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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
thanx dear for the update after a long time this is too goood trishna plan failed nw waiting for maaneet romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
awesome update
poor maan jealous bcoz of ridim😆
trishna😡
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
nice part.
n how will maan understand his feeling jab ki usse love ka L bhi nai pata...
omg he is getting J of ridim... maan she is hr sis n alos so small...
loved dat he avoided trishna...
drud ka asar hone laga...ab geet ka kya hoga??????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
superb...
Maan J of riddhim...choti bache se J...agar kisi aur ke saath dekh lia toh kya hoga...

Maan changing...bqlleee///...
Hate tat trishna...so cheao thinking just to fill her desirei just hate her...uska khisa chapter bandh kar de...
maan n geet romance hoyeee oyee...me waiting jalsi dena...
warna all again vil start mah cribbings n dhamki...
waiting...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
sure.thnkss fr all ur cooommntts nd vanshi zarrooorrr uss trishna ooopsss devil😡 ka chap close kar doongi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
nice one...😊
Hate that Trishna...😡😡
Maan feeling J of Ridim...🤣
Wtng for the next update...😊
Jst hope so our Maaneet realise their feelings 2wards each other very soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
REALLY SHORT UPDATE... BUT HOPE K NXT PASSSIONATE 😳ONE WUD B A BIT LONGER...
ON D WHOLE NICE UPDATE SO MANU HAS STARTED DEVELOPING FEELING😉 BUT NOT YET REALISED IT...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
strange love
[ Maaneet SS ]

Part 10...

geet left to bring his coffee...till thn maan had confrted himslf in his bed...

geet->umm... ur coffeee...
till she came maan had lost himslff...he was totally in tht nasha state lolzz...

maan holdedd the coffeee kept it aside thn holded her hand nd pulled her near...geet directly fall on hiss chest...

geet ws nt knwing wt is happeing bt thn also sh likd it...she had lost herslf wen she saw his desirable nd passionate eyess...

geet-> maaan...
befre she could cont...maan removed her flicksss wich wer locking his view to her face...to make her confrtablee...enough he holded her waist lift her up nd made her sit on him...

he just digged his head on her neck nd started cryingg...geeet fltt veyr badd frm her heart... his tearss wer riping her apart...she ws breakinggg...her heart wss shatteering dowwn...he ws nw becoming restless she wants to take his in her armss nd kiss his evry tear ...she wanted to sooth his pain...nd evnthough she wanted to knw the reason why he's cryingG??? soo she cupped his ace...

geet->[till thn tearss wer frmed in her eyess...] wat happndd?? aap kyun ro rhe ho??

maan-> geet i am sorry...

geet was damn shock to hear sorry./...she meant sorry sorry fr wat??
geet-> wat happn maaan aaap mujhe sorry kyun bol rhe ho...??

maan huged her closseee he crushd herr...in his harddd yet painfull hug...

maan-> geet m soorrryy main bahut bura hoon...mainne bahut galat kaam kiye hain bt mian krta b toh kyaa?? tum achanak se chali gayi vanshika maa bi achanak se chali gayi...ek pal mein sab kuch mujhsee chhinn gyaa...tumhaare jaane ke baad tumhe pta hia main kitna akela ho gya tha ...i ws soo laonee...!! nd thn tht accident... aftr tht accident i frgt u...bt thn also somewer i always flt something missing in my lifee...i always thought tht it mst b of my parentsss bt thn tht day i came to knw tht it ws u...i just cant live without u geet...

geet wasss likee aawwweee he loveess me sooo much??

[me-> urrfff guyss had any1 realiseddd tht maaan ki memory vaapas gayi urrfff jhaaliyon...ek aur baar maan ke diloguess read kro tab samajh ayegaa wat maan saidd./geet nd maan toh itne engrroosed hian tht thy didnt evn realised tht maan ki memory vaapas gayi...!!]

geet cupped his face again-> maan aapa mujhse itna pyaar krtey ho...??bt aap sorry kyun bol rhe ho?? mujhe kuch samajh ni aa rha...

maan-> geet vohh...
geed noodeeddd...
maan-> voh geet i had made love many tym's with lotss of gurls...!! [geet was now heell shockdd...she lft her handd...] ( maan holded her hand nd talkd to her ) geet bt sachii meri koi galti ni thi ussmien...tumhaare jaane ke baad main bahut akelaa aho gya thha...nd thn caz of tht accident i had lost myslff.i had lostt all my sansskaarss...mera yaaqqeen kroo maine kuch bi jaan boojh k ni kiyaa...mujhe laga i neede tht i need tht caz i ws feeling incomplete bt i had frgt tht it can b my need bt i can only feel complete wen i m with u...wen i talk to u...

u knwww wen u talk to mee i fltt my reason of living in this wrldd wsss succssful...

u knww wen u smilee wen u laughh my hearttt feele the peace wich i cant evn definee...or explain...

wen i saw u playing enjoying outsidee...wen i saw u sleepingg...it is likeee m top of the wrldd m the luckiest man to hav a gurl like u in my lifee geet...

[ me-> yes gurlss our msk our maan singh khurana i guiltyy..nd saying sorry 1st tymm to a gurll tht tooo his mishttyy isnt tht super duper cool... ]


geet didnt said anything just gt up frm thre nd stand near the windoww staring at the mooon...

maan was confusdd he thought she mst b needing some tymm... bt he can leave her like tht he too gt up nd stood near the windowww...

maan hugged her frm bacckkk nd said
maaan-> geet m sorryy i knw is a shock fr u bt plss mishty dnt b sad like this naa i cant see u like thisss i'll dieee...

tht ws it...tht wrd ''die'' brought geet back to reality... sheee covered his mouth with her palm nd higged him...

maaan hugged her bacck..

geeet-> dont u dare to say tht wrd again maan... hw cnu say u'll diee...wen ur heart beats inside me nd mine insde u hw can u diee maan...till i m alivee nothing can happn to u evn tht yamraaajj wud fear to take away frm u samjheee...nd ab ye fir se mat kehnaaa tht u'll diee othrwise i'll die the vry momnt maan...

maan cupped her face -> geet ssshhh...m sorrry i just meant tht i cnt see u like this if u r angry frm me thn fight with mee... thn beat mee...scold me bt dnt standd like this alonee tht tooo silently...it kill me frm inside...i didnt wanted to hurt u.. i just tld u all tht caz i dnt want to hide anything frm u...nd agar kisi relation ki shuruat[starting] hi jhooth se hoo toh voh relation kabi sucesful ni hota...ndd i dnt want tht too happn in my case...caz i knw tht i really love u i love u insanely i love u madly...i m an insanee lovee who is insanely in love with u...humaara pyaar aeisa hai naaa ki maut bi humien judaa krne se daregi...!! no1 cn seprate us geet..no11...

geet hugged him...
geet-> maaann... i m nt hurt...caz i undrstandd its nt ur fault its the fault of the tym/...i cn undrstand wt u mustb feeling tht tym...cazz i knw tht ws a diffrnt maan who ws nt minee...bt this is my maan who is mine nd jiss par sirf aur sirf geet ka haq hai...

maaann-> uunnhhuu [he noddeddd in no...leaving geet confusd...] maan par geet ka haq ni ...maan par maanki geet ka haqq hai...

his thosee beautiful lineesss brought a beautiful smile on her face... with teary eyess... maan sccooped her in his armss.!! nd made her lay down on the bed...

he thn layed down on bed beside herr...
geet-> maan...plss make me ur'ss ...u knw jiss din se mian aap sab ko chodke vahan se ayi hu naa tab se main ek bi din chaein se sukoon se ni so payi... plss main aaj aapki bahon mien sonaa chahti hu plss mujhe aaj sukkoon ki neeind de ddooo...


aawweee...its the first tym geet askd something frm his maan tht tooo soo cutely hw can he deny...


maan-> geet main abi tumhe tab taq apna ni bnaunga jab taq humaari shaaadi ni ho jaaai...

geet ws damn happy nd please to hear his ansss he respct her sooo much...

maan-> bt yaaa i cn fulfil ur 1 wisshhh

.he made her slip in his armm nd thn peck her foreheadd...he wsss awake till she slept peacefully...

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guddd morningg...!!


they gt up hearing a knock on the ddooorrr...



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sorry guysss aaj ke liye itna hii bt yaa kal kaa part itnaa shocking ho gaa naaa ththt u all will njoy it like anything.,2dy it ws emotional...nd 2morrooww it'll b fruulll off shcokinggg happiineesss...excitement nd a prt wich willl bring smilee on ur facess me suree...








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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
aweee
sooo sweet update
love the way maan tell everything to geet
love, respect, care maan have for geet just love it
love the way maan say maan par sirf maan ki geet ka hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Love the update...
sweetn superb...
geet trust n beileve on maan after maan saying her tat he had make love wid many girls...
thoda thoda emotional😭 bhi tha...
Maan n Geet ne confess kar lia
geet demanding maan to make her his n maan says only after marriage...Geet ke pyar ne toh maan ko sudhar dia...
gud morning ho gai ho toh kal jaldi se update de naah...
luving dis update...
Luv ya..,

PS: Letters ke size thode chota hai..cant c properly...size 4 kar de...

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