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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Just read all three parts together. Nice ending for the story. ok here's some critical feedback I dont see ASR's character just giving khushi up without a fight. i know you were working it from the 'i love you enough to let you go' but somehow i could see him doing this...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: warriorprincess
Just read all three parts together. Nice ending for the story. ok here's some critical feedback I dont see ASR's character just giving khushi up without a fight. i know you were working it from the 'i love you enough to let you go' but somehow i could see him doing this...

naina

Your take sounds really cute (of Arnav), I know what you mean. I think Arnav wouldn't give her up without a fight either, but it she let him go he would be broken. That attack was meant to be his unintentional pull to bring her back and she falls right into the trap 😳😳

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sanjeewi15

@sanjeewi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

this is great... today i saw this post... omg it's sooo beautiful... cnt u add another part to it... though it says the end at the end, dil aur dimaag wants more...

really beautiful... :)

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LuckyNiki

@LuckyNiki

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Awesome... Just loved it...

Was sure u wont be heartless and allow khushi marry some1 else bt loved the way u wrote it...

ESPECIALLY wen arnav did nt realize dat khushi was referring him s her husband 😊

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: preetihere
Awww u sweet softie...we want him to repent but we dont want Khushi to dump him !!
Lovely lovely i love Khushi's "new" husband...

Although i am sending u my doctor's bill-same problem like Arnav, hyperventilation, high blood pressure with no previous history -full blown panic attack when i saw ur brace ur heart in the title!

ok 😆. you are one creative reviewer👏

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Your take sounds really cute (of Arnav), I know what you mean. I think Arnav wouldn't give her up without a fight either, but it she let him go he would be broken. That attack was meant to be his unintentional pull to bring her back and she falls right into the trap 😳😳

I'm a sucker for happy endings, so no more arguments from me. 😳😳

p.s. can I please have Raihaan...he's cute!!

naina

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

There have been so many requests for an epilogue and family reactions that I have decided to finally write an epilogue. But not before you guys see my best works 😉 because this was nothing compared to my other works...

If you liked this heartbreaking SS, then you will love Avenging Angel. It has 11 parts but had been a hit with readers because of its grand touch (hint). Links are all at the bottom of each part. Please read and let me know what you think:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2796709/ss-part-1-my-avenging-angel-khushi-kicking-ass

Avenging Angel continues with Anjali-Imad and looks at Arhi's happy marriage and Khushi's new profession - matchmaking. It has everything from heartbreak to hot scenes. Please check it out. I just ended it today. Also, don't forget to comment. I have too many readers who like to read for 15 minutes and can't even be bothered to click the like button after I spend 5 hours writing each part. It is very sad as a writer to write for so long only to even get "nice" or "update soon." I just wrote for hours and I get two words, it's sad.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2927216/ss-anjali-imad-arhi-part7-p81-tech-probs-pg-88

Epilogue to this coming soon.

Mary.

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mayad

@mayad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

I only just discovered your story board! It is spellbinding! I held my breathe when he left the night before the wedding a broken man! Did not think she had it in her to actually accept remarrying!

Please do pm me on your stories! I cannot believe the talent there is in this forum! Thank you so much!👏

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Actually for a while now, I have been waiting eagerly to read your Avenging Angel story so I'll be reading that very soon.

And I do appreciate your hard work, they are all beautiful to me:)

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waterunder11

@waterunder11

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Oh yay you have the links up. I am really bad with finding ffs on the site. It saves me so much time and its easier if I have them all in one place. I read this ss - khushi's new husband. I will read the avenging angel next soon and then the one after that!

Hey even if people dont comment or like, trust me they read. If they dont then its their loss, theyre missing out on some good stuff. I am always in awe after I read the stories on here. I cant write properly for the love of god! You guys have got alot creativity! The time you are spending on it, is not going to waste because the end is great! Good job! And write more! :D

Oh i did get your pm for anjali imad btw...

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