D3 FF-Its To Late Too...(ff name changed)note pg31

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

awesome part...loved it very much

rey ragging kria hahhaah too good and kria danced too well...poor rey

and rey and kria staying in same house ...awesome

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

it was fab rey kria same house loved it

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-bitz-

@-bitz-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Awesome Start ! Lol KriYaansh fites r fun to see...!

waiting for d next update SwaRon in rehersal hall 😳 and ViHa ki first tym talk 😆

update soon!

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Madhurya

@maddieee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

very good update sweety... Sharon fan of swayam nice... loved swayam's attitude...

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yasu2810

@yasu2810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

wat a lovely update dr...
well keep it up dr...
nice...

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

aaayyyeee !!!

kya update he !!! maza aa gya padke srsly !!!

swaron me sharon despo lg rhi h yaar...thoda editing kr uske character ki...i dun want her to look despo..plleeesh :)

swayam as usual i luvv him !!! :)

n kriyansh wer osm too...i luved d ragging scene !!!! yaar kriya ko dance ko agli baar describe kio..i desperately want rey to feel damn shocked *lol*

m luvin dis ff a lot...dekh jo tune cment dia tha muje usse bhi bada cment dia :P:P:P:P:P:P

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: swaron502
aaayyyeee !!!
kya update he !!! maza aa gya padke srsly !!!
swaron me sharon despo lg rhi h yaar...thoda editing kr uske character ki...i dun want her to look despo..plleeesh :)
swayam as usual i luvv him !!! :)
n kriyansh wer osm too...i luved d ragging scene !!!! yaar kriya ko dance ko agli baar describe kio..i desperately want rey to feel damn shocked *lol*
m luvin dis ff a lot...dekh jo tune cment dia tha muje usse bhi bada cment dia :P:P:P:P:P:P

oye pagal just wait n watch chill sharon is not despo at all if u are talking abt he entry scene of sharon tht is she was just lost in swayam's smile who wont be lost in him she just likes swayam n is sweet towards him but swayam dosent like dazzlers at all
sorry rey dance describe karna nahi ata tu likh ke dede main add kar lungi😛
hat main ise jyada bada comment likhthi hoon roz tere ff pe

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medha

@SavageMissMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

nice

plz pm me fr nxt part

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

continue it n dont forget to pm me!

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

hey guys back with chap 2
before the chap i want to clear tht sharon is not a despo for swayam here she just likes him nothing n is sweet towards him n his team but swayam dosent like the dazzlers

CHAP 2

BOYS LOCKER ROOM

vic:tu pagal hai kya tune ragging ki??????

rey:i knw yaar main raggign nahi karta par us kriya ko main handle nahi kar saktha she is getting on my nerves pehle mere ghar main rehkar mere ghar ko infect kar rahi hai n then mere dad ko makkan laga rahi hai

nil ebters n he hears the last part

nil:dad ko makkan hen tere dad hospital main nahi hai

rey n vicky:kyu

nil:arey unke peeche madhumakiyan joh ghum rahi hongi

vic:starts laughing n says :gud one nil mere bhai

they see rey is not lauhging

vic:rey pagal u dint get it nil ne double meaning liya hai

rey:wht do u mean??????

nil:arey i meant ki madhu makiyan matlab madhu ladkiyan n vicky n nil satrst dng ROFL

rey:guys shut up its not funny

swayam enters the locker room n goes towards his locker his locker was open he takes some books n starts reading it vicky's locker was just besdie swayam's

vicky was talking to nil n vicky n he bymistake opens swayam's locker

swa:yeh kya kar rahe ho tum vciky dekh nahi sakthe😡

vic:arey chill yaar itna badak kyu rahe hoo main koi chor nahi hoon

swa:but still i dnt want you to do anything to me

nil:dude mind ur language kkk use galti hogayi ab

swa:mujhe ek baat samaj nahi ati ki tum dono aise galti karte hi kyu ho

rey:swayam just chill woh doon sirf mera mood theek kar rahe the

swa:but still rey ur freinds need to be serious at tymes i kne yeh joh unhone kiya koi badi galti nahi hai but just telling them ki unke life main jab prob ayneig tyab yeh log mazak karenge ya use solve m just helping them by telling them i mean mazak karo par itna bhi nahi ki tu apne app ko hurt karo

