New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#3 link#4 pg140 - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago
15 minutes more guys 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
well am glad that u r not only going to show him repenting and trying hard to get her back, but she also becoming strong and not remain a weakling...
normally stories have reflected only him repenting , whereas her character remains static...or making her look like some abla naari who had to undergo all the trials and waiting for him to realise his mistake and then win her back..
i am sure this story will be completely different
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Posted: 13 years ago
well i did not think of all these.any way by this note many people doubts would be cleared piya di😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah piya di kya teaser i luved it.waiting for my sherni geet in action
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I promise I will never break your trust and yes once again I am telling you Geet is not an abla naari in this FF she is a strong girl who knows what is best for her and who is capable enough to take her decisions.
love-Piya
PART 23

Maan: Mujhe tumse chutkara chahiye I want divorce dammit [I want u to go away from my life forever I want divorce dammit]

The sindoor slipped from her hand as her entire world collapsed in a matter of seconds' it seemed that she had constructed a house from a pile of cards and today a gust of wind was enough to destroy the existence of her house'

Maan: Kya hua ab bhi samaji nahi? [What happened r u still confused?]

Geet was standing like a lifeless soul

Maan: Chalo koi baat nahi main tumhe detail mein samjha detha hoon waise bhi tum jaisi ladkiyon ka dimag toh bus uche logo ko apne bholibhali aadayuon mein phaasne mein kaam aata hai iske alawa tumhara dimag toh kisi bhi kaam ka nahi [Fine let me explain u in detail as it is your tiny brain can work only in making plans for trapping big and famous men otherwise your brain is useless how can I expect u to understand such an important issue so easily]

Geet clutched the end of her saree pallu tightly as if trying to gain the strength to hear his accusations

Yes she was ready for it as she wanted to see the reward that Maan gives her for her unconditional and pure love

Maan: Kya hua kuch jawab nahi hai tumhare paas yun toh humesha tumhari zabaan kaichi ki tarah chalthi rehthi hai aaj kya hua chup kyun ho? [What's the matter why aren't u replying in normal circumstances your tongue works like a scissor always going on and on but why have u taken the aid of silence today?]

Maan: Oh wait let me guess chori pakdi gayi naa shayad issliye par Geet tum toh kafi umdha actress ho chalo bahao apne magarmach k aasu [Oh wait let me guess u r silent as ur plan failed but Geet u r a brilliant actress common show me a trailor of ur crocodile tears]

Geet looked at him in disbelief

Maan: Nahi Geet ye expression toh galat hai mere dil ko tasali tumhare unn paani se bhi safeed aasuyon ko dekhkar milegi chalo ek bund toh gira doh achha achha samaj gaya tumhe shayad glycerine ki zarurat hogi haina wait let me search for it [No Geet this is the wrong expression I would be satisfied only if I see those dilute water drops which are more white than the normal water dripping from your eyes common drop your tears oh wait I think u require glycerine just a sec I will get it for u]

Maan gets the bottle of glycerine with him

Maan: Ye lo [Here it is]

Geet gave him a disgusting look

Maan: Kya hua nahi chahiye thik hai waise bhi ye glycerine ki bundhe tumhare aakhon mein jaakar kalankit ho jaayegi aur main nahi chahta k meri kisi bhi cheez mein koi dhoka ya fareeb chupa ho [What? Don't need it? Okay as u wish I am happy that these drops won't get contaminated by falling in your eyes as I hate to keep any such thing with me which is full of fraud and deception]

Geet's face was reflecting pain

Maan: Aww' Geet Handa kitni bholi bhali surat hai tumhari par iss bholi bhali adaa se ye MSK pigal ne nahi wala par haan tumne jo acting ki hai uske liye toh tumhe Oscar milna chahiye abhi toh mere paas wo award nahi hai par tumhe main kuch aur zarur de saktha hoon [Oh Geet Handa u have a very innocent face but guess what the mighty MSK is not going to melt in front of this fake innocence but yes the acting that u have done serves u an Oscar right now I don't have this award but I can definetly give u something else]

He picks up some roses that Geet had kept while decorating the room and removes the flower from them

He gets the stem which was full of thorns and forcefully places Geet's fingers on top of it

Her fingers were badly injured and blood started oozing out from them but Geet made sure that she will not make her pain evident in front of this monster

Maan removed his hand from her hand and all the stems land on the floor

Maan: Tumhe kya laga Geet mujhe tumhare plan ka pata nahi chalega? [What did u feel I will not come to know about your plan?]

