she showed him her hands-''plsss''he came behind her swap her hairs on another side n moving his hand on her back..she closed her eyes-''thank u''n about to move when he grasped her waist n kissed his shoulder-''veer chodo koi dekh lega''

veer--''na chodu to''

she hit him her elbow-''chodo na veer''he smiled n bite her ear-''neha tumhari mehndi kharab ho jayegi dhyaan se''she looked at her palms-''veer plss''he leave her n kissed her forehead she shyly left the room

at night

she took arti n looked at him through sieve ...after that all of them had dinner

veer looked at her she sat quietly on chair...veer passed bowl to her but she refuse to eat anything n went upstairs...veer followed her-''neha ''she was in washroom...

after sometime she came out ...veer cupped her face-''neha are u ok what happen''she hugged him tightly...then he felt her grip loosened ...she fainted in his embrace...veer became more worried n shout-''maa...badi maa''
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Posted: 12 years ago
res sonia shud listen to neha yaar y she hell bent on ruining her life...any loved veer-neha romance and plzzz tell me wen are u going to update Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai ...its taking very interesting turn too between Mahi and Aarav plllzzz updt soon of kyph
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi4ipkknd

res sonia shud listen to neha yaar y she hell bent on ruining her life...any loved veer-neha romance and plzzz tell me wen are u going to update Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai ...its taking very interesting turn too between Mahi and Aarav plllzzz updt soon of kyph

yeah dear i'll ud kyph soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting update..
i think Neha is pregnent now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

part 73


sonia n karan were welcomed by everyone in malhotra family as she was very gud friend of veer everyone knew her very well...to saw karan with sonia dhruv.pooja,n sapba dhruv got shocked but according to them he was very nice guy for sonia...but neha was more worried for sonia...

she served tea to them n staring at karan whose smiling at her wickedly..😡karan.

they all were busy in chatting when neha looked at sonia she was very happy..which was clearly visible on her face...bechari sonia

sonia excused herself n went to kitchen to help ...neha smiled casually at her tried to become normal in front of her-''neha tumhe pata h meri shaadi next month fix ho gyi h so tum sabko aana h aaogi na??''😲

she shocked-''what???next month sonia mein tumhe kuch kehna chahti pls mujhe galat mat samjhna but karan tumhare liye thik nhi h''bang on neha love u

the plate which she hold before slipped from her hand...neha catched it to avoid the noise n drag her wih her room-''sonia mein tumhe apni frnd maanti hun isliye keh rhi hun usse shaadi mat karo ...mein usse acche se janti hun...wo di ko dekhne aaaya tha kuch time pehle but veer ne kisi tarah sambhal liya...fir wo karan mere piche pad gya or''sonia interrupted -''pls neha stop it...mein tumhe apni frnd mana tha ...''n left the room rudelyandha pyaar

neha -''sonia listen to me''but she already left the room''

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veer-''ok bye ''she was all lost...veer pat her shoulder-''what kal ki baat se naaraz ho??'

neha looked at him-''hmm na nhi to ok bye''...he raised his brow-''to mein jayu aise hi''😳

she smiled n gave him a kiss on cheek...he kissed her back n said bye to her before leaving for office''how sweet my neer😊

she waved her hand n walked towards the corridor when karan grasped her hand tightly...she jerked to saw him so close to her-'''chodo mujhe''😡😡😡😡 meri chappal kahaan hai😡

he smirked-''aise kaise chod dn..mein kuch din ke liye bahar kya chala gya tumne veer se shaadi hi kar li mera wait bhi nhi kiya''😆 tum ho kon jo neha tumhare liye wait karegi

she tried hard to freed herself but her tighten his grip n move closer to her-''aisa kya usme jo mujhme nhi h han''🤣 mera muh mat khulwao

neha moved back n about to scream but he closed her mouth with other palm-''common neha dusro ko kyun pareshaan kar rhi ho sab busy h ane kaamo mein''she was sweating he came more closer when someone hit his head with vase...he turned n saw sonia -''so nia...''n faint on floor👏👏👏👏 nari sakti zindabaad

neha hugged her-''thank u sonia''sonia hugged her back-''nhi thanks to mujhe bolna chahiye''⭐️ friends forever