rey n nil were just staring at vicky n vicky smile just disaapeared he jsut walked out from there

nil:thanx swayam tumne hamri abhout badi prob dur kardi while making vicky sad tumhe uske samne yeh sab bolna jaroori tha???????

swa:matlab?????

nil goes behind vicky

rey:swayam kcuh aisa hai vicky min joh koi nahi samjhega aur jis din koi samjh gaya na us din vicky ke life ka sabse best din hoga tum jitna seriosuness ki baat kar rahe ho na woh serousness hum sabse jyada tumse ase jyada vicky main hai joh tum nahi samjhoge

rey too leaves behind vicky

swa:wht???vicky n serious?????lagta hai rey bhi nil vicky jaisa hi hai
dazzlers kabhi apne like main serious nahi ho sakthe sab log inlcuding sharon
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SWARON

swayam enterd the rehershal all to take is stuff he saw dazzlers were not there so he thought he will reherse for the last tym here alone before the dazzlers enterd

he started dancing

when suddenly sharon enters thinking no one is in the rehershal she sees swayam n says:tum yaha????saying this she was abt to leave when

swayam stops his dancing n says :ohhh toh tum jaa rahio hoon sir ko bataneki main yaha rehers kar raah hoom meri complain karne?????

sha:no main toh sirf jaa rahi thi taaki tum apni pratice last baar complete kar lo m seriously sorry main tumare jale pe namak nahi cheedakna chathi

swa:m sorry woh main m very sorry

sha:its kkk

swa:sharon mai chaltha hoo ise opehle ki tumari team yaha agaye

sha:swayam ek min ek Q puch sakthi hoon??????

swa:yes he said while cleanijg of his sweat from his face n smiling

sha:tum mere team ko itna hate kyu karte hoon

swa:see sharon mujh iss baaremain baat nahi karni

sha":swayam plzzz

swa:kkk lok main yumare team ko haste nahi karta i just cant tolerate ur team mujhe tumare team ka style hi nahi pasand i just dnt like youl but hate nahi karte rey i mjust cant say anyhting abt him

vicky n nil unhe sirf pranks aur dusro ka mazak karna acha lagta hai woh apni life main kabhi bhi yeh nahi samaj payuenge ki logo ke feelings ke sath kelen e ka kya hota hai

simmi n rinni-sorry to say woh tumari chamchi baan kar gum thi hai

aur tum...

sha:wht????ek min u mean to say simmi n rinni meri chamchi hai woh mujhe follow karti hai ??????then i think ur blind MR swayam shikawat

woh meri best friends hai mere liye care karti hai ha unke care dikhane ka style aalag hai par woh joh bhi karti hai mere liye karti hai woh meri chamchi nahi hai par tum kaah samjhoge tum nahi samaj paoge

shatron was angry n hurt she was abt to lave wen swayam says:

swa:woh dono tumre baaremain choahchti ha par kya tum unke baare main sochthi hoon????kya tumhne socha hai unke baaremain

sharon thinks n he was right she had never thought abt simmi n rinni

sharon puts her hand over her fance n starts crying she sits down on her knees crying

swayam was shoked he dint knw wht to do he never meant to hurt her

he goes to her he too sits down near her

swa:sharon chill m really sorry agar tumhe bura laga toh i dint rally mean to hurt u...

n sharon hugs him n was still crying

swayam was shcoked but he could understand cuz wen sumone cries they dnt realise what they are dng so he was there he dint hug her back but he thought why cant i hug her back????????

