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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
thanks diii😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

nice update

starting main accha tha sab thik se chal raha tha...Everything is Happy happy
but when it proceed towards end ... ye kya ho gaya 😲
Veer ka dream project destroy ho gaya 🤢
Bichare veer ka dil tut gaya 🄺
ye kisine jaan buch k to nahi kiya 😔
thank God Neha veer k sath thi 😊
next day bhi Veer tum itne sad ho
Neha accha kiya jo hospital se directly offce aa gayi
un dono ko Rota dekhkar muje bhi rona aa raha tha 😭
ab jaldi se sab kuch thik kar do
I don't like thier gloomy face šŸ˜•
update soon
lov u

thank u sona😳 for ur lovely comment😃
will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

congrats on new thread dear

sorry late ho gyi but all parts are awesome
loved it


thanks dii😃for ur commentšŸ˜›

its ok di,,,,,,no problem😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Nice to see neha being there with veer...feeling bad for veer.

continue soon.

will update soon
thanks😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sparksfly

awww...

shaadi wale scenes were naughty !! n sweet n cute !! 😳
Nivi is such a gud mom !!! luvd her dialogue !!!!
n veer ne bhi kya line kahi !!
superb wrtng di !! šŸ‘
but ye kya ho gaya !!! 😭
beechara veer !!!
Neha is consolng him well !!
hopefully sab jaldi theek ho jayega !!
i thnk isme us uncle ka haath-paar sab kuch hai !! 😔

thank u sparky😃for ur comment😃
wo to baad mein pta chalega kiske hahth pair h ismešŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
liked both updates!
lovely marriage description!
loved veer-neha scenes! they were cute n romantic!!
and wow nivi to gave shagun bangles to neha!!
liked rudra-sapna scene too!!
ohh no but wht this sad thing happend?
who is behind this fire?
feeling bad for veer
loved neha consoling veer!!

thanks dii for ur lovely commentšŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: geetap


plz update...we waiting

sorry dear will not update today
bt try to update soon...preparing 4 exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

sorry for the late comment..

1stly a big congrats for the new thread..

n im loving the way story is unfolding..

loved it alot..

n veer neha tu best hain...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
part 48

after finishing lunch...she smiled n said-''veer chalo aaj shaam ko hum kahin gumne chalte h jahan tumhaara mann ho''he was looked at her smiled forcefully n said -''aaj nhi fir kabhi chalenge mera mann nhi h aaj''she smiled as she know the reason-''ok fine mein hospital jaati hun''she stood up n moved when he grasped her hand she turned n looked at him...veer stood up n said-''sorry but next time pakka kahin chalenge''she hold his hand-''ok fine veer...koi baat nhi kabhi or chalenge...ab tm jao or apna kaam karo''n then she leave

at evening

as he entered in the house everyone looked at him...he was quite shocked to saw this...shubh came nearer n looked at him angrily-''pali hill par jo company thi wo tumne banwyi thi''he nodded...shubh looked at siddarth n nivi-''dekha humne kaha tha na ki yeh sab veer ne hi kiya hoga...tumne humse bina puche building bnayi wahan or usme aag bhi lag gyi or hume kuch nhi pta chala...kya hm jaan sakte h ki tumne wo company kyun banwayi thi''veer looked at his father n said-''mein aapko nhi bta ssakta;;

shubh gor more angry...sushma came forward-''kyun aisi kya baat h jo tum nhi bta sakte''shubh said loudly-''hume pta hkyun...kyunki ise hmare sath kam karne mein koi interest nhi h yeh apne liye alag company bnana chahta humse alag hokar...''

siddart-''nhi bhai sahab aisi baat nhi h veer aisa kabhi nhi kar sakta wo humaari company ko chodkar kyun alag kuch karega''almost tears in his eyes

shubh turned his face-''wo hum sab nhi jante siddarth par ek baat acchi tarah jaante h ki tumhara beta hmare saath rehne mein hmara kaam sambhalne mein bilkul interested nhi h isliye isne yeh sab kiya bina kisis ko btaye''


dhruv came forward n said-''nhi dad veer ne wo jagah humse pchkar li thi...''shubh looked at him angrily-''humne tumse puchha...abhi hum h is ghar mein to hum is ghar ke fesle lenge tum ya veer nhi...or ek baat or kal se apna office khud sambhalo hume kisi or par bilkul bharosa nhi h''while looked at veer...