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badi maa-''lekin yeh sab hua kaise?/'asked to sonia,...sonia stammered-''apat nhi aunty karan ka per stairs se kaise slip ho gya but wo ab thik h''

sonia added-''aunty ab hume chalna chahiye shaadi ki tyaari karni h''

nivi-''arey lekin karan ko thik to hone do wo aise kaha jayega''

sonia-''nhi aunty its fine wo thik h abhi''...sonia hugged neha-''don't worry us bander se shaadi nhi karungi tum sach mein bhot acchi ho bye''

veer still didn't understand what was cooking between his sweet wife n his friend...he said bye to her-''ok bye but aati rehna''😆😆 veer

she nodded n left

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at evening

veer worked on laptop when neha came to her room with his evening tea...she sat next to him-''accha hua na sab thk ho gya''he still staring at screen ...she put his tea on table n switched off his laptop...he looked at her-''what??? kya hua bhot important kaam h neha''

she gently sat on his lap-''important kaam kab nhi hota tumhe wo to hmesha hota kabhi aas pass bhi dekh liya karo''n curled her arms around his neck...he frowned -''neha dekho i have a ''but before she hold his collar n pulled him closer to her face-''kya u have urgent what???'

he stared at her black large eyes...n stammered-''i ha..have''she came more closer to his lip-''what??''

he even forgot to blink n gazing at her features...he curled his hands around her cylindrical waist nd laid on couch over her...she smiled-''so u have what??''he kissed her neck-''i have urgent work to do''

neha giggled becoz his kisses made tickling on her body..he kissed her soft skin of her neck n shoulder...she moving her hands in his hairs when she felt something strange...her room revolve around her ...she felt a slight headache n something vomit like...she said n dim vice-''veer''he rest his head between her neck n shoulder-''hmmm abhi kya mere kaam se to tumne hi distract kiya tha na''😲😲😲😲😉😉😉😉

she tightly clutched his shirt -''veer''

he pulled his face up n looked at her..she was sweating-''neha kya hua are u ok''he made her sit quickly n gave her water..as she drink water he felt wambling n ran towards the bathroom..veer worriedly followed her-''neha ''

outside the bathroom he stood tensed n worried keeping his eyes on doors..she came out ..her face became pale n gloomy..he hugged her-''neha thik ho na tum kya hua h tumhe ...tum rest karo mein doctor ko bulata hun''she hugged him back--''nhi rehne do uski jarurat nhi im ok now''

he was still tensed-''are u sure''she smiled -''hmmm''

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next morning

badi maa-''veer neha ki shaadi ho chuki h ab usse kaam karne ki us hospital mein jaane ki jarurat nhi h samjhe tum...sapna ne hmari baat maan li h hume laga tumhari patni bhi maan jayegi''😡

veer-''but badi maa neha doctor h patients ko har roj doctor ki jarurat hoti h''right

badi maa-''toh waha doctors ki kaami h???neha wapas hospital join nhi karegi bas or hume dobara is bare me baat nhi karni''😡😡

veer came out from the room sadly...


pooja-''shaam ko jaldi aana ok''dhruv kissed her n her daughter-''ok boss kuch special h''

pooja-''aaj mera fast h na karvachauth ka isliye jab tak tum nhi aoge tab tak khaana nhi khayungi''dhruv giggled-''fir to aana hi padega''

on the other side

sapna wear her red saree which she like most becoz it gifted by rudra...she looked at herself in mirror-''rudra mein kaisi lag rhi hun''rudra searching for something-''han han acchi lag rhi ho''😆😆 uff yeh larka phir pitega

she frowned at him-''rudra''in a loud voice...he looked at her n managed to smiled-''wow u looking great beautiful..meri file kaha h pls jaldi dedo''her smiled faded she throw his file on bed-''shaam ko jaldi aa jaana nhi to mein khaana kha lungi tumhare bager''rudra-''ok 😊 cute jodi