Geet's face was expressionless; her heart was already shattered into millions of pieces but she wanted to see his true colours today as slowly her fear of losing someone was getting diminished

Maan: Tum toh mujhse bhi gaigusri nikli Geet maine tumhe apna dost samjha aur tumhe apna plan ka hissa banaya are maine sirf khud ka nahi balki tumhara bhi fayda dekha aur tumne apni ghatiyaan chal mujhpar chal di [U r so cheap Geet I considered u as my friend and shared my plan with u and made u a partner in my plan of gaining profit but u tried to take advantage of the situation]

Maan: Meri sharafat dekho maine tumhe saaf saaf keh diya k main publicity k liye ye drama kar raha hoon aur tumne meri jhoothi care karne ka drama iss liye kiya taaki main tumhare pyar k jaal mein phas jaau aur tumhara future secure ho jaaye [It was my goodwill that I clearly mentioned my plan of gaining publicity from this marriage drama but u tried to bestow your fake care so that I get trapped in your false love and u can secure ur future without any fear]

Geet never knew that Maan will compare her divine love with such a low act of publicity and secure future

The pieces of her heart were joining back as she knew that her love is not weak and moreover she could never love such a cheap man

Maan: Par afsoos Geet tumhari chaal ab nahi chalnewali are tumhare jaise ladkiyon ko toh main jeb mein lekar ghoomtha hoon aur waise bhi agar humari shaadi itni publicity gain kar sakthi hai toh humare taalaak ki baat ko toh double publicity milegi [But alas Geet your trick did not work as it is I carry numerous girls like u in my pocket and I feel if the news of our marriage can gain so much publicity then 100% the news of our breakup will give us double publicity]

Maan: Chalo ab mujhe ghurna bannd karo aur phatafat inn kaagaz par sign kardoh waise bhi tum jaise aafat k saath main aur nahi reh saktha [Common stop looking at me like this and sign these papers quietly so that I can get my freedom back as it is I can't live with a witch like u]

Maan: Aur haan agar chaho toh tum gidgida sakthi ho infact mere pair bhi pakadlo aur apne aasu se mere jhoothe bhigodoh par mera faisla nahi badlega issliye mera keemti waqt barbaad karne se achha hai meri baat chup chap maanlo [Oh yes if u want u can start pleading in front of me, u can even touch my feet and drain my shoes with your tears but let me make it clear all these things won't affect me so it would be good if u don't waste my time and do as I say]

Geet was silent as she wanted to see the extent to which Maan can go to prove that indeed he is a cheap man

She knew what her decision should be but before giving him any reply she wanted an answer to only one question and that answer would be enough for her to decide if this man deserves her or not

Geet decided to ask him the question

Geet: Humare beech kal raat jo kuch bhi hua wo kya tha Maan? [What do feel about yesterday night's events Maan? How will u explain the moments that we shared yesterday night?]

A shiver ran through his spine he had not expected this question from Geet

There was some force which was stopping him from answering this question but finally his selfish and ruthless nature dominated this force

He closed his eyes and with trembling lips he uttered

Maan: Wo ek kamzoor lamha tha jo jawani k josh mein bheh gaya [It was a weak moment which occurred due to a lust that materialized between 2 youths]

He started sweating badly as soon as he uttered those words

He was expecting to hear some sobs from Geet and was trying to prepare himself mentally to give a proper answer to the upcoming emotional drama

He was waiting; but he could still not hear her cries or her pleadings

He did not understand the reason behind her silence he turned around and got the biggest shock of his life

Geet was signing the divorce papers without any hesitation; her hands were running smoothly not even for a second did her fingers tremble

She removed the documents from the file

Geet: Mr. MSK tumhare hoth kaap rahe the mere sawal ka jawab dethe waqt par mere haath ek baar bhi nahi kaape tumhare iss divorce paper par sign karte waqt jaante ho kyun? [Mr. MSK ur lips were trembling while answering my question but my fingers were not shaky while signing these documents do u know why?]

She threw the divorce papers on the face of Maan giving him numerous slaps without even touching him

Maan touched his cheek and gave an angry glare to Geet but today the fire in his eyes failed as they saw a tigress who was all ready to pounce on him

PRECAP: Geet's reply 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Piyaaa... Sachi me.. It was a superb update... Hayeee Meri sherni Geet... Uff Cant wait for next jab maan ko muh tod jawab milega... Hehe.. U knw I was excited that prem's entry will be soon nd so I never gave look to maan but now feeling like to give more galiya's to him... ANd I m soo gona love the next update with my sherni geet... U knw u make charaters alive infront of us...

Luv ya sooo much... Hugs to u...
Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
maan deserved this...
hope geet will not get weak...
loved the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
only one sentnce for maan..where is my talwar...he is going to cry blood tears😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb.
geet did the right thing by signing those divorce papers.
maan is so cheap he deserve that.
now eagerly waiting to know geet's reply.
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Posted: 13 years ago
u proved me right piya now be ready to get slaps from me
i told u not to end the update in ur tease but u ended it there
now what punishment i should give u 😡

by the way the uodate was really mindblowing

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