Reminiscences - A SwaRon FF

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Wowwwiiieee nishu..:) that's so naughty...;P swayam itta naughtyhi accha lagta hai... Maiko sadotra(as in swayam's lang. Sad n rota hua:P) swayam accha nai lagta..:( i know kisi ko bhi nai lagta...:P

Shar ne apne teddy ko swayam ka nickname diya hai...:) wow... So much like a typical gal who falls in luv..:):D

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Swayam climbed to sharon house 😳 i loved this naughty swayam 😉 n then mr.bed talk 🤣 hahaha amazing.swayam slept in sharon's lap,then she plays with his hair awww super cute.update it soon

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Awesome...loved it...awww he slept in her lap

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shiv_sis_square

@shiv_sis_square

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Hi Nish,
Well I have been a silent reader since Letters.. but now finally i have made an account. Your writing is fabulous. I really dont have words to say how much i love ur writing.

Coming to the update, obviously I loved it and being a Swayam fan i would say i love the naughty one. Its just a pleasure reading ur work.
So this is for the amazing writing 👏👏👏👏

Waiting for the next update soon

Shivika

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

I'm in love with your FF!

👍🏼

Yammy...that was cho cute!! 😊

Update the next one soon!!!!! 😃

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

This chapter has a ring to it, Nish. It's very nicely written, even with Hindi dialogue, I actually find this piece of work enjoyable. I am not much into Hindi, though I have to speak it on daily basis, no choice. Therefore, you got issues with Hindi grammar, I can see that. 😈

As for the story itself, you have it set. The best thing about what you write is that you narrate it animatedly and it seems as though you're really enjoying whatever it is that you write. That's awesome. This one was the best read in the chapter so far, well done. =)

Thanks for all the PMs, I'll try to be more active in commenting.

Love,

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Sw: Haan.. Main toh college ka Majnu tha..

Ti: Aur dadi Laila..

Sw: Yeh sirf mere alava sab ki laila thi..

hahaha🤣🤣🤣

gr8 update👏👏

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

so cute... swayam chori-chippe climbing 2 sharon room n confusing d already confused poor soul! nyc...

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Cute part nish!

I had a huge smile all through this part..!

I liked the naughty Swayam and the way they were talking to Mr. Bed was hilarious and then when Sharon tells her teddy that Swayam is just jealous of him, lol..!

I liked the last line, ye mera ilava sabki laila thi..!

update asap!

thanks for the pm