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neha-''its ok koi baat nhi veer''veer turned his face n wore his tie-''what ok shaadi ho gyi iska matlab ab kaam nhi kar sakti ho tum...is ghar ke rule meri samjh ke bahar h '' 😕hmmm
meri bhii samajh k bahar ha

she hugged him from behind-''veer relax ..office jao thande dimaag se''he turned n looked at her-''u take care''n about to kiss her when she backed off😆😆

he frowned-''what??''she shyly-''aaj yeh sab nhi chalega-''mera fast h karvachuth ka'' mujhe
k
arvachaut bohat pasand ha but humare inha nehi manaya jata😭

veer-'what???are u mad kal tumhari tabiyat kharab thi or aaj fast..koi jarurat nhi h yeh stupid sa fast karne ki' '

she made her face-''veer yeh fast sab rakhte or mera pehla karvachauth h plsss''

veer-''nhi ka mat;ab nhi chupcap khana kha kar rest karo''she raised her brows-''nhi mein yeh fast jarur rakhungi mera pehla fast h samjhe tum''

he put his bag n moved towards the doors-''sab ko apni marzi chalani hoti h yaha''n left angrily😆


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at evening

she blow air on her beautiful mehndi design when veer returned from office..he looked at her n turned his face...she came towards him-''veer''...he turned-''kya h''she smiled -''wo mujhe thodi itching ho rhi h ''he frowned-''to mein kya karu''

she showed him her hands-''plsss''he came behind her swap her hairs on another side n moving his hand on her back..she closed her eyes-''thank u''n about to move when he grasped her waist n kissed his shoulder-''veer chodo koi dekh lega''

veer--''na chodu to''

she hit him her elbow-''chodo na veer''he smiled n bite her ear-''neha tumhari mehndi kharab ho jayegi dhyaan se''she looked at her palms-''veer plss''he leave her n kissed her forehead she shyly left the room

at night

she took arti n looked at him through sieve ...after that all of them had dinner

veer looked at her she sat quietly on chair...veer passed bowl to her but she refuse to eat anything n went upstairs...veer followed her-''neha ''she was in washroom...😉

after sometime she came out ...veer cupped her face-''neha are u ok what happen''she hugged him tightly...then he felt her grip loosened ...she fainted in his embrace...veer became more worried n shout-''maa...badi maa''😉😉😉😉MERA DUGGU ANEWALA HAI🥳🤗😳😳😳😳😳😳




LOVED THE UPDATE 😃

THANK U SOOO MUCH DIII U KNOW NA WHY😉😳😳😳😳


do continue soon... LOVE YOU DI🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very Nice update Riya 👏.
Loved it thoroughly 😛
...that idiot karan...came in Neha's life again 😲
How dare he to touch her Hand..😡...agar veer vaha hota na ...to shayad apne pairo pe khada nahi reh pata..shukar manao ..u monster 😡
...haash that sonia.came and saved Our Neha ...felt relax
.But I don't think ye karan age kuch nahi karega ...but for now karan chapter has been closed.
Badi rejected Veer's proposal...Neha doctor hoke kaam nahi karegi .but why some old people don't allow females to do work after marriage
...loved Romantic scene between Veer n Neha 😳
But what happened to Neha ...firstly I thought that she might be pregnant ...
but when .after karvachauth.again she felt uneasy...then I worried 😭
...kuch galat baat to nahi h ...Neha thik to hai na...
n she fainted in his arms iska matlab ... ? ? ?
update soon
egarly waiting
Hope Neha is fine
plzz ud soon
love u
Edited by sonalimurat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
for part 72
perfect ud dear..
finally finally finally...This Tanya is out frm Veer & Neha's life..
I m so haapy abt it..
bt jate-jate b kitni nautanki ki is Tanya ne..
Thnk God that Neha knew everything..
& d way she took Veer's side..it was fab....
it's so gud that she mixed that medicine in his dinner..
atleast she know everything now..
even I was scared lyk Veer..
that how will Neha react wen she will get to know abt it..
bt now I m relaxed jst lyk Veer..
d way Veer celebrated Neha's b'day..
that was really fab yaar..
it's really a perfect couple..😊
thn the funny scene came..
Sapna & Rudra's fi8..wow..
Elephant??????
hahahaha😆
Rudra to bahut kam pita mere hisab se..😉
thn all were laughing..
even I couldn't stop myslf to laugh..
I was laughing continuously..
bt finally they wnt for dnnr & Sapna's so called ride..
hahaha..
bt Karan???
Oh no 1 musibat gyi aur dusri tapki...

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