SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#811

Another one marvelous chapter from you. You have brilliantly penned their conflicting emotions in this chapter. They both love each other so much. While Swayam wants to grab this chance that destiny (fate), with little help from Sharon's Dadi, has given them, Sharon is too afraid to feel happy again. But the love is there and they surely will come through this together and victorious.

And about that 'knowing the limits and never crossing that limit' part, if only it was that easy to curb the urge to take your loved ones into your embrace when they are right in front of your eyes.

As brilliant this chapter is, looking forward to the next one.

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#812

S p e e c h l e s s.

Everytime I read update of this FF, this is what I feel.

Baz how do write so awesomely yaar, some choice of words were so heart touching. They love each other deeply, but still there is a wall between them, so fabulously you put that part.

Finally they are getting married, I hope to see some good moments between them, enough of the pushing. Swayam should be able to get her back asap. She deserves happiness after going through so much

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#813

Wonderful update, though chota by ur standards, but I understand u have time constraints. I luvd teh dilemma u put them in and teh way the matter was handled - showing the delicate phase that they have reached in their relationship and it will be interesting to watch how the next part is handled...update soon

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#814

I loved how Swayam walked quietly at the back of Sharon and her Dadi at first and her Dadi was so excited for their wedding.

The moments where she realizes that his wound is bleeding again and at first, she tries to be aloof but can't help but help him in the end was beautifully described. The longing for each other and yet one who does not want to get broken again while the other does not want to break the other again, I loved how you expressed those feelings in Sharon and Swayam respectively.

Looking forward to see how the marriage will play out and whether Swayam will be able to win Sharon back or not.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#815

BaZ my dear you are simply fantastic re, kya mast likka hai, the pain they are feeling 😭 you are marvellous re, well abi yahi hai but will be baki meri dosth for more comments

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#816

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77489821

Unres my comment 😛

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#817

Lovely update Baz 😊

Sharon's dadi rocks..Dadi made Swayam smile YAY. Sharon trying to ignore any eye contact with Swayam...both of them are in so much love with each other but still fighting with dere feelings. Love how Swayam was continuously staring at Sharon while Sharon was taking care of him...once again beautifully written by you. Looking forward to read next update...SwaRon wedding...hope Swayam is able to winback her trust. Thank you for the PM...update soon. 😊

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Thank God for Sharon's Dadi!!!If she wasn't there Swayam would never have said anything...Sharon is so luccky she got to be so close to Swayam!!!I loved the way you described Swayam's pain...it was very detailed and beautiful update ...continue soon and pm me when you do!!!

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#819

Hey Baz thanks for update yar
i love it
sharon dadi too much naughty nd convince sharon to marry him
on the other hand sharon in dillema what to do.
She don't want hurt herself one more time bt due to her dadi she has to marry him.
Nd swayam hurt by her harsh tone towards him n pace of her n start bleedin from his wound.
Sharons heart felt bad cuz of hurting him nd started to wiping blood n bandaging him.
Sharon told him about his request nd instantaly agreed abt this.
Sharon felt bad bt ignore it nd swayam more determine to win her back
love it