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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: psarada

Itna choota update. How can you do it man. I was waiting for the update and you have turned into the IPKKND creatives just tantalizing but never giving the viewers the ultimate thing they want. So bherry bherry angry on that. Next time do update a longer part. Okay. Coming to the update I want to see the next step of Aynu and Sama. Hmm where did he take her now? Does he want to propose to her again for a second time. Interesting point and waiting for the next update.


Lol! They are much much much more evil than me! 😆

I wanted to make this update longer but I am telling you it told me in this strange way that "DONT YOU ADD ANYTHING MORE TO ME!" and I couldnt go against it. :p

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: appy_12

Aww! Rae.. i know I keep telling you that I love the family and I love it when they're there. But not this time! Na-ah! :P

This was pure Ayaan-Sama! And it was beautiful!

The way Sama doubted him. No relation is perfect. If Ayaan-Sama's was, then I would've written it down as another one of those classic love stories that do not have a speck of dirt on them! But she doubted him, which is oddly comforting! :P :D

The way he comforted her.. There's only one reaction here. I. Want. Someone. Like. That. Ok, that was too long, ruining the effect, but you get my point! :P :)

They're going somewhere.. Ahan! Where?? :P

Great update Rae! :) Loved loved loved it! :D


Exactly. I thought about it and decided that she will be a little wary just like all of us would be in such a situation and Ayaan being Ayaan would comfort her and thats what I went with...glad you liked it. :)

Lol! I hope you get your own Ayaan very soon! :)

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Ayaan was amazing! The "What the" was hilarious. He is Arnav's son, after all. lol Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Where the hell are boys like Ayaan? I loved the update.. The desperation,the need, the comfort.. Everything was perfect. Thanks for the pm. I'll add the comments to IF later..
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy...i have read ur ff in one go...its beautiful...can u plz add m to ur pm list...i dying to read the 12th part...plzzz.:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
Now thats wat I call revenge I cudnt stop larfin.
Poor ayaan n sama were so upset n scared
I wonder how the family will make it up with them.Continue soon
Thanks for the pm :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ch 11 -> Raizadas are crazy bunch…kinda thought A/K would try to have chat w/Sama's parents but Aynu is right…A shouldn't taken a part in the joke…

Poor Sama & Aynu…so much misery for 2 days…

-Sona

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poonam786

Ooops.. Just saw your note about copying blog comments here.. Here you go, my lovely..

Update!! Wheee!! Back in a bit..

My bachcha says What the'.. ''.. '''.. '''..

Sorry, I just needed a minute for my brain to start functioning again, and my heart to slow down'

LOL! I knew all of you would be like this after reading about a hot, sexy AASR! ;) :D

Beautiful, Rae' Their love in this chapter was like a solid presence.. You could almost touch it' When Ayaan cups Sama's face and tells her he didn't know.. Wow.. Shades of protective ASR..

Yep, Ayaan baap pe gaya hai in romance. ;) :D

Yeah, right now they just need to be with one another.. Away from the madness.. Just to find their balance again.. Bring their lives back into equilibrium.. Some quiet, just to sit in and bask in each other's presence..

Yep. <3 Or maybe...hmmm...the possibilities. ;) :D

Sigh..


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

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I am late, Rae but have had a particularly stressful day!

So what better than Ayaan and Sama to make me smile and forget everything

The overwhelming sense of relief that must have been coursing through the young pair of lovers was so palpable throughout this update. Even if the situation was a prank, even if nothing was serious, even if they are upset, the fact that they are now together forever with nobody and nothing to threaten their future must have been liberating and you brought that out so well

Not all tears are tears ofsadness. This time Sama proved it. Even though Ayaan hates them, this time it was nothing but pent up fear and anxiety finally giving way!

Beautifully penned as always!

I wonder what next


Awww! Glad AySa could help. :)

Yep, it was a hug of relief from desperation, pain, hurt, fear...

Thank You, Meera! :)

You should... ;) :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains

I loved the embrace right at the start of the chapter. I mean, she was angry, and then she just hugs him with full force, with him stumbling back, I could totally imagine it. Great job there!:)


This chapter was high on emotions, the relief, the desperation, when she told him she loved Ayaan, was wonderfully written:)

Beautiful chapter!:)


Thank You so much! :)

And the hug was inspired by ArHi! :D

Glad you liked it.

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