IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#931

I loved it. It was very well written. You did a very good job in making us understand payal and akash's relationship. I love how each character in your FF has so much depth, that I want to know more about them. Great update!!!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#932

wow...at first it waxs a diferent couple but then i as👍🏼

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720865

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#933

It was beautiful update.
Specially
-description of sister's strength.
-cause of arnav's present nature.
-akash's way of handling his wify
-and the last para of realization,understanding,pondering and way 2 help arhi.:)
loved it.

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SARA

@zuaireah

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#934

The understanding Pyash shares is excellent. Their bonding towards each other is awesome. Well off course Khushi is going to keep on fighting Arnav's demons. She's the only one capable of doing that...loved he update...

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Anjali250194

@Anjali250194

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#935

Wow, this isn't just a story, its a complex portrayal of different feelings and you really understand the depth and clarity of human emotion. Seriously, every chapter is thrilling and all the characters are like real people. I see every character in a new light and I like how you take the time to explore their innermost feelings because it makes the story more realistic and it's easier to understand everyone's motivations. I read this story in one go because it is completely addictive and I really can't wait to see this Shyam plot sorted out even though it seems secondary to the stories playing out with each character as they try to understand themselves. Looking forward to see what happens next!

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#936

amazinggg as always
this is sooo gr8
especially the convo the understanding...
and the last part was gr8
:)

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#937

I really liked this part!
Nooo, not because of the love making, but more because of Payal. She brings a new face to her personality in this chapter and I think that's exactly what was needed of her character.

Update was great!

Update soon! :)

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Satina

@Satina

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#938

wow! nice update! thanks for the pm!

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#939

Res

Reading the whole story now

Might take a while :D

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#940

I really liked the chapter for a couple of reasons. I think the characters of Akash and Payal have been massacred in the show and it is great to read a story where the dominant characteristics of the two become their strengths as well. For themselves and to help others. Elder sisters are supposed to watch out for their younger siblings but they are entitled to their own mistakes as well.

I liked the description of Khushi as the one who opened Pandora's box and who must now deal with all that she has unleashed. The one characteristic of Khushi that I detest is the self-sacrificing bit. I would love to see her stand and fight for what is rightfully hers. Between the last chapter and this one, i kind of see it happening here. Khushi made it clear that she would not be a doormat, Payal made it clear that she would not let Khushi be a quitter.

Passion also exists beyond the land of ArHi , thank you for bringing that out.