D3 FF-Its To Late Too...(ff name changed)note pg31 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was super duper awesome
loved it
love's kria's attitude...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow jst so gud...keep wrtng...nd do pm me...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Akshu part2 was nice...swayam consoling sharon...n their hug..it was so cute...luved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...yar it was amazing... just nw i read all the parts and they wr awesome.. loved it...😉 do pm me 4 ur next part will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was tooo good! Swayam itna rude kyu he? :S ahaan!! And kria ki rash driving was awesome! Sharon hugging swayam! Cutieee it was!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late comment.
so it's a hate story where Kria lives in Rey's house but i know soon he will start loving her.
Nice car driving scene n she irritated him to d core.
Update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update ..loved it ...cont soon dear n thnx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it was amazing...update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Akshu its very nice concept...i love this new attitude rey and swayam...nd sharom having soft corner for swayam thats really interesting...and kriya still not the part of weaklings its fairly new track...please update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys sorry for the delay!!!

m really sorry hope youl like it
CHAP 3
kriyaansh get in to the house n rey sees his dad n goes to him
rey:dad this not done kkk
rey' dad:why???
kria:uncle
rey's dad:kria how was ur first day beta n calls her in for a hug
she goes n hugs him side ways
she was on the left side n rey cumes i n hugs his dad from the right side like a 5 year old kid
kria in her mind:main joh karti hoon yeh kyu karta hai
rey in his mind:yeh meri har presous cheez ho kyu lena chathi hai pehle dad fir mera ghar fir mera coll i hope dance n friends ko na lele
kria:Acha tha uncle but ksi ne meri ragging ki
rey looked at ehr n gave her tht na na na na nan look
kria is giivng him a fake smile
rey's dad:acha rey tumhe paat hai iisne ki ragging
rey:nahi dad mujhe nahi pata dnt worry main kria ka bhaout acha khayal rahunga pressreing on bahout acha
kria is glarign at him now
rey's dad:theek ahi ab tum dono fresh ho jao aur jaldi ajao khane ke liye common common
kria:thanx uncke love u n she was gonna break the hug when rey hugs his ada mor tightly n says
rey:dad i lvoe u more than anyone
kria gives him the whteva look n walks up the stirs
rey was gng when rey's dad stops him
rey's dad:yeh kya tha rey????woh hamri guest hi nahi meri best freind ki beti hai n smriti trusted me alot thts why usne kria ko hamre ghar rakha
rey plzz mere liye be nice with kria
rey:dad aagr kria mere ath acha rahegi toh main bhi acha rahunga
n he leaves
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at night dinner
kria n rey enter at the same tym
kria n rey sit opp each other
rey' dad had gone for a party so only kriyaansh at home
kria was getting bored cuz she dosent have a boring dinner she n her parenst have proble with eachother but still she enjoyed sumtymes there
rey was also bored cuz he use to talk to his dad
rey:kria tum kcbn bolgi plzz mujhse aisa diner nahi hoga
kria:mujhse bhi nahi par hum bat kise karemge
rey:ek dusre se dumbo
kria:no no main apse baat nahi karungi
rey:pzz meri maa baat karlo i cant have this tpye of dinner
kria:theek hai tum start karo
rey:kkk f9 tum apne baaremain kuch batao
kria:kyu taaki jab appka dinner khatam hoon toh app coll main mujhse badla le sakho????
rey:wht??????????????????
kria:mujhe jydaa kuch pasand nahi hai
rey:main apna batao????i love dancing n my freinds thye are my life
kria:mujhe tennis pasand hai aur batminton m into all this dance n all
rey: acha par mere ragging thing main thot umne acha dance kiya????
kria:i cant dance properly
rey:are u kdding em u can dance properly
kria:maine kaah na i cant dancwe properly woh toh bas ek baar dance sikha trha i mean woh dance toh kar dia warna i cant dance
rey:kkk ab dinner khatam toh eenmity back so bye
kria:i knw tht n they leave opp sides
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it was 12 noon at night n rey's dad was still not back😆😆😆
rey had gone for a bath😆😆😆😆
he came out in his track n he was shirt less his towel was around his neck
he was drying his hair his door was half open
kria walkes into his rom without knocking
she sees rey shirless n she turns rey sees her n turns ti his other side both were facing thier back towards eachother
rey:lknock nahi kar sakthi tum????
kria:kncok????tum darwaza kula rakoge toh main kya karu waise mujhe sapna thodi ayega ki tum 12 baje nahaoge tumri room ki light on thi so i thought main aake tum batao ki
rey:wht ha samjhti kya ho tum apni app o mere room mainkncok kare bna agayi
kira:arey heloo main desperae nahi hoon tumhe dkh ne ke liye nahi hi tumri six packs dekhne ke liye
rey:kyu?????kyu nahi dekha tumhe ab toh tumhe dekhna hi hoga mere 6 packs
kria:matlab????
rey turns towards kria walks towards kria
caths her one arm makes her turn towards him n takes his other hand n catches her other arm m pulls kria near him
kria's hand automatically goes bang on rey's chest
kria was shocked by rey's sudden action
she stooped breathing for a min
rey was too shocky hs own action he lookd at kria n looked at her innocent face n got lost in her face kria was lookign down
rey pulled her more close to him to make her look into his eyes
kria looks at him in shock
rey realises wht he was dng he leaves kria n kria rey turn to thier other side
rey:ab dekh liya na jao ab yaha se
kria:mr reyaanash singhania maine kuch nahi dekha nahi mujhe kuch dekhna hai u beteer get this main yaha ai thi kyu ki uncle ka phone aya tha he will be back i sum tym n she leaves
rey:shit yeh mujhe ho kya agay tha????
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next day sharon was walkign with cd's in her hand as she was gng to the rehershal hall
she had many cd's she bangs inti sumone n all the cd's fall down she looks up to see it was neha who she banged into
sharon n neha:sorry
vicky cumes from back :how dare u bang into sharon ha
sha:vcky forget it its over it was my mistake agar meri mistake nahi hoti u thuink i wouldnt have said sorry so no fights peave lets go
vic:aise kasie maafi mango pointg towards neha
neha:main tumar nakrani nahi hoon samjhe maine already sorry bol diya hai
vic:maine toh nahi suna
sha:god vicky we are getting late lets go
swa:ek min
swa:sharon tumari team e sorry ke litye itna bada drama create karti hai
sha:wht do u mean maine kya kiya?????
swa:tumne sorry tak nahi bola n ur freind vicky is argueing i mean how are u guys ha???kisi ki feelingski parwa ahi tum lgog ko sorry bolna is...
sha:stop it swayam
note:she has a crush on swayam it dosent mean she will forget her friends
she will support her frinds too
sha:maine bila tha sorry if u nt knw ha n i dnt need to give u an explanation get it chalo vicky
kria n rey were watchign this
kria:yeh kya ho raha hai????
rey:kuch nahi 2 dance team ke beech ladai
n he leaves
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weaklings in the common room
swa:samaj nahi aaraha 6th dancer kahase dunde
vishaka:i knw man is coll main koi itna acha dance nahi kar saktha
bharat:ab kya kare yaar yeh toh locha hogaya
amar:eyh kyla ho raha hai peele
neha:matlab?????
amar:woh dekko
they she tht some students were watchign sum video n enjoying
vishaka:lets check out dude
swa:an we see the video
a boy:ya yapar rey tried tio rag a new girl but she chopped him
weaklings see te video n were smiling like hell
weklings:mil gayi 6th dancer
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bharat:ab yeh ladki ko dundenge kaise????
amar:woh manegi kyla
vishaka:dude positive socho main aur neha use manalenge
neha:sahi kaha vishkaa ne
swa:guys wo dekha wohi hai na kriya
vikshaka n neha common go
vishaka n neha go in to thwe canteen amar bharat s wayam take a nearest tabke to them n sit
neha:hello kri.
vishaka kicks her
neha:heloo kasii hai tum
kria:hey kya main appko janti hoon?????
vishaka:nahi hu bas suna ki tum nahi ho so we thogth of helping u
kria:thts so sweet of youl aaao na baitho
neha:m neha n she is vishaka
kria:wait amin app dono kahi weakling dance tream ke members th nahi?????aj subah ki fight dekhi thi maine
vishaka:kosni fight?????
nhea:woh she narrates the whole inccident
swa:maine kuch jyada hi bol diya sharon ko
vishaka:ha hum wohi hai kria
kria:appko mera naam kasie paat chala
neha:woh bas asehi
bharat:yaar yeh ladiyan kahi girls talk karna toh shru nahi kiya na'
swa:guys shut up
neha:acha kria tum dance karti hoon kya????
kriya:dance??????ha karti hoon but ache se nahi
vishak:are u mad dude u dabce awesome
kria:nahi vishaka i cnat dance woh oh maine ek sewunce seekha tha but i can dance trsut me
neha":kria u cna dance
kria:no i cant neha
neha:yes u can aur tum ahmri 6th dancer banogi
kria':kya????no ways nm sorry
vishaka:plzz kria its imp for us ab tum bhi is coll ka hisa ho tumn dekha aj kya hua tha subah plzzz man jao
neha:ha kria plzz just for us plzzz hum aur kuch nahi bolege plzzz
swaym .bharat,amar-sorry plzz kria man jao
kria:but dekho main theek ahi main karungi
neha n vishka:wht?????
swa:tho tum ahamri team ki 6th dancer banogi
kria:ha sirf tum lggo ke liye aur is coll ke liye
nhea:thanx alot kria n hugs her
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sharon was gng home when swayam meets her in the parking lot
swa:sharon ek min
sharon was still angry with swayam
sha:kya hai swayam
swa:m sory woh mujhe paat nahi tha m really sorry i shoudlnt have reacted like tht
sha:its kk not looking at him
swA:m sorry sharon seriously
sharon dosent listen o him n walks towards her car
swayam gets angry n goes behind her as doon as she opens the door of the car he closes it
swayam:i m talking to u n u are ignoring me
sharon urns towards swayam n says:kyu na ignore karu main tumhe ha
swa:cuz ...m sayign sorry aur tum atleast answer toh karo
sha:tum yeh chathe ho na main tumhe maaf karu theek hai maaf kiya ab jao plzzz
swa:sharon
he makes her turn towards him self
swa:tum ro rahi hoon listen m sorry agar tumhe bura laag toh m really sorry
sha:no iots not cuz if u waise chodo i m gng its just my life dnt borther swayam bye n she leaves
swa:life??????
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hey guys thus was chap 3 m sorry for less swaron but nexct tym more swaron
precap:6th dancer announced

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