shubh-''humne tumhe chairman bnakar bhot badi galti ki lekin hum apni galti ko sudharenge...kal se dhruv apni jagah par baithega...samjhe tum''scolding him...then went to his room everyone was shocked to heard his decision...siddarth n nivi also went to his room...dhruv n rudra came nearer n hugged him-''veer hum h na tumhare sath don't worry''


at night
everyone on dining table except veer...dhruv looked at his room...while shubh said-''dhruv khana khao jab use bhook lagegi to apne aap kha lega''

veer lying on bed buried his face into cushion when pooja came with food...she sat next to him-''veer chalo utho khana kha lo''he turned n said-''bhabhi mujhe bhook nhi h''she pulled his pillow-''tum kya chahte ho ki tumhari wajah se koi khana na khaaye..abhi tak kisine khana nhi khaya''he stood up from the bed n went downstairs with pooja...rudra sapna n dhruv waiting for him on dining table..he sat next to dhruv n pooja served him...all of them happy n eat together

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next morning

dhruv n rudra leave for office with shubh...while siddarth getting ready veer came inside-''papa mujhe aapse kuch baat karni h''siddarth turned n saw him-aao''nivi also came closer-''kya hua veer''he looked at nivi n said-''maa meine kuch galat nhi kiya or na hi mein apni caompany se alag hona chahta hun''siddarth came closer-''humne tumse kaha ki tumne kuch galat kiya h hume pta h ki hmaara veer kabhi koi galat kaam kar hi nhi sakta or wo bhi apni family ke against''he glad-''aap mujhe naaraz to nhi h na''siddarh-''jab tumne kuch kiya hi nhi to hum kyun naaraz honge tumse''then he hugged his son...his tears came from his eyes-''dekho beta tum hmaari takat ho or hmaari pehchan bhi to kabhi bhi koi aisa kaam mat karna jisse koi tumpar ungali uthaye''he nodded...nivi smiled n kissed his forehead-''hum h na tumhaare sath chinta mat karo didi or bhai sahab abhi gusse mein hum unse baat karenge''

diya came n saw all of this-''accha sara pyaar bhai ko hi karenge aap dono or mere liye kuch bhi nhi bacha??''siddarth n nivi laughed n hugged her also''

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neha engaged in her thoughts about veer when peon came-''madam aapse koi milne aya h''she smiled as she knew that he must be veer...she rushed outside n shocked to saw karan...he gazing her then came nearer-''hi neha kaisi ho tum''she smiled forcefulyl n said-''hi aap yahan''

he came more closer-''wo mein mumbai kisi kaam se aya tha to socha apse milkar jaata hum waise aapki behen ki shaadi ho gyi jisse wo pyaar karti thi h na''he smiled n then surprised-''aapko kaise pta chala ki mein yahan doctor hun''he never expect that question from her so he somehow managed n said-''wo kal meine yahan se jaate time aapko hospital se nikalte hue dekha isliye''she was not satisfy with his answer-''lekin mein to kal''but he cut her in between to escaped her one more question-''arey chodiye na yeh baat aap kya hum coffee pee sakte h ek saath''she looked at him puzzled-''nhi mujhe bhot kaam h sorry''then she moved he quickly hold her hand tightly..she was shocked n tried to loosened his grip-''mera hath chodiye''he looened his grip-''im sorry kaam to hota rahega aaiye na mere sath''she was little angry with him-''nhi mujhe bhot kaam h ''then she leave from there...he saw her angrily n then leave


after sometime

she called veer...he picked up the phone-hello''..she smiled n said-''veer kaise ho''

veer-''thik hun...mein baad me baat karta hun''n disconnect the phone ...she was surprised as he didn't behave like this before...she called him again...he picked up the phone n said little rudely-''neha kaha na baad mein baat karta hun pls...''then he disconnect the phone again...she looked at phone with teary eyes

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after two days

dhruv came n gave him two files for checking...he was busy in his files when tanya came to meet him...she came inside his room-''hi veer kaise ho''he looked at her-''thik hun tum yahan''she came closer n said-' kyun tumse milne nhi aa sakti mein''he smiled-'ok ''

she gazing him and said-''veer kaam hi karte rahoge ya mujhse baat bhi karoge''

veer-''bolo kya baat h''

tanya-''kitne din ho gye hum sath mein kahin nhi gye chalo na kahin chalte h aaj''

veer-''nhi tannu mera mann nhi h''she closed his files n grasped his hand-''tumse pucha nhi h meine chalo n rushed outside

in a coffee shop

she enjoyed the coffee...when veer thought about neha...tanya gazing him n said-''veer kya hua uncle ne tumhe chairman ki post se kyun hata diya''

veer-''bas aiase hi unhe mera kaam pasand nhi aya isliye''

tanya-''accha chodo wo sab ab ghar chalte h n thank u mere sath yahn ane ke liye''he smiled-''tumghar jao mujhe thoda kaam h''she looked at him-''mein bhi tumhare sath chalti hun ''

veer-''nhi tum jao mujhe neha se milne jana do din se usse baat hi nhi ki bhot naaraz hogi mujhse''she made her face n said-''ok fine''n leave


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veer reached at hospital n went to her cabin...she was busy in her file when he opened the door...she looked at him then again busy in file...he knew she was very upset...he came closer-''neha''she turned her face...he turned her face towards him-''sorry...accha aaj mein free hun bolo kahan chalna h''

she looked at him-''veer mujhe kahin nhi jana bas tumse baat karne ka bhot man kar rha tha isliye tumhe call kiya im sorry mujhe pata nhi tha ki tu busy ho''he embraced her-''neha us din mein pareshaan tha isliye gusse mein tumhe dant diya im really sorry...but mein tumhe hurt nhi karna chahta tha seriously''she smiled n embraced him-''i love u''he kissed her forehead-''love u too''

after sometime

veer lying in her lap while she caress his hairs with her finger-''veer ek baat bolun''he closed his eyes-''hmmm''

neha-''kya hum dobara se company ka kaam shuru nhi kar sakte''he opened his eyes n looked at her innocent face-''neha tumhe pta h ek company ko construct karne ke liye kitne paise lagte h...''he sat next to her-''neha bhot saare workers chahiye uske liye...or jo bhi building ka haal hua h use todkar bnane mein pehle se bhi jyada paise lagenge...or koi bhi bank dobara mujhe itne saare paise nhi degi''she made her face -''agar mein apni savings ke saare paise doon to bhi kaam nhi hoga''he gazed her face then pulled her more closer-''u know im the luckiest person in the world ki tum mujhe mili neha hum 2 no ki savings se kuch nhi hoga''


she thought something n said-''veer tumne kaha tha ki tumhaare papa ki company abhi tak khaali padhi h to hum
veer smiled n saw her

Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
itne dinno bad i m 1st...

res
~~EDITED~~
since main late comment kr rhi hoon, so meri punishment yeh hki main ek bada sa comment likhon...

maine pad tho bhot pehle liya tha, but main comment edit nhikr paayi thi, mom ne padne ko kaha tha.

so sry di.

agli bar se time pr comment edit karne ka try karungi.

ud was very sad sad, but last main ek hope dekhi h, mujhe neha k dimaag pr proud h,
ho bhi kyun na, h tho aakhirr boi-related humari tarah...haina di??
we brilliant bio- people roxx...

shubh uncle ne veer ko itna daanta,
may b he is angry,
but he loves him, i noe,
isliye tho shubh uncle ek hi bare main maan gye the veer tho chairman banane k liye.

may b voh bhot hurt h, veer ke secret mission se.

but veer ki bhi koi galti nhi h,
its his ambition, aapne aapko prove karna is not bad,.
i m still proud of veer,
like his parents.
they supported him.
nivi n sid are really good papaji, mummyji.

yeh, karan kahan se aaya h...
iski tho maine pichle thread main hi kabar khudhwa di thi na di!...
aapne isse vahan kyun nhi bejha...

koi nhi, ek bar veer ko pata chala na iiske S@@L* k baare main, veer usse vhi hgaad dega.
kabar ki bhi jarurat nhi

and iss tintokali ki tho jaan hi mar ke nhi de rhi.
itni baar popat hoa h iska,
phirr bhi cheep kahin ki, picha nhi chodti.

popat tho neha ka bhi hoa tha, jab veer ne uska phn uthaya n danta.
koi bat nhi, he ws hurt.
lekin neha usse karan k baare main kyun nhi bata rhi ...

veer k paas kam problem h jo neha ek aur usse dede.

kahin neha ka veer ko karan k baare main na batabna, bad main koi problem na lade...

but chalo veer ki problem ka tho hal nikaal hi diya hamari n more veer ki neha ne...

neha, i m proud of u, n yes veer is luckiest.

chalo, tho ab papaji ki hi company ko reconstruct krein...
at least, cost tho kam ho jayegi, bas wrkers chaiye...

but, karan ka iss samay aana,
i m worried.

di, main yeh bilkul nhi dekh sakti ki neha kissi aur ki ho,
she is veer's, and only veer's.

plz...is karan ko neha se dur rakho
veer ko jaldi batao ki karan uski neha k piche pada h

plz, i beg u di.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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