FF:Dreamgirl-Thread 2 Chapters 8-13 {Next Thrd 3}

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anam munir

@anamunir

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#911

Woah a gay guy havin' crush on arni WOW!!!!

Fab. piece once Again!!!!

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#912

great part
what khushi will do now
plz continue soon

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#913

awesome update

dev this will be ur last day

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#914

fabulous update...cant wait for the next part...

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#915

Oh my god she is getting fumed

I think adii is going to get killed...

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#916

i didnt comment on this update as i didnt have time when i read it but after reading the note on UM i came back here just to like and comment, actually am afraid of not getting further pms frm u 😆😆😆

it was an amazing and cute update, cute in a way because jealous khushi always behaves like a kid and cant think properly

OMG Khushi cant resist Arnav 😆😆😆 ofcourse who can resist our hot and sexy mr. irresistable, i cant blame khushi for her weakness 😉😉😉

"Aditi glued to Arnav like a lizard" that line really made me laugh so hard

how dare that gay think Aditi is Arnav's wife 😡 i wanna beat him up n definitly he deserves Khushi's revenge for this in Khushi's own childish style 😉

waiting for the more fights between our beloved couple

keep up the gud work 👏👏👏 i just love ur writing 😊

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#917

ROFL .. I just loved ASR - Aman's conversation !!!

Dev gay 😆😆 Arnav stepped back but BARUN would have freaked out 😆😆

My Khushi is at the top of jealosy when Dev hugged Aditi .. Haha.. 😆 😆

Update soon😛 !

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inspireyosoul

@inspireyosoul

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#918

ritu i love your style of writing and your flow of writing and of course ur imagination and creativity. thank you for putting so much effort into ur piece of work. i really love reading them all. i wish i cud write like u do! :) sending you lots and lots of love all the way from singapore! <3

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#919

Yay, I just finished reading this and must say it's very unlike the other ff. Khushi's nut and bolts are a little loose. I pity poor ASR...entrapped by both Aditi and Khushi. But Aditi's plan to make Khushi jealous is working like crazy.

You're doing an amazing job with the writing and I cannot wait to read further. Toodles :D

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#920

awesome update. god khushi is really jealous. how cute?lol he thought aditi was arnav's wife?poor guy! and now dev chopra's gonna face the wrath of khushi the lioness. coool. thanks for the pm.