IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz on the new thread! Update soon please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Thread 3 already?
Congratulations! 🥳

I hope you continue to get more!
I freaking love this FF, you see! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on thread 3!!
update soon
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Congratulations on the new thread! :)
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Congrats on the new thread dear.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No Words...Simply- No words...to describe how awesome your writing is, and addictive your FF has become. Hearty Congrats on Thread 3 and hope it is as gripping as the previous two.

You remind me of the adjective someone used to describe Roger Federer's tennis game (forgive the sports analogy, I am a tennis freak)- that his game reminded everyone of how the game should be played.

Your writing, characterization, plot development- sigh...reminds us all how we should be able to write in an ideal world 😃 Can't say more than Hats Off!! 👏

What I particularly loved was the unexpected symmetry across different chapters-

In Chap 24- """Khushi, being Khushi, breathed his name, her voice rapt, her heart at peace, and closed her eyes in joy.

She was home.""

Followed in Chapter 27 by- """Before sleep claimed him, fully, Arnav Singh Raizada breathed Khushi's name, his voice rapt, his heart at peace, and closed his eyes in joy.

He was home."""

Loved the subtle humor even in the darkest of situations- the sentence about Devi Mayya "not being currently on the premises" made me crack a smile despite the otherwise bleak intensity of the Arnav- Khushi confrontation scene 😊

Also like the fact that you have shown Khushi still wary of fully trusting Arnav though she has made it clear she loves him and had been faithful to him throughout. Make him work for her trust!! 😊

Apart from all the misunderstanding and cruel behavior which he has to atone for, feel he still needs to assure her of his fidelity going ahead. After all, here is the man who still needed her assurance of being always his own khushi, forever, and never anyone else's 😃 despite knowing he was her first and only...Would Khushi not expect or need something along the same lines, especially from a man who she knows adores her, but has been a playboy in the past with numerous flings?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i read all ur chapts at one go now...it was spectacularly wriitten...i have sent u a buddy req plz accept it...nd do me 4 the next updates...btw congrats 4 the new thread...👏
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i read it in one go...tht was supereb...simply awesome..dun have words to discribe
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I read the whole ff in one go!
Awesome writing👏👏👏
I like the way u give importance to each and every character.
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Congrats on the new thread! :D

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