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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#651

Awww!!! Rae! This was so adorable!!! but the end has me all "Oh no" wala stricken expression on my tired face!! Ayaan. Haye. you know, I thought Arnav was the ONLY character i'd be so crazy about. But reading your story. I'm kinda falling for Ayaan's character too. Because Ayaan is a milder, more sensible version of Arnav and Khushi combined. BUT when it comes to the love of his life, He instantly takes up the fighter attitude!! I love how he said ,

Shhh...main hoon na! Ekdum calm down! Main kuch nahin hone doonga...I will not let anything happen, baby...just relax...I know sweetheart, I know...par kuch nahin hoga..

What a beauty. You've made me love these characters too Rae. I've always been a sucker for such protective romance! and you somehow write things that end up DIRECTLY touching my heart! You're a genius Rae. You ought to write a book! I'd buy it PAKKA!

Loved this! And i hope you update soon ? =D 11th seems kaafi door nahi? =D

Keep writing my friend, and keep touching people's lives!

-mahrukh

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

What the!!!! she SLEPT , SERIOUSLY!!! that was hilarious 🤣 🤣 Poor Ayaan , there he was pouring his heart out proposing to this girl and she dozes off 😆 😆 Perfect !! Loved the teasing Ayaan part , so her parents are getting her married without her approval ? What the - which century are these people from... waiting to see what happens next . Loved the update 👍🏼👏

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purplepixie

@purplepixie

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Oh no!!! Please dnt scare me with such notes!!😒 i have been waiting for your updates since a long time!!! At one point i even thought that u must not have been well!!! please please continue and complete the ss!! please!!!

as for the update...such an unexpected answer to a proposal!! And the best part is ayaan gives as much importance to sama's family as he gives his own...

I know i hav already requested you before but i really luv akshay and priyanka...n u also gave us a glimpse into their story...but i feel their story is different than all normal luv stories...it is unique,different and beautiful...so if you could us a proper detailed account of their story...i knw its a lot to ask you...bt if u hav tym plz atleast think abt it!!!

coming back to the story of our dear ayaan...i hope he doesnt hav to go through many obstacles to get the luv of his life...bt m sure the entire raizada clan is right beside him!!😊

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

You Meanie Rae...making my Arnav Jr. suffer like that!!!😡 Bechara...its gonna be a long journey to Dehradoon for him...plz be nice along the way!!😉 Maybe a nice dream...??😃

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

Completely opposite of what I was thinking!

Bechara Ayaan and his teasing family wouldn't let the opportunity go😆

Oh how much I love this family, thanks Rae for writing this wonderful SS🤗

Yes, you are right! I never thought of her family, too focused on the Raizada's.

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

You finally come back and drop this bomb on us?!

But this was a great update! When Ayaan proposed but noticed Sama was already asleep that was adorable.

All in all it was such a sweet chapter!

Continue soon :)

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

He poured his heart out ... and she fell asleep. 🤣 Fantastic update. Loved this line: "Aynu...itna boring proposal tha?" Of course if Ayaan wants a love like the one his parents share then there have to be some complications along the way. 😉

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Damn man! The girl is getting married, I'd like to see how Ayan reacts!
Btw, my little bro's name is ayan too! Sometimes I feel I'm reading my brothers diary or something!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#659

She fell asleep?! What? Poor Ayaan. OMG! Nooo. She can't get married. I can't wait to read what the Raizada's will do to get their bahu! Awesome update!