SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 74

Originally posted by: Hoppy

Baz pls pls pls update, just cant wait to read the next part, pls update na😭

awww will try my best to update by tomorrow :P

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

awww will try my best to update by tomorrow :P

Excellent job !!!!
Again cliffhanger.
Wondering whose his?:(
Well penned!
Hope Sharon accepts swayam soon.
After all life is about forgive nd forget!!
Do update soon nd thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

Omg, my heart pained reading this update. I some where knew from back then when Sharon met Swayam that may be this girl has suffered more than Swayam, thought you never mentioned what but i thought. But god she lost everything she had, her parents, their respect, their business, her happiness.. everything. I felt really bad and as i am very emotional person i dropped down a tear or two when Sharon was telling Swayam that how much has she suffered.

True, he thought of Kriya's parents respect but what about her, it was her damn wedding after some days and he just left her to face everything all alone. I guess if he would have told Sharon she might have helped him and if not she would have been the first one to ask him to marry Kriya but what he did was very wrong, though it was for helping Kriya but still it was painfully wrong for a girl who set her dreams for beautiful future life with him but they all got crushed brutally. ...yes it was indeed wrong for the girl who did nothing else but dream to start a new life, a new family with the love of her life :)

Shit, Swayam stabbed the bottle to himself. What now? Will he survive? I hope so. But the main thing is that what will Sharon do what she will come to know about that Swayam is in this condition!

The most irritating thing is that, that "unknown physo" is still not revealed! I am waiting for him to be revealed like mental case here! 😆🤣...he will be revealed soon.

Thanks for such an amazing, emotion filled update.

P-S : Update super fast and Pm me.

thanks so much for the comment Tanya..loved it <3

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

Excellent job !!!!
Again cliffhanger.
Wondering whose his?:(
Well penned!
Hope Sharon accepts swayam soon.
After all life is about forgive nd forget!!
Do update soon nd thanks for the pm.

thank you so much for the comment.

Originally posted by: --Rose--

omg omg omg:O

hillarious update yaar.....pardon me..why was it a Hilarious update?

feeling really bad for swaron:-(

why did u end here???
please plz plz update the next part soon... cant wait...

loving the story:-):-):-)

thanks for commenting dear.

Originally posted by: Shona_Mayur

Woah I am speechless...I had not expected the ending at all. I knew that Swayam would be hurt but I never thought he would be that spontaneous...I felt soo bad for Sharon this part and I was actually very angry at Swayam even though I know that Swayam only did that to save Kriya's name but at the cost of Sharon's. God, I felt soo bad for her. I really hope they end up happy. I know that there is lot more to her story which I am dying to find out. Anyways, it's an awesome update. So many emotions in one part. Please cont. soon. And thanks for the PM.

thank you so much for commenting..means alot.😊

Originally posted by: shaani2209

I had tears in my eyes...i dnt think i need to say anything more baz?

thanks for the pm.,..

awww thank you so much Shaani🤗🤗

Originally posted by: marauder

Sorry I couldn't reply after the last chapter. I seriously wanted to. But the day I read you updated the next chapter. ...awww😛...Any way the way the last chapter had ended there was a deja vu feeling anf I had expected something big happening. And yeah I have expected that it won't good. ...ahhh u r the first one to say that...everyone else told me that I ruined a romantic atmosphere while I on the other hand don't understand why people thought it would be a romantic update🤓So I was in one way pretty much ready for this chapter but still the force with which it struck me I was completely blown away. Marvelously penned chapter which I bet would have left everyone with a heavy heart if not in tears....thank you so much this truly means alot.

From the moment Sharon was introduced this feeling of something ominous happening with her , something too huge was growing in my mind. The cryptic conversation of her with grandmother was intriguing from the beginning but still I had not anticipated the scale of pain which she have to face. The entire conversation was gut wrenching leaving me completely numb. The way you penned the chapter, the way she broke down everything just left me completely paralyzed in a way. Great writing...thank you once again.. Waiting for the update now.

I always eagerly wait for ur comments bhai..they are so mature, detailed and always inspire me not to mention also never fail to bring a smile on my face...so thank you for appreciating my work...means alot.😳