swa:sharon are u kkk

sharon still hugging swayam n cryign says:sayad tum sahi hoo pura coll yehi sochtha hai ki woh meri chamchiya hai but they care for me n i n not a nice freind n i cant ever be n was crying more

swayam after this hugs her back

swayam:sharon n he breaks the hug listen m sorry aur ab tumari team ati hi hogi hum kal baat karenge iske baare main kal humhe milna hai rite event disscuss karna hai so be ready bye

sha:thanx n sorry

swa:wht???

sha:thanx mujhe console karne ke liye n sorry tumhe hug karne ke liye

swayam just smiles at her n walkes awway

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KRIYAANSH

rey was all set to go home he was sitting in his car n finding water his car was parked near the BB court

suddeny kria cumes

kria:chale she says to rey

rey:excuse me tum mere sath nahi arahi hon

kria:aisa kisne kaha???????

rey:maine *smirking*

kria:tum sayd bhool rahe hoon tumre dad ne kaha tha ki tum mujhe roz coll se ghar le agaoge bhool agye

rey:no waysss tum mere sath kabhi nah all the ppl were staring at them

there was no divide but still rey was a dazzler

rey:tum kabhi mere ghadhi main mere sath n ahi baithogi

kria:acha

rey:yes

kria opens the door of the car n sits inside

rey is just staring at her

rey:wht the hell??????????

kria:ab chale plzzz ya fir ghar late pohuchne ka irada hai

all the ppl where shocked by kria's actions

rey:firtsly how dareu ki tum aise mere ghadhi main fir mujhe order de rahi hoon itna hi hai toh tum chalo ghahdi

kria:theek hai move

rey:heloo i was kidding main tumhe meri ghadhi nahi dunga my car is presious for me kkk

kria:nahi main chala ungi aur appse bhi fast chalungi get it

rey:Acha theek hai par ek baat reind kar du tumhe yeh dehradun jaisa chiota seher ani hai yeh mumbai hai mumbai

kria:as if mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha rite????

rey:who knws he gets up n goes n sits i kria's place n kria in rey's place

rey:yaad rakhna ghar hum 15 min main pauch jane chahiye 30 min ka rashta hai dekhthe hai tum kaise le jati hoon

kria started the car very slow

rey started lauging

rey:ahahahahahahah yeh hai tumara style?????

kria:jsut wait n watch rey

kria starts the car n she was driving so fast rey even coudlnt imagine

rey in is mind:yeh madam ko itna fast ghahi chalana ata hai god mujhe laga ki...

kria sees the police standing there so she stoped the car at time propperly as the signal was there she ditn even make the policeman think she was driving so fast n she was actign inocent😉

rey was shcoed

after the siganl gave the green signal kria started slowly but then started her rash driving she was cotrling the car so well

rey in his mind:lagta hai degradun main bahout drive karthi thi

the reach home

rey was speechless

kria gets out of the car n sits on the front of the car

kria looks at the watch n says 13 min

rey was drinking water he spat it all out n said:wht??????

kria:13 min dekha maine kaha tha mujhe challenge mat karna waise akl tumari baari hai dekhthe ha ki kal hum coll 13 min ke baad puchthe hai yaa 13 se pehle she went in smiriking

rey:god i will kill her he ran behind her

rey:heloo tum samjhti kya ho ha kria is just walking n rey behind her

rey":main tumse baat kar raha hoon get it kria kria kria listen

kria goes to her room rey enters

rey goes to kria takes her hand n makes her turn owards her

rey:samjhti kya ho ha tum apne aopp ko jyada attitude mat chuck karo bhool gayi mere ghar main reh rahi ho tum agar mujhe challenge kia toh coll main tumari life out of control hogayegi

kria:dekhthe hai

rey:ahhh i hate u

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this was chap 2

plzz zlike n comment

precap:viha talk

6th dancer for weaklings😳😳