Reminiscences - A SwaRon FF - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing udpate nish and dont doubt urself u made this chapter sweet and cute even if it was not long
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update nish...👏

aww the way swayam calmed sharon was really cute... they r going to prom together..wow...can't wait... 😃

update soon... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
woooww...this is really awesome..thanx a lot fr the om dea..plss pm me wenever u update...its just awesome...woooww swaron date😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nish am a big mad of ur written dr...
i really like this story line dr...
pls ll u keep it like this way if u never mind...
but ur writting skill was awesome dr...
really i loved it tooo...
i love u tooo nish...
update lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
n dis is super cute mannn,,,...!!dey r telling der story to der grand daughter..!!!lovely concept...!!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update :D
loved the part, when sharon asks swayam to be her date.😃

i really think it is as good as letters.
and yeah, i also love all that romantic stuff hehehe :p
plz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏 update soon.and thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 4:

Sh: In my defense, One I was too preoccupied with work and two guys should ask girls out!

Sw: Hey no fair!! You were simply too busy to even bother if a meteor fell on my head!

Sh: No I was not.. I even noticed how many times you saw your phone.. 79 times in a day!!

Sw: No I didn't!!

Ti: Woah!!! Do you guys always fight like this?!

Sh: He always starts it..

Sw: No I don't!!

Ti: Are you guys gonna continue the story or not? -.-

Sh: Yea.. So where were we?

Ti: PROM!!

Sh: Wow!! That day was just too hectic..

*FLASHBACK*

Sharon was running frantically in her Minnie mouse PJs inside her Closet.. Her closet!! WOOO!! It was bigger than the room..

Sh: Shit shit shit!!! What am I going to wear?

She chooses three dresses and puts it on her bed..

Sh: All the three are so pretty.. I cant choose.. Mummy yeh sab mere saath hi kyun hota hai!! I know Idea!!

She closed her eyes.. and pointed her finger at the gowns..

Sh:Inky pinky ponkey father had a donkey.. Donley died father cried Inkey pinky Pon… Key!!

She slowly peeked through one eye and sighed in relief.. It had been her favourite.. She took the dress and went to get ready...

Meanwhile,

Sw: Casual or Formal?

SM: Formal..

Sw: Mom are you sure?

SM: Damn sure.. Mera beitha hamesha Formal main hi accha lagtha hai..

Sw: Toh baaki sab main bura? *Puppy dog face*

SM: *Pinches his cheeks* Boo you look good even with only yours boxers!!

Sw: Maaa!! *whining*

SM: Chalo now go and get ready!!

Sw: *Hugs his mom* I love you ma..

SM: Me too Betha.. Now go..

Swayam got out of his car and went and knocked the door to be greeted by Sharon's maid, he assumed. She ushered him inside and asked him to wait.. He was looking around the house and gazing at the beautiful paintings that hung on the wall when he suddenly heard footsteps..

He looked up and could have almost had a heart attack as he saw the most beautiful person in the entire world walk down the stairs wearing a Beautiful Silver bodiced gown with a baby blue bottom flowing elegantly from her thin hips and a huge Black Bow of the back.. She had curled her Hair and had made it into a messy bun by a sapphire clip with hair falling on her face making her look sexier than ever.. Her eyes were glowing as she had highlighted them perfectly with a subtle silverlining, her lips were a shade of baby pink and she looked nothing less than an Angel!

Sh: Makkiyan pakadne ke koshish kar rahe ho kya?

Sw: Huh?.. uh Noo!! Sorry!

Sh: Someone is looking Dashing.. Black suits you!

Sw: Noone is going to be looking at me..

Sh: And why do you say that?

Sw: Because I am taking an Angel with me..

Sh: Swayam tu bhi na? Ab chale?

Swayam gave his hand and Sharon entwined hers with it and they both walked out gracefully.. Swayam was a perfect gentle man and opened the Door for Sharon and he got in and started to drive..

Sh: Hope everything goes fine.. what if something gets messed up?!

Sw: Kuch nahi hoga Sharon!! Oh by the way I got you something..

Swayam bends back and takes a white rose and gives it to her..

Sh: That's really sweet of you..

She took the Rose, Cut the stem and kept it in her hair.. And they had reached the Venue! It looked so Grand and perfect.. Both the sides of the building were decorated with Red Lanterns and A red carpet was spread.. Swayam took Sharon's hands and walked down the carpet and they entered the Hall..

Magnific would be an understatement.. The place was decorated with Small twinkling lights and Tables with white cloth and Candles and Flowers were placed in the Corners of the Leaving a Huge Dance floor.. Everyone were already Seated..

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Thanks For the Comments Guys.. From this Update Im gonna start replying.. Too busy with College and stuff.. I know Chotu Part.. Sorry :( Enjoy though!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update but too short 😲 ...Next time UPDATE A LONG ONE 😊 .swaron at prom night waiting for it Update it asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update nish.
thanks for the pm.
It wasd a lovely update.
Thanks for the pm.
Sharon's description was lovely one.
I loved it fully.

Update next part soon.
All the best .


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