SS: Abandoned Eyes. Note pg 58. - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
Man khushi's dream was just veryy intense...and she woke up...woah...now just waiting for the next update...
Cheerzzz...for ur work...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

Just stumbled upon this fiction through the forum and OMG, the emotions you emote by painting such vivid picture of Khushi's struggle against the darkness and Arnav's strength against despair is powerful. Beautiful, brilliant work :)


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: winiwonka

Lovely.. everyone's emotion was portrayed.. even the Prakash brothers.. loved the fact that someone thinks human of them.. If Dadiji ever treats them like she treated Khushi today (calling them "naukar" .. i mean seriously?? Whats wrong with them?? ).. ok there's nothing I can do about it but I'm glad you wrote about them :)


Kudos!!!



Lets not go to dadi i may go on protest to ban her. Yuk! Horrible being definetely not human. Thanks for the comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! That was so... damn SWEET...she's finally awake...i feel so HAPPY right now...man, i totally LOVE this SS...u r a wonderful writer😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ppl thank you for ur replies as I had earlier stated, If I strike upon something I may write a sequel.

So here it is...

The Glory of First Love.

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Posted: 13 years ago
i really liked it!!! nice part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful beautiful beautiul story
it made me cry, sooo beautifully written wow...hats off 2 u...
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Originally posted by: Arshiarnav1741

beautiful beautiful beautiul story

it made me cry, sooo beautifully written wow...hats off 2 u...



Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ‘šŸ‘thanks..great job...superb.šŸ‘...šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
U know what!!!this is the first FF that made me cry from start to finish!!!
u r seriously super duper marvelously i cant remember sooo many adjectives to praise u!!!!!
seriously!!!thank god i came across this...if not hell what would i have missed!!!
moving on to thread two please dont ever stop your writing is that good that u should never stop ever!!!

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