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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Beautifully written...!!
😭😭...cant see them separated!!!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

just read part 2

i don't think i want to read part 3

i'm moved to tears n the song u were listening to while writing is digging the hole m in deeper

u better have a miracle in prt 3

🤔

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Awesome

Loved it loadz <3

OMG sooo sad I literally teared up :'(

Update soon

Umuahhh

xoxoxoxo

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Tears in heaven

Arnav n Khushi gave me sthg to believe in..glad 2 know there can be sthg

great job Ridz!!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRsJlAJvOSM[/YOUTUBE]

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

I just read this SS and the tears came out!

How eautiful and emotional<3

I can't believe she died, And she went to her Buaji<3

Extremely emotional!

Your an amazing writer!

Jheesze. This was Fantabulous (Fantastic and Fabulous combined)

Thank god for your signature!. 😛 (It say your index 😆)

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PriyaLove

@PriyaLove

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

That was heartbreaking and absolutely beautiful.

Anjali has guts in this one, I'm glad. She took revenge on him and even though Anjali does not really have a backbone she deserves someone good to protect her.

Both Arnav and Khushi died. That made it better, after a separation where they can both heal they become ready to see each other once again.

Truly beautiful. I loved it so much I'm in tears! 😭

Edited by PriyaLove - 13 years ago

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

i have a severe migraine now with all the crying ive done, all the hurting at every beautiful, heartbreaking part.. The mamu part and talking to the stars and a child part is what i couldnt bear and had to stop reading 4a while. Something alot like this happened to me. But it began while we were both alive.. Anyway, iknow that random line didnt make sense but i was touched by ur Os, u write beautifully.. Ihope u keep writing. This is all very decent and very real.. If uknw wht i mean... Me,not gud with words, im messing my post up, arent I? Anyway keep up the brilliant writing and expressing. Will keep on reading ur works as I go.. To be able to write that well, u must have felt sm pain too, at some point... So i pray u be happy always.. Do tc

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sunshine23

@sunshine23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Hi, i just joined IF and came across your short story, i just wanted to say that it was absolutly beautiful. I could feel the raw anguish that Arnav felt, and the peace that they both felt when they met each other again. It was really good and I thank you for it. :)

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

This ss is beautifully written. I loved the serenity in the last part. Poor arnav had to live with the guilt but managed to be reunited with her in the end.