SS: Abandoned Eyes. Note pg 58.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

I feel so bad for both of them

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JJ15

@JJ15

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

I love how you described Anjali as the mother and Arnav the little child. An emotion-filled update from Arnav. I want her to wake up. One word from her is enough to satisfy him at this stage.

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

first of all if you end this one so soon i will heart broken (seriously) this is one of the best FF that i have ever read and one of the fewest ones that i continued to read from the beginning to end (in this case ongoing)

i loved this chapter the way you described arnav's condition my hands are trembling right now and im typing like a maniac

i loved the effect you gave to the situation, trembling hands, numbers not being dialed, phone dropping amazing!

i loved how he gathered the rain and made sure she enjoyed it too, was too touching<3

and the part where he remembered their first rain and her telling him about DM was so apt

thanks for the Pm and i realllyyy hope you continue the way you had planned and i reallyy want her to recover just cant take the sad ending hehe<3

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

great updates.wish khushi to wake up soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

wake her up doing let her die she needs to come back for him she needs to come to destroy snake asr will die without her loved the update thanks for the pm