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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#1051

Originally posted by: hkanchiuk
i did post in numbers of time and been liking ur all updates but i guess i also count on the silent reader. anyways always loved ur updates and feel sorry tht i cld not read further more. cheers

Hey!

Actually I sent out the PMs only to the people who commented on the last update here (Chapter 10) and hence put up the note so that others, like you, could get to know too. Sending you the link. :)

Edited - Your PM inbox is full.

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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Komal Koppikar

@sameerakoppikar

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1052

okay i feel sad that i cant read it further although i liked ur tenth update okay bye

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1053

Ooops.. Just saw your note about copying blog comments here.. Here you go, my lovely..

Update!! Wheee!! Back in a bit..

My bachcha says What the….. …….. ……….. ………..

Sorry, I just needed a minute for my brain to start functioning again, and my heart to slow down…

Beautiful, Rae… Their love in this chapter was like a solid presence.. You could almost touch it… When Ayaan cups Sama's face and tells her he didn't know.. Wow.. Shades of protective ASR..

Yeah, right now they just need to be with one another.. Away from the madness.. Just to find their balance again.. Bring their lives back into equilibrium.. Some quiet, just to sit in and bask in each other's presence..

Sigh..

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bookadict303

@bookadict303

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1054

Could you please pm me the blog site? Thanks!!!

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Josupra

@Josupra

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1055

Angelteen.. You didnt send me the link for part11 even after requesting 3 times hence did not comment on part11.. If you send this link will read and comment.. Since I liked the story a lot, I am asking you one more time.. Its upto you whether to send thd link or not.

Btw, I started reading SSs only recently as I got sometime now, so found this work only after part10 is posted.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1056

Reply:

I am late, Rae but have had a particularly stressful day!

So what better than Ayaan and Sama to make me smile and forget everything

The overwhelming sense of relief that must have been coursing through the young pair of lovers was so palpable throughout this update. Even if the situation was a prank, even if nothing was serious, even if they are upset, the fact that they are now together forever with nobody and nothing to threaten their future must have been liberating and you brought that out so well

Not all tears are tears ofsadness. This time Sama proved it. Even though Ayaan hates them, this time it was nothing but pent up fear and anxiety finally giving way!

Beautifully penned as always!

I wonder what next

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#1057

I loved the embrace right at the start of the chapter. I mean, she was angry, and then she just hugs him with full force, with him stumbling back, I could totally imagine it. Great job there!:)

This chapter was high on emotions, the relief, the desperation, when she told him she loved Ayaan, was wonderfully written:)

Beautiful chapter!:)

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shermy

@shermy

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1058

You are withholding your story from silent readers and those who don't comment, that's perfectly fine and your choice but do once think, not everyone is an extrovert, not everyone is comfortable enough to comment and how is a comment of 'hey, great update' different from a like? isn't it pointless? So why should such people get the link and the silent readers/likers don't? Especially when they are requesting you for it? Doesn't that tell you they like it and they read it? After all, the comments are not earning you any money.

you would have read a lot of books in your life. Did you call up every author and thank her or comment on her book? You might say that the author is paid for it but it was your decision to write the story here, knowing that all and sundry will read, so shouldn't you have posted the story on your blog right from the start or from the 2nd chapter based on who commented on the first? Why now when people wait for your update only to be told about a blog they can't access?

It's not fair to the people who are now not getting a PM to have got hooked onto the story and then being told this. Don't say we don't take precious time out to comment because we take precious time out to read your story, we like it and we are even requesting you for the link. That should tell you how much one likes your writing.

also, it would be courteous if you stopped posting your updates here and just continue with PMs cos people open the thread hoping maybe you posted the next chapter here and instead get to read confusing spoiler comments.