SS: Incomplete (Without You) - Page 51

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Bibliobibulus thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.. Anjali is a sweetheart.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!!!liuvd it to the max!!!!eagerly waitin for the next!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I cnt xpress to u in words hw happy I am to b able to comment first on dis particular update😳..its d final chapter to one of my fav story on IF..n its also d first tym dat ne1 has dedicated their update to me😊 m so touched n humbled wid your gesture, n i tk it as an honour😊 i thank u frm d core of my heart😊!!
nw lets gt back to d update😊
first of all i must say dat i was shocked n dssapointed at d same tym to c dat dis is d final chapter of dis ss..its one of my fav..i wantd it to go on..bt i guess since u r d writer u wud knw bttr..n there's no point in unnecessary stretching..so i undrstnd ur pov..bt i wud really mss dis one😔
u gave dis ss a proper ending..arnav n khushi got back 2gthr..resolved their prblms n dffrnces..cleared their msundrstndngs n opened their hearts to each othr,finally..m vry elated😊
u showed dat hw just three words cn chng d world of two people..evrythn else ceases to exist wen these three words r spoken at d ryt tym wid honesty😊 lovely depiction of this..
"Once is enough. I trust you."--ah..'I trust you..anothr three words dat has d capability to chng d lives of people..trust..dnt mk me start abt dis..trust n love goes hand-in-hand..wid one comes d othr..n both these words has d potential to mk or break a person..i truly loved this two lines.
in d beginning of dis update i undrstood dat khushi secretly wantd arnav to stop her..her subcnscious mind already forgave him..n in her heart she wantd to gv him a chnce, she wanted to stay wid him, she wanted him to cnfess..mayb in reality she nvr was angry wid him..it was just hurt, pain n dssapointmnt..
i dnt knw hw much i cud undrstnd ur update..bt i thoroughly enjoyed it!..u dd a vry good job, as usual..
keep writing!
n dnt 4gt to send me pm wen u write smthn new😊
tk cre!
Edited by gunjanmkj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great work laavanya, hats off to you
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JohnySolomonRaj

Great work laavanya, hats off to you




Thank you johny :) Thanks so much !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gud work...Cant express anything feeling rly sad that u finished this story
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet ending. i just love happy ever after... Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHHH I'm going to miss reading this!!!!! LOVED the ending you did it perfectly!!!!! Thank you for the PM!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update !!!
Bit sad that your SS is finished 😭
but I guess it was the better to do ^^

keep PMing me for your next work 😃
we keep in touch !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the whole ss.. cute end